Hey, so this is just an update on my story!
I had written chapter 2 but somehow it got lost so now I have to re-write it! :(
Thanks for the one review I got but I really would love some more comments and critic on how the story is going and what is awesome and what I need to improve!
I am re-writing chapter 2 right now and it's the chapter where Raina meets the Doctor. It's probably going to get a lot better once the plot line is established. I'm working on better paragraph structure because the prologue and the first chapter was just one, long, probably annoying paragraph. It works that way I guess but it's neater to have paragraphs, you know?
anyway, thank you for taking the time and consideration for viewing my story! 47 views in 3 days is more than I could have ever hoped for! :)
I'm new to this website so I might not be the best writer ha
OH! and by the way, it's the tenth doctor that Raina will meet right now but I might change it to the 11th. I don't know. Comment what you think!
Thanks again!
~Timestrawberry
