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Here's the story! But first...LEMME TAKE A SELFIE!
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Author's POV
They stare at each other with out blinking.
Kim is looking at him all over, just to make she it's her Jack. Not just her imagination. Jack is doing the same. It was like they were alone in the world and room, but there are people watching them now.
Milton, Shane, Grey and Funderburk.
"This is Kick." Milton whispers to Grey, slightly gesturing to Kim and Jack.
"Shh, we're watching here." Funderburk scolds and they go back to watching them.
"Y-You're here." Kim stutters smiling at Jack. He smiles back and engulfs her into a hug, in which she quickly hugs back from.
"I've missed you. So so much." Jack mumbles into her hair. Kim squeezes her eyes shut,
"Me too." Kim adds.
They stay like that for a bit, but Jack thought of something fun to do with this. Jack hugs Kim tighter, then he spins her around causing Kim to laugh. They both end up on the floor laughing. They finish laughing and Kim sighs,
"How long are you going to stay? I mean here, at Otai." asks Kim. Jack thinks about it for a moment,
"I don't know Funderburk didn't tell us." replies Jack. Kim raises an eyebrow,
"Funderburk?" Kim asks befuddled, "Why does Funderburk have to tell you? And he's here?"
Before Jack could answer Funderburk, Milton, Shane, and Grey run over to them. Kim's eyes widen slightly and a giant smile spreads across her face.
"Milton!" Kim yells as she hugs him. Grey looks at her with jealously,
"Hands off my boyfriend." Grey grits through her teeth.
Kim lets go of Milton and looks at Grey then Milton,
"Boyfriend?" she asks in disbelief, "You got a girlfriend?!"
Milton laughs nervously and nods. Kim smiles widely,
"Finally!" she yells throwing her arms up.
They all look at her oddly,
"What?" she asks, "I'm happy that Milton finally got a girlfriend. I mean, after Julllllll...I'm going to stop talking."
After an awkward silence, Kim breaks it,
"So, you guys wanna come to my dorm?" she asks. They all nod,
"But where are we supposed to put our bags?" asks Shane.
"We'll take care of that!" yells a genial voice. They turn around and see 5 men with 2 bellhop carts
"We'll take your luggage and you'll get your room number later! Right now, you can wander around the compound!" says one of the men.
The men take their luggage and load them on the carts. Then, they wheel out of the room,
"So, my room?" Kim suggests, gesturing to the exit. They nod and Kim walks out as they all follow.
After going down halls and turning left and right, they finally got to Kim's dorm. In Kim's dorm, Funderburk makes comments about how big her dorm is. It's true. It is a big dorm. It fits a king sized bed, a 2 by 1 meter desk, 2 bean bags, a wheely leather chair for the desk, a small night stand, and a very large closet. But that's not all, she has a large washroom to be at least 6 by 7 meters for the flooring (I've heard the word being used before, but i dont think I spelt it right or if it's an actual word.) There was also a chandelier
hanging above them, but no one, except Kim, saw it.
"This place is amazing!" exclaims Shane turn around to look at everything. Kim laughs,
"Yeah. I know, I think my dorm is better than most university dorms." Kim points out.
Shane spots the beanbag chairs and dives for it. Funderburk and Jack see the bean bags too, so they ran into it, but Jack got it. Funderburk hits the wall,
"OW!" he cries out in pain, considering that it was head first. Kim and Grey roll their eyes,
"Men." they mumble.
"Hey!" shouts Milton, "I didn't do it!"
Grey chuckles and walks over to him, then wraps her arms around Milton's waist. Milton hugs her and then kisses her softly on the top of her head.
"Awww..." Kim coos slightly fangirling. They look at her oddly and in the background, Jack and Funderburk are arguing about the beanbag chair.
"What? It's cute!" Kim says defensively. Milton and Grey laugh a bit and they went into their own conversation.
Kim jumped on her bed, picked up the book, Graceling, on her night stand and started to read, but she put down the book because she forgot something that she needed. Kim opens up one of the drawers and pulls out glasses with a black frame. Shane looks at her queerly, but then spots the chandelier and stares at it with interest.
"That's my chair Jack!" Funderburk yells at Jack.
Jack stares at Kim as she reads,
"Are you listening to me?!"
Jack doesn't respond. He just stares at Kim and smiles a bit. Funderburk gets frustrated and jusy pushes Jack off the bean bag. He comes back into reality as he tumbles on the floor with a loud thump.
"What the heck!" screams Jack on the floor. Funderburk shrugs, then lays down on the bean bag.
Kim giggles and Jack hears. He gets up and sits beside Kim looking down at her book.
"What, you thought that was funny?" Jack asks wearing his famous smirk,
"No. I thought a part in this book was funny." Kim lies convincingly, but Jack sees through it.
"Okay, show me which part was funny." Jack says knowing that there wasn't a funny part.
"Ok..." Kim trails off. She turns a couple of pages, then dashes for the door.
Jack catches Kim and pulls her back on to the bed. Kim's face heats up with Jack's arms around her.
"There wasn't a 'funny' part, was there?" Jack asks. Kim shakes her head and buries her face with her hands. Jack laughs,
"Is Kimmy blushing?" he asks in a baby voice. Kim gets control of her blushing and her face returns to it's natural colour.
