Well Hello everyone!
There are something's I MUST TELL YOU ALL!
1. I have run into some writer's bloke on what to do for the next chapter. So ANY help or advice on what to do for the next chapter would be greatly appreciated and would help get me past my writer's bloke.
2. To answer some of your questions, firstly WOWfan92, no the Empire will not discard The Portal Drives and will continue to use the Portal Drives but to a lesser degree because like you said despite not being as fast as Element Zero FTL or The Mass Relays it still has its own advantages. And your other question about dinosaurs being used in the Imperial Military well even I didn't think about THAT before and I'M SOPPOSED TO BE THE CRAZZY ONE. So yeah I completely agree with you that would be awesome to have dinosaurs being used as massive creatures of WAR alongside Dragons! And so because of that I think I will have dinosaurs in the Imperial Military and I might repeat MIGHT even write a one-shot side story about just that. Secondly High Captain the "note: Dinosaurs never went extinct on Earth so Humans don't exist on Earth" is both a reference to The Magic Effect and refers to The Elder Scrolls: Magic Effect.
3. PageOfMind thank you for the constructive criticism I Truly appreciate it.
P.S. There's one more thing I forgot to mention well really two, firstly Ysreth Shepperd is a WEREWOLF SURPRISE! And secondly she also the NEXT *spoiler alert* DRAGONBORN!
List of Dinosaurs in the Imperial Military
1. Terrorem, size of mid sized dog with a basic body design of a typical carnivores dinosaur but with wings like a bird, similar to a seagull or hawk but with a second similar pair of wings on its legs. A highly social and pack hunting animal and is as intelligent as your average Border Collie. And can spit out highly concentrated acid. Extremely common in the Imperial Military, often being used as the Empire attack dogs and thus lives on numerous planets in the Empire including Nirn the Imperial Homeworld.
2. Carnator, half the size of the average T-rex and is extremely strong and powerful not as common as the Terrorems but something to watch for non the less.
