No-war Dauntless Story

by DivUrgAntDAUNTLESS

I know that the topic is used a lot, but I like reading these the most so I decided to take a shot at writing one. Four/Tris forever, everybody is alive, since the war never happened. Tad bit fluffy at times... ;) Thanks for reading! I do not own any characters in the story and all rights go to Veronica Roth, author of the fabulous Divergent trilogy.

2. Chapter 2

A/N: Hey! Well first off I just wanna say THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR READING AND ESPECIALLY REVIEWING! It really really means so much to me. Anyways, again, constructive criticism is GREATLY appreciated as this is my first FanFic. Ever. If I get some good feedback a new chapter will probably be posted shortly after this, after homework of course... Again please review even if its just something small or simple. It really does make my day. Thanks! XOXO

Tobias fingers something in his pocket.

TOBIAS POV **********

I nervously clear my throat. Is it the right time? What will she say? What if she says no? Then what will I do? I clear the negative thoughts out of my head. She will say yes. I love her. She loves me. I take a shaky deep breath and pull the small, velvety cube out of my jeans pocket. I flip the lid up without much effort revealing a dazzling 3 carat diamond ring. Tris gasps.

"Tris," My voice comes out squeaky and rough. I wince. God Tobias, keep it together. I run my sweaty palms down my leg and start over. "Tris, will you... marry me?" Her hands fly to her mouth and her bright eyes fill with tears. "I mean, if your not ready that's fine, I'll wait, no problem." I ramble nervously.

"No!" she exclaims "I mean yes, a million times yes, to getting married, no to waiting!" She laughs nervously, a wide grin spread across her beautiful face.

TRIS POV *******

Giddy laughter rises in my chest. I'm getting MARRIED! Tobias slides the ring onto my finger and the tears of joy I had been holding back slide down my cheeks. I glance at the ring glimmering in the moonlight, and wrap my arms around Tobias's neck. I lean in slowly until my soft lips just barely touch his. He wraps his strong arms around his waist and I lean in more to kiss him.

"Wait." He breathes. I pull back reluctantly. With that he starts climbing the ladder rungs. I follow but I can't contain my overflowing happiness. This is the best possible ending to a fight. Ever.

A/N: Second chapter... Check! I tried to include both point of views! Tell me if it worked or if I should keep them separate... New chapter will be up soon, this one was more of a filler, I kinda just wanted them to get engaged and get that out of the way! Thanks for reading and please review! XOXO