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WARNING: Pov's will change a lot in the next few chapters. Slight swearing.
Chapter 3: Slapped . . . XD
Fang Pov
I can't believe it's been 6 months since Max left. Six months! It feels like lifetime. We don't even know if she's alive or not. If we didn't have Lissa the flock would have fallen apart a long time ago. Confused? Let me explain.
That day in the bookstore, when I saw Lissa, I didn't know what came over me. One look at her and all I wanted to do was kiss her again and again. I guess my testosterone level was on high that day. She had cherry red lips, freckles splashed across her face, high rosy cheekbones. Did I just say cherry red lips and rosy cheek bones in one sentence? Oh dear, look what's happening to me! I can't say I remember what we were talking about, I was too busy kissing her, and I think we got up to second base. The next thing I know I hear a whole bunch of people screaming.
"HOLY SHIT IT'S A BIRDKID!"
"A HOT BIRD KID!"
"DAMN . . ."
"I CANT BELIEVE YOUR BREAKING UP WITH ME!"
I have no idea where that last one came from. I broke away from Lissa to see a fuming Max. She turned tail and ran away. I stumbled out after her, but she zoomed away. Lissa stopped me from going after her, something about 'give her time to think'. Biggest mistake of my life! Lissa came to our house, and we explained what happened.
The flock was really mad that I brought Lissa here, but then she surprised us with some news of her own. See, Lissa turned out to be 1% cat and 99% human. She has retractable ears, claws and a tail. And she has the stealth of a cat, so in a way she was like one of us . . . so I let her stay with us. We all know that when Max's not here I'm in charge, and I got a ton of help from Lissa. Angel and Nudge were ticked the most, Iggy didn't care, and Gazzy thinks that girls have cooties but that's another story. I was hoping they'd get over it by the time Max came back, but she never did, I even slept in her room so she wouldn't be able to sneak past me, but when I woke up, it was Lissa that was next to me. She was 'cold and lonely'.
We waited and searched everywhere for Max. She never came back. I kept thinking she abandoned me and the best thing that had happened to me since was Lissa. Since then, Angel and Nudge refused to talk to me, and every time Lissa was around they shot death glares at me. They think it's mine and Lissa's fault that Max left, but I don't see how that works. All I did was kiss her.
It's been six months since Max left. Angel and Nudge still refuse to talk to me, Lissa lives with us on and off, and Iggy and Gazzy have been very distant, and they hardly ever talk to me or Lissa. This entire thing is a mess. If only Max had waited and let me explain to her that Lissa just happened to look hot that day, she'd still be here. Anyway, Lissa's Father (who is so Fnicking rich) was able to fix Iggy's eyes, so he was no longer blind. Angel and Nudge have their own credit card which they refuse to use or touch, and Gazzy had unlimited bomb supplies, which he too refused to use. I wish they would stop acting like this was my entire fault. All I did was kiss a girl. It's not my fault Max got all jealous.
This is exactly how I thought about the situation, until yesterday, that is.
Flashback
"Fang, we need to talk," Angel told me. It was the first time she was talking to me in five months, three weeks, and six days, so of course I wasn't about to blow her off. I nodded my head.
"We want her to leave Fang," Nudge said. I was dumbfound. Who are they talking about? Oh . . . right, Lissa.
"Look, the only reason she's here is because we need the resources. She has money, we don't. Max took the Max Ride card with her when she left."
"Gee, I wonder who's fault that is . . ." Gazzy started. WTF, this isn't my fault! I heard a whoosh of air, then I felt my cheek stinging.
"Shut up Fang," Angel screamed. WTH! She slapped me, stupid mind reader! "This is your fault! Max was in love with you! Don't you think it would have broken her heart to see you with someone else?"
"She…was in love…with me?" I stammered. HOLY SHIT! What had I done?
"No shit Sherlock! We all saw the way Max looked at you, but then you had to go and suck faces with that slut."