"Maybe." Kim mumbles peeling her hands from her face.
"You lied to me!" Jack says dramatically taking his hands away from Kim. She missed his warmth, but doesn't say anything. She just pouts,
"Pwease forgve me Jackie?" Kim asks with a puppy dog face and a bit of a baby voice. Jack has a stern stare, but inside he's giving in.
"No." He says with an ascetic look.
Kim drops the look and starts crying. She takes off her glasses and covers up her face with her hands and hair. Grey, Milton, Shane, and Funderburk stop what they're doing and turn their attention to Kim then Jack.
"What did you do?" Grey grits through her teeth. Jack gestures to Kim and opens his mouth, but nothing comes out.
"Why did you make her cry!" Shane cries. Jack just does the same things he did with Grey,
"Kim is like family! Why did you make her cry?!" shouts Milton slightly angry. Grey settles her hand on Milton's shoulder calming him down.
Kim starts laughing revealing her face with tears.
"Hahaha- you- haha- thought- hahahaha." Kim tries to say, but doesn't succeed. She wipes her tears
"Wha- s-s-so you weren't crying?" Jack stutters. Kim shakes her head finishing laughing. Shane looks befuddled, but then starts to clap,
"Nice acting Kim." Shane complements. Everyone claps along and Kim bows. Jack takes Kim and places her on his lap,
"I thought I actually made you cry!" he exclaims hugging her. She laughs and hugs back,
"Nope." she says. Jack's stomach growls and his face becomes pink. Everyone laughs,
"I'm guess that we go and eat?" suggests Grey. Everyone nods and follows Kim to the cafiteria.
Kim's POV
We enter the cafiteria and everyone is in their own conversation. I scan the room for a table and spot one in the corner.
Just like in high school...
Yeah..just like in high school..
"Go get your food and I'll get the table." I tell them. They nod and go get food except for Milton's girlfriend. She comes with me to the table,
"So, I'm Grey..." she says awkwardly avoiding eye contact.
"How long have you and Milton been dating?" I ask prying out of the awkwardness. Grey smiles,
"8 months." she replies in a daze. I smile,
"How did he ask you out?" I ask. She looks me in the eye,
"I'll tell you, but I'm not a girly girl that'll say 'It was magical!' and anything along those lines,"
I snort and then nod.
"Okay, I went to my dorm because it was getting late. No one was in my dorm so I was layed down on my bed, but I saw a note with a black teddy bear beside it. I opened up the note and it said,
Dear Grey, when you get this note, do as this note tells you. If you are willing to give me a chance. I'm the most intelligent person you know!" she explains, I laugh. "Okay, let's get started. Find the place where I doze off. So I went to his dorm with the teddy bear and in his dorm I saw a dark blue dress hanging with a note attatched to it. It said, I'm guessing that you've found the dress. I hope you like it because I want you to wear it. Put on the dress and then go to the place where we were first introduced. I was a little confused, but then I remembered head quarters. I went there and saw another note on the table with a mirror and diamond earings. I smiled at the objects. then read the note. You've gotten this far my darling. Please put on the earings and look into the mirror before you read this next part. I obeyed then read the next part. You look gorgeous, don't you? Come to the lake behind the school. Be careful not to hurt or dirty yourself. Love Milton. I ran to where he told me to and saw him in a tux. She said that I looked like a goddess and gave me the rose. Milton led me to a table with candles and food on it. We ate and talked for hours, at the end of the date, he went down on 1 knee and asked me to be his girlfriend. Of course I agreed. And that was our first date."
I am right now feeling like I'm going to cry. Milton did such a great job.
"That sounds amazing." I say softly.
"What's amazing?" Jack asks sitting beside me.
"Milton and Grey's first date." I reply.
"Thank you." Milton thanks sitting beside Grey. Shane and Funderburk come with a tray of food,
"What are we all talking about?" Funderburk asks.
Why are they here again?
Oh yeah! I forgot to ask,
"Hey, why are you guys here?" I ask, "Not that I'm bothered by you, but I just want to know why."
Funderburk gulps down the last bit of his sandwich and whispers,
"Oh. We're here because we are going to add someone to our spy team." he whispers like it was nothing.
I narrow my eyes at Jack and Milton because they didn't tell me. Milton becomes uncomfortable and turns away. I give Jack my best death glare and he shrinks down in his chair, but sits back up,
"I didn't know when to tell you!" he says in a high voice. I roll me eyes and then see Carlos, Jake, Stephanie, Molly, Daria, and Beatrice walk in. I shield my face,
"Hey Kim!" one of my friends yell.
Uh oh...
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btw i became older! my birfday was 7 days ago. Kinda late, eh?
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Also this is for Divergent fans, check out Dealing with Their Reality. It's a Divergent story (obvi) that I've written with my friend. Here's the summary:
It's Divergent times and Tobias -or Four- and Tris aren't a couple. Al hasn't died. New and changing discoveries are made when 6 kids are thrown into the cities lives. The 6 kids, found in long frozen tubes, all from different places. All Divergent, but are they going to stay Divergent? Or is city's leaders going to mold them into what they SHOULD be? 2 of them know what's going to happen. They know about Tris and Tobias and everything after that, but, they cannot tell anyone. Especially, Jeanine Matthews, or else their life is going to be on the line.
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