Okay, so this is my new story. My other one didn't get many reviews, so I thought I would try out something new. Here goes nothing...
Davy
I always knew I belonged in Amity. But the test I just took tell me different. I am walking down the hall way that leads to the elevator thinking about what just happened. I just finished the HTS test. And it came out positive. I just hope Tris has better luck. I thought I would grow up in Amity, and live out my life with Zac. But I guess I was wrong. The lady that distributed my test, Tori, told me most people that test positive for HTS, also tend to be divergent. I wasn't worried about tomorrow, until now. Tori erased my test score, and manually entered Negative. I know that they wont notice, but that doesn't change what might happen tomorrow.
I reach the elevator, and press my finger on the down arrow. It illuminates and a ding can be heard from a few floors below me. I hear heavy footsteps behind me. Ignoring them, I stay focused on the door in front of me, willing it to open soon. The steps sound closer, and I can feel hot ragged breaths on the nape of my neck. Sending a shiver down my spine, which causes me to quake slightly in my sneakers.
The ding of the elevator rings through the room, and I hear the swoosh of the elevator stopping on my floor. Our floor. Without looking back, I enter the small space, and Push the button that has a large G on it. Hoping that it stands for Ground Floor. I have only been in an elevator once before, and that was to go to Mitchells' choosing ceremony. And that didn't end well. But we all knew that he was heading that direction. My brother has always be a trouble maker.
The doors close, and I try my best to not look over at the person next to me. I still feel their stare on my back. My curiosity willing me to look, I glance over to the body.
I gasp.
My eyes holding on the boys neck, I see the bold imprint. He is a carrier himself. He must be at least one year older then me if he already has an imprint. The large circled H stand out boldly on his neck. I lift my gaze to his eyes. They are a smokey blue color with a blue rim around them so dark, they appear... almost black if you will. Then he speaks up. A raspy almost whisper.
"Hey princess."
His words simple and short, Mesmerizing. I am stunned. He is a carrier just like me. Maybe he was distributing test. I wish he gave me mine. I am at a lose for words. He is an inspiration to me. How he carries him self, even with the imprint. That is how I will be. Even if I am positive the test made a mistake.
The doors open, and he walks out, not even thinking to look back.
And I am still standing here. I close my mouth, and walk out of the elevator, leaving the confined space to itself.
Okay, I know it is short, but I had to re write everything, because I 'wasn't logged in.' Whatever. I hope you guys like it. Can you guess who the boy is yet? GUESS! If you have read the book, you should have picked up on it very quickly!
If you know, tell me! There will be contest, everyone who gets it right will become a character, or initiate! Please review with who..
Who the mystery character is
Your initiates name
Good or bad character
Faction of origin
HTS positive or not
Divergent or not
Stays alive, dies, or becomes faction-less
Okay thats it! Review Favorite Follow! And the contest will extend through July 7th. I will give hints if most people get it wrong, but not until the 7th!
AND EXTRA POINTS GO TO PEOPLE WHO KNOW WHAT BOOK THIS NEXT PART IS FROM!
Remember to...
Listen to the smell of the sound of your footsteps...
Love you all!
-Emma