"Lissa isn't a slut, now watch your language Ig," I said sternly. I watched his hands curl into fists. If it was a fight he wanted it was a fight he was going to get. I was about to get up and charge at Iggy when Angel and Nudge pushed me back onto the couch, and Gazzy held Iggy back.
"No man, you're not the leader of the flock! Max is, and we sure as hell won't be taking any orders from you until you ditch the bitch."
They all nodded in resentment. Crap, how did this happen? I still don't understand what came over me that day. Dang, how could I do this to Max? I was in love with her since we were seven. I felt my own chest tighten. Suddenly a memory flashed through my head. It was Max. She was sitting in a forest crying her eyes out. I kept watching and waited for her to stop but she didn't. I had never seen Max cry so much in my life! Not even when we buried Ari and it was all my fault.
"That's enough, Angel!"
"Why? There is a lot more then that Fang!" How could Max possibly cry anymore then what I just saw?
"Look I'm sorry, I don't know why that happened with Lissa, it just did."
"It's not your fault Fang, she was seducing you," Angel admitted reluctantly.
"What does seduce mean?"
"I'll tell you when you're older Gazzy." Crap, well that explains a lot.
"How?" I asked.
"She's part cat Fang!" Angel said with the whole no duh expression.(A/N: If you read the series House Of Night you'd get it. Cats like vampires, vampires seduce...comprende? ) I rubbed my forehead and thought hard.
"Okay fine! I'll get rid of Lissa. You guys go start packing, we're going after Max!"
END FLASH BACK
Yeah I feel guilty as hell, but it's even worse knowing I didn't make a bigger effort to look for her earlier, or to think that this wasn't my fault. Getting rid of Lissa was a tearful event for her, but a joyful one for us. But the moment she walked out of the house all the weight of her seduction left, and suddenly I felt like myself again. I realized that she was blocking my mind of any thoughts that had to do with Max. I also found that I lost a lot of my memories of her, that horrible B***h was draining my memories of Max to replace it with her. Angel helped me get most of them back.
Right now we were all packing. I was running back and forth between rooms getting my things when I heard Nudge sitting in Max's room crying. No one's been in Max's room since she left. Dang, I'm not good with those kinds of emotions, that's Max's job. Her job was a lot harder than she ever let on. It's one thing to take care of someone and another thing to be taken care of. I never realized how much Max really did for us until we lost her. Lissa had been a temporary hated replacement but she didn't give a crap about Angel or Nudge when they were crying or when the Gasman got cuts and bruises from a bomb nor did she ever complement Ig's cooking. Max kept us together, while Lissa tore us apart.
I walked into Max's room and sat down next to Nudge. I knew I didn't have to say anything, she would start talking on her own. Nudge turned to me and slapped me across the cheek. I gave the universal 'WTH' expression, but Nudge dove into my arms and cried onto my shoulder. Confused, I just sat there and held her tight. I was starting to feel a bruise on my cheek. That girl had quite a backhand. After a few minutes her sobbing stopped.
"You wanna explain this now?" I indicated to my bruised cheek. I think a saw a faint sliver of a smile creep up in her face, but it came out like a grimace.
"She was in here Fang, I can feel it." Nudge started chocking back a sob. "That night before she left, Max came back to talk to us but …she saw you and Lissa and-" Tears were streaming down her face again. "I never felt anything so sad in my life, I felt broken and angry at the same time. It was unbearable Fang; I don't think I can take any more of Max's pain."
"I'm sorry Nudge. I love her so much, but Lissa used me, and I didn't even realize it." I deserved that slap. What am I going to do? They have hardly forgiven me, how will Max? I saw Gazzy walk in.
"Fang, I was thinking, you know how much Max loves Dr. M and Ella? Well maybe we should check there?" He shrugged.
