A/N well, hope you liked the first chapter but as I keep saying, EDIT THE STORY! I made this to make me good at writing but all I get is OC's please review or PM and add in a mod or edit the prison to make my characters life (or the others) hard.
"Hey guys, I FINALLY HAVE BUTTER!" sky yells in the note waving a gold ingot around with a chronic stupid face.
"Butter? Give" they both get shot
"Why do you guys do this? I'm trying to communicate to the readers, wait until the story for your shenanigans!" Aaron yelled as he shut the authors note down before anyone could do anything else
A container opens as Aaron walks out heading towards his computer to get some more prisoners. 'Okay, let's see. Duncan will arrive today which will coincide with the completion of my rift experimentation chamber.' "Wait, what's this? A girl who can make snowballs without any surrounding snow just got arrested for" sighing in exasperation he states "stealing gold while yelling my butter." While transferring Icy Rose to come to the prison he noticed that she had a sister who was a great strategist who was suspected to have danced disco in a bikini at the spawn of a hunger games match. 'Okay, rig it so she is proven guilty and transferred to the prison for mental help.'
A few days later
"Prisoners, good news." Aaron Announced with three new people behind him depressed while one spotting Sky's gold ingot
"Butterrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!" Icy yelled as she charged at sky's cell freaking sky out immensely while clutching his gold ingot like it was a lifeline
"Icy Samantha rose. What are you doing running at a stranger IN A PRISON?" snowflake yelled showing the motherly instincts she picked up after their mother died even though Icy does all of the fighting while reminding everyone but Aaron of their mothers and getting a little wary of her.
"I made a bottle-o-air!" ssundee yelled as he held up a water bottle he drank with his trademark derpy face.
"GIVE ME MY BUTTER!" icy yelled as she beat skydoesminecraft to a pulp for the gold he hid
"ENOUGH!" yelled Aaron yelled seething in anger "the next person who speaks gets a few hours in the lava pit!
"Give me some butter!" she yelled charging at Aaron like a maniac. She was quickly stabbed and spawned in the lava pit in a fit of screams.
"ANYONE ELSE?" Aaron screamed at the top of his lungs even though everyone was silenced when Icy was killed
"You killed my sister? She's gone?" snowflake sniffled before charging at Aaron crying while trying to get payback for her only friend and protector
'Wait' "Oh crap" Aaron exclaimed as he forgot to explain the clone mechanic to the new prisoners. "Stop. You can't truly die in here; through the rift we found a land that has successfully made clones." He explained while holding her hands so she didn't hit him without him hurting her. Icy just reappeared in a nearby cell huddling away from Aaron just like sky did when he was put in the lava pit. "Now as I was saying, you have earned enough money to improve your standings in the prison. You can spend it on luxuries like a painting in your cell: better quality food for everyone (though it will cost more); or you can invest for more money like having a farm built."
"What are you doing here?" Duncan finally asked confused on how this prison is run
"This prison was made to be an investment into the government by using criminals, but I want to make this better than a simulation concentration camp. I want this to be able to be self-sufficient enough to house an army and if you help me you can be better off than you were before when you were under the government." This explanation confused everyone even more than before. "Now, time to collect rift energy. Everyone to the forest to collect your future." All of the doors open at once and everyone but Icy step out and walk to the door led by Aaron.
"What happens to her?" Duncan asked concerned for the girl still curled up in a foetal position failing to comprehend that she died, seemed to be in hell and came back.
"Yeah, really need to work on my anger problem. Stay close; maybe you can help me explain this to her." Aaron ordered as he walked over to the girl and pulling a calm look over his face As he tried to send calming thoughts to her trying out his theory of mental connection through the devices that allowed the clones to transfer someone's consciousness. "Hey, do you understand what happened?" Aaron asked but Icy looked at him, eyes widening and scrabbling out of the door only to be caught by Duncan.
"You killed me; sent me to hell. Don't send me back?" Icy screamed while cringing, waiting to die again. Outside the prison snowflake felt a spike of dread down her back and ran towards the prison.
"Please don't send me on a guilt trip, I already have snowflake for that when I see her next. But you didn't go to hell; you can never die while in this prison. I just sent you to the lava pit because you were bugging the hell out of me."
"Snowflake? Where is she? I will not let you hurt her!" Icy exclaimed while summoning two snowballs and smashing one into Duncan's face before getting punched in the face. "owww, my nose."
"Duncan, I need you to go to the rift experimentation chamber and see how she can throw snowballs and Icy Rose: if you cooperate with Duncan and his experiments are a success; you will be able to defend more precious people than just your sister I promise." Aaron said while giving her a carrot to chew on to distract her from her memories.
"o..Okay. Lead me on. Just take my memories away. All I see when I close my eyes is the lava around me and the dread that I'll be there forever." Icy said as Aaron stabbed her.
"Well Duncan, you're needed at the prison grounds until I remove the impact of her punishment from her mind" Aaron said as he walked away. Not even bothering to make sure Duncan got to where he needed to go. 'Why did I just essentially force all of my past on her in a single moment?"
A/N well there you have it. This is probably going to have mistakes all over the place and I know I mixed your characters up ICY GIRL but it seemed to fit so I didn't rewrite the whole thing so I will make them both as the Icy as the fighter and snowflake as the support. *Wink* *Wink* this chapter can reveal much, if your mind is good enough to figure it out.
