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Chapter 3

Tris' POV.

Do my eyes deceive me or is that seriously my mother, alive standing in front of me announcing she is the Dauntless leader. Holy shit. Quickly I snap out of it in search for where my sisters are. I can see both moving towards me and when they get to me we all just staring at each other dumb-struck. "What do we do. She'll find out its us as soon as she knows our names." Nicoles says. "Yeah I mean there was a reason she left. Maybe it was just to get away from us?" Rachel questioned. Before I could reply Toni started talking. "Good morning initiates. It's nice to see some new faces in this ranky old place, but it's what we call home. You'll get used to it. Transfer initiates follow me and I will show you as to where the training grounds are. Dauntless born go with Lauren and the other instructors and they will get you settled in to your new rooms." My mother sounded stong and exactly like a leader should. As the group of twenty split it was and even number both in transfers and Dauntless born, ten for each team of instructors.

Me and my sisters hustle on together following Toni to the training grounds.

Rachels POV.

Well this is a bit of a shit stick. How are we supposed to hide our identity to our mother when she asks of our names. Luckly no one else has asked of our second names yet. I walk with Tris and Nicole at my side and we enter a massive room with mats on the floor and different training facilities. Eric, Four and Toni will now be our instructors. This is going to be a fun initiation, for sure. I had fallen behind slightly with the group whilst thinking and letting everything set in, as I was just about to side step around this bigger girl to get next to my sisters the girl moved at the last-minute and I bumped into the back of her. "Why don't you watch where you going bitch." She said turning around looking major pissed. I was a little taken aback by her assholeness, so said. "Well it's not like I ment to now was it, mind you it is kind of difficult trying to get around you seeing as you pretty butch. Wait are you a man?" I replied sarcastically. If it was possible she seemed even more furious with me now and shoved me hard enough that I stumbled back. Now I was pissed and she wasn't about to get away with shoving me. We had attracted everyone in our group, the instructors only watching.

As I started to storm up to the girl, Nicole and Tris stopped me. The girl didn't care who got in her way so caught Nicole off guard by pushing past her to get to me. That was the last straw, I bawled my fist up and punched the girl straight in the teeth, my hand coming back bloody. The girl's mouth was bleeding but she had a relentless look in her eyes and started towards me. "Enough, you'll have time for that during training." Eric's voice boomed out with authority behind his amusement. The girl stopped at first but then saw the sly smirk on my face and ran for me. I ran away laughing at her and smacking my ass as she tried to catch me. Soon everyone was laughing until Eric was in front of me and I stopped dead in my tracks almost running into him. He side-stepped around me and caught the tower tall girl by the throat. "Did you not hear what I said," Eric said with a raised voice. "Next time you don't listen to me I'll hang you over the chasm, got it." The girl nodded, fear evident in her eyes. Both me and the girl re-joined the group and listened.

Nicoles POV.

I'm pretty sure my sisters have a death wish. First Tris seems to be getting cozy with our instructor, then Rachel trys to pick a fight with the toughest looking girl in our group. Yeah we are defiantly going to last long here. I can't believe Toni is here though. I wonder why, maybe I could go and investigate and find out what's going on with her. Mind me, I think my sisters want to stay away from her. I mean none of us no the reason she left. It could be something bad, maybe because she couldn't handle having children so ran or it could be for a different reason, I don't know. I'm cut out of my thoughts when I feel a solid arm lean against mine. It's Peter, he seems like a nice guy. Very confident but I guess that's what would happen when you're Candor born. After the tour of the training area we are told to walk back to our dorms and start to get conftable, when the three of us are stopped by, of course, Toni; she doesn't look very pleased and the girl Rachel pissed off is standing next to her. "I would like to see you three and Molly," Toni gestured to the girl. "In my office. Follow me." I sneak a glance at the others and they seem rigid and frightened and it's exactly how I feel.

We walk from the dark, damp hall ways into a room that almost looks sterile, The walls are white there's a big metal desk in the middle with a flat screen computer and some other bits on the desk. Toni sat in her chair whilst all four of us stood in front of her. "OK girls I know it can be hard to get along but honestly I don't care. I'm just here to give you your first warning. If you get up to three warnings then we will be forced to deducted a point from your training score. Or the boys will do their own little way of punishment," Toni smirks a little when she says that. "But I'm about to put your warnings in the data so give me your names and you may leave. She finished. My heart felt like it fell out of my ass at this point. It almost sounded like no one was even breathing until Molly spoke. "Molly Thomas." She said. Toni started typing it into the computer. I glanced sideways with wide eyes, questioning what to do but Tris just shrugged in defeat and Rachel just bit her lip and looked down. Not realizing Toni was watching them I concentrated on something else. "And your name?" Toni said. "Nicole." I replied. Toni Looked up frowning and waved a hand for Molly to leave. When the door shut behind the tall girl Toni said. "What is your last name." Not taking her eyes away from mine. "Um- It's-," I stutter and then blurted all at once. "Creed."

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