"Crap, that should have been the first place we should have checked." I felt a wave of déjà-vu hit me. I was remembering the first time Max took me to see Dr. M. We hid behind in the woods before Max marched in. Those were the same woods that Max was crying in, in Angel's vision.Crap . . . I thought as I quickly stood up. I barked a few more orders at the flock, pestering them to get ready.
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Iggy's Pov.
I'm so glad that Fang finally came to his sense and ditched the B. I hated her from the beginning. What both Fang and Max didn't know was that I was there the day Lissa forced herself onto Fang, back when we were with Anne. I heard the sucking faces, it was repulsive, and I also heard Max run away and break down in the girl's bathroom. It was that day that I realized Max could never be mine.
Obviously, Max was in love with Fang, otherwise it wouldn't hurt her to see him with the B. I loved her from the very beginning, just like Fang, but I never admitted it to any one. I doubt even Angel knows. I swallowed my feelings for Max years ago from the day we all turned eight. That was around the time when Max decided to hang out with Fang the most and of course Fang responded.
I knew Max could never be mine; she was too deeply in love with Fang even before she realized. I cared about Fang too much as a brother to tell him that I wanted Max. And I loved Max enough to let her go for her Fang.
But the day Fang broke her heart was the first time I ever had hope for Max in years. Yeah I know it's sad, but I really do love Max. But the chances of her loving me back were painfully low. God, I sound like such lovesick mutant. This time Fang doesn't deserve Max, so she's all mine. That is, of course, if she chooses me.
The saddest thing is that I still haven't seen Max with my own eyes. I've seen her in pictures and in the memories that Angel showed, but I haven't seen her myself. As much as I hate the B I'm still very thankful for my eyes. The feeling of being able to see again was like being born all over again and seeing the world through an all new perspective. It was the happiest moment of my life. One second the whole world was an endless black abyss, and then I could see everything; every angle, every color, every shape. It was all so sharp and defined. I will never take my sight for granted for as long as I live. At first I was totally confused and disoriented, but Angel, Nudge and Gazzy helped me out a lot. Fang was off being . . . Fang, with the B of course.
I know this is kind of cheesy but I can't stop dreaming about her. I swear I'm losing my mind. I wonder if this is how Fang felt around Max. She tends to have that kind of effect on you, I guess. The dreams are cheesier then the idea of me dreaming about her. Don't ask, I'm not telling you!
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Fang Pov
We've been in the air for about an hour now, just a few more minutes until we get to Dr. M's place. I was a nervous wreck at the moment, but I had to keep it together for the Flock. Damn, this job just doesn't get any easier does it?
"Funny . . . Max never thought of us as a job to be done, Count Jerkulla!" Angel snapped. I turned to see all their expressions harden.
"Stay out of my head Angel," I said in my stern and hopefully leader-like voice.
"Gladly," She said with heavy sarcasm. Whoa, she's just like Max.
The rest of the flight wasn't so bad. Iggy and Gazzy were constantly going at a game of I-spy and Total was singing Ninety Nine Bottles of Beer on the Wall, and I was pretty dang close to chucking a rock at him. Lucky for him I didn't happen to have one on me.
As soon as we found Dr. M's house we didn't waste time. I landed right on the porch. Iggy and Gazzy didn't have half the brain I did, so they landed right on top of me. I not so carefully kicked them off and rang the door bell. The door swung open and out came a very sleepy Dr. M and Ella.
"Fang?" They asked. "Where's Max?"
"Umm that's what I'm here to ask," I said sheepishly.
"She . . . didn't . . . come . . . back?" Dr. M drew out.
"She. Didn't. Come. Back?" Ella said furiously. She reached her arm out and smacked me hard across the cheek. Man, I've been getting slapped a lot lately.
"YOU IDIOT!" She screamed at me. "WHAT THE HELL DID YOU DO?" She slapped me again. Damn she has quite the back hand, that might actually bruise.
"Cut that out!" I snapped.
"Ella watch you language," Dr. M started then she turned to glare at me. "You break my daughter's heart and you come back to me six months later, because now you suddenly decided that you wanted her back?" She reached her hand out and smacked across the other UNBRUISED cheek! I was about to let a whole stream of unholy cuss words flow through my mouth when she slammed the door in my face. Humiliated, I kept my mouth shut and rubbed my other cheek.
"I vote to let them slap you again to let us in," Iggy smirked
"I second that," Gazzy and Nudge both said.
"You enjoyed that didn't you?" I frowned at them and rubbed my cheek. Angel rolled her eyes and stepped around me and knocked on the door.
"Ella, it's me, Angel. Can you please let us in?" she asked in her sing-song voice. All we got was silence
"Five . . . Four . . . Three . . ." Gazzy started but then the door swung open. Ella gave us an angry look and stormed off, leaving Dr. M with us.
"Omg, it's a new record! I mean like, that last one hardly even lasted more than, like, two seconds. I can't even eat a Snicker's bar in that much time. ZOMG I totally want one right now, I mean who wouldn't want this caramel-y good sweet-"Iggy slapped his hand over her mouth. Angel turned to talk to them.
"Please let us in," she said all innocently. Innocent my butt, there is nothing innocent about those Bambi eyes. "We need your help to find Max. We were wondering if she came here?" Dr.M still wouldn't let us in but she decided to answer our question.
"You can stay right there, and yes Max did come here. She was an absolute mess. And . . . I . . . never saw anyone so …br-broken in . . . m-my life," she sobbed. "We just sat together crying for a couple of hours."
"We?" I asked
"Max, Ella, Brigid and I," she replied. She didn't seem too happy to be talking to me . . . But what? Why the h was Brigid there? She kept talking. "Max was really ticked at first but then she decided to go back and talk to you, but I guess she never did."
I turned to see Nudge glaring at me; she was giving me the "It's all your fault" look. Can't say I disagree, I mean it is my fault right?
"Why was Brigid there?" Angel said without missing a beat. Dr. M gave us a baffled expression.
"Um . . . we were discussing her reasons for quitting the CSM, why?" she replied.
I was dying to scream out; "Do you know where the Hell Max is or not?" but I already blew it once with them and now they don't trust me. I'm not about to make this situation a heck of a lot worse.
"Why did she quit? And why was she there when Max was?" Gazzy asked her. Wow, looks like Gazzy's been thinking lately. I wonder how much I've been missing in the last six months. How much of their lives was I too blind to see?
"She wanted to settle down, and actually I think Brigid and Max love each other very much. They really bonded when she came here." she sniffed. We all stared at each other in doubt.
"Are you sure?" Iggy asked. "I mean, besides Fang we all know how much Max hated her." Max hates Brigid? Whoa . .. how much do they know that I don't?
"It's a long story, they just talked some issues out and Max trusted her, very much apparently," Dr. M replied. Okay, I hate to be a stickler but for the record I'm still standing outside.
"Do you know where Max is?" Gazzy asked worriedly. I could hear the pain in his voice. Max was like a mother to the kid. She raised him herself since he was born, even when we were trapped in the school she always made sure she took the most, and the hardest, hits.
"No . . ." Dr. M broke out into tears again. "Please," she begged with tears in her eyes. "Please find Max. I don't want to lose a daughter that I had for less than a year. Please."
"I promise," I swore to her silently. "I'm sorry Dr. M about what happened that day . . . it wasn't my fault," I told her sheepishly. I was well aware that I had an audience.
"I really don't care Fang, I just want my daughter back," and with that she slammed the door in our face.
"Well, I thought that went fairly well," Iggy remarked sarcastically. Unfortunately I didn't have it left in me to yell at him. How does Max do it?
"Now, what we do?" Gazzy asked, he gave me a wide eyed look that made my knee's tremble from guilt. 'Stupid guilt tripping eight year old' I thought. Angel knocked on the door again. We all stared at her in wonder. Dr. M opened the door again, and she was furious.
"What?" she barked at Angel. I walked over and stood directly in front of Angel, cutting of Dr. M's glare. Angel pushed me aside and gave me a look that said, 'Let me talk to her". I raised an eyebrow at her, but let her go on.
Angel looked right into Dr. M's eyes and said; "You are going to help us find Max." She used a really eerie voice. We all dropped our mouths open.
"I'm going to help you find Max," Dr. M said confused. Iggy grabbed Angel by the shoulder and pulled her back.
"What are you doing? This is Max's mom you're controlling!" He whispered/shouted.
"Angel," I started with a stern voice, "cut it out,"
"No," She replied evenly, and then turned to look at Iggy. "We don't have any other choice."
Iggy sighed but gave in. Dr .M cleared her throat.
"I have an idea," she proposed. I saw her hands twitching, she was nervous.
"Not bad, that might actually work," Angel said, reading her mind, I suppose.
"What?" Gazzy asked obviously left out.
"She thinks we should have Jeb track her down," Angel answered
"Of course, I mean like Jeb practically tracked us all over the world, like when we were with Anne, or when we went to Disney Land, and don't forget the time in New York when Max accidentally killed Ari. Speaking of New York, I really want to go there again. I mean, they have like all the best stores there and I like heard that they have the world's largest Hershey Chocolate Factory there. Yum, I want some chocolate right now. You know I never really liked dark chocolate. I mean if it's that and desert rats I'd totally pick the chocolate but otherwise it's like totally disgusting and-"
"Nudge!" I interrupted her. "CAN IT!"
"Okay so where do we find Jeb?" I asked her.
"Not far from here. Forty-first and Wilson Drive, third house on the left."(A/N not a real addresses people!)
That was all I needed. I took a running start and made a quick up and away. The flock, who had better manners than me, said their good-byes, and raced after me. One by one, we were all up in the air. The only thoughts I had in my head right now were:
Is Max okay?
Where is she?
Will Jeb help us?
What's for lunch?
Sorry, mutant bird kids remember?
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Iggy's Pov
I really hate the fact that I have to always act like I don't care about Max when I do. By that I mean that I don't love her, when I do. Fang is really ticking me off, with his whole "I'm the only one who cares about Max thing and I want to die for her to prove my love blah, blah, blah!" I hate it! I care about her too; he doesn't have to get all dramatic about it either! I mean seriously! He's worse than Edward Cullen . . . Not that I would know or anything!
I also realized something else . . . I just saw what Ella and Dr. M looked like for the first time, and wow does Max look nothing like them!
When we finally arrived at Jeb's house, we made a full out nose dive right onto it. It was GI-NORMOUS! It was a white Victorian style, and it was completely gated.
We landed inside the gates and walked right across the lawn to the front door. We may have been well pampered these last six months but our bad habits still haven't changed a bit. Gazzy and Angel raced each other to the doorbell to see who could ring it first. Nudge tripped Gazzy and Angel flew past him, no pun intended. Nudge and I were snickering at Gazzy and Fang was off being his emo self, hating life and what not.
Angel rang the door bell and put on her innocent act. The words 'Angel' and 'innocent' just don't mix, sorry Ange, but they don't.
It's okay Iggy, the words 'Iggy' and 'have brains' don't mix either.
Hey, that's three words!
Iggy I'm mentally sticking my tongue out at you.
Angel, I'm rolling my eyes at you.
We both smiled at each other, as the Gasman kept ringing the door bell.
"Come on! What's taking Jeb so long? I mean it's not like he has much of a life anyway!" Gazzy shouted, exasperated. We all chuckled at this. I think Fang- wait a sec! I don't give a horseshoe about Fang! So of course just then the door swung open.
"I heard that," Jeb muttered poking his head out. We all laughed again, so bad Nudge had tears forming in her eyes. Jeb sighed and gave us a serious look. "Is there something you need? The last time I checked, you all hated my guts."
"We need you to help us track down Max," Fang said in a solemn, emotionless voice.
"Why isn't Max with you?" Jeb asked suspiciously. I saw Fang's face fall, and Angel and Nudge frowning at him. I can't believe they feel sorry for him.
"Long story short, Fang screwed with Max's heart. She left us and now we need to find her," I told him. Jeb realized what this meant and turned to glare at Fang. Fang gave me a pained look and I returned it with an angry glare of my own. My ferocity must have scared him because he staggered back a step or two.
Jeb shook his head at us and let us in. We all trailed in wide eyed as we took in the sight of his mansion. We didn't get much time to admire it, because he hurried us along and pushed us into what looked like a . . . control room? Not that I've ever been in one or anything . . .
It was huge. There were screens of all different sizes all across the walls, and they were connected by a wire to a control panel, covered in flickering lights and switches. I saw Nudge and the Gasman itch to touch them.
"Well now what?" I asked Jeb. He walked over to the end of the room to a single black screen.
"That's strange . . ." he started.
"What is?" Fang asked in a hostile voice.
"This screen shows me everything Max sees. I can be her Voice remember?"
"Why is it blank? Is Max sleeping?" Angel asked.
"No," Jeb said and he looked at us sadly. "I think she might be dead . . ."
The entire room went silent, and then all chaos struck.
Angel and Nudge were sobbing and the Gasman and Fang were yelling at Jeb. I couldn't open my mouth to speak. I felt my heart tear in half. Max couldn't be dead, we would have felt it if she were. I looked at Jeb; he seemed to have something else to say . . . I tried to tell them to calm down, but no one would listen.
"HEY!" I screamed, "SHUT UP!" Fang shot me a glare that said 'I'm in charge, not you'. I gave him a look in return that said 'I don't give a fnick.'
Jeb cleared his throat, breaking the tension between the two of us.
"As I was going to say . . . either she's dead, or she has no recollection of her life as a mutant." We all went silent again, but I could see hope rising in everyone's eyes.
Fang's Pov
"No," Jeb said and he looked at us sadly. "I think she might be dead . . ."
My breath caught in my throat. My Max . . .dead? Impossible! The invincible Maximum Ride does not die easily. She can't be dead . . . no . . . she's not. I was wrapped up in my own thoughts when all hell broke loose. Angel and Nudge burst out crying, the Gasman started to argue with Jeb and I joined him. Jeb tried to tell us something but we didn't listen. Iggy noticed and tried to get us to calm down but he wasn't succeeding. What's up with him today?
"HEY" Iggy screamed "SHUT UP" I felt anger boil under my skin. As the leader it was my job to get everyone to calm down, not Ig's. I shot him a look and he returned it with a steady glare of his own. Angel, Gazzy and Nudge looked all tense when they saw us like this.
Jeb cleared his throat, breaking the tension.
"As I was going to say . . . either she's dead, or she has no recollection of her life as a mutant." Jeb finished quickly. We looked at him, dumbfound. We only had so many years of schooling.
"She doesn't remember who she is," Jeb translated. I think I speak for all of us when I say: WHAT THE FNICK!
"How is that possible?" Iggy asked him
"Well that's all old technology; anyone could have easy access to that kind of machinery."
I saw horror in everyone's eyes.
"How bad is it?" I asked him
"I can't know for sure unless I see her."
"How do we find her?" Nudge asked. Six words . . .
"Well, I think, I may be able to track her," Jeb said, He walked over to his computers and started tinkering around with the switches and Nudge was helping him out. The rest of us stood there like imbeciles.
Twenty minutes later . . .
I was sitting against the back wall and Angel had fallen asleep in my lap. I gently stroked her hair every time she trembled, it was easy to forget that she was only six sometimes.
The Gasman was talking about a new bomb idea with Iggy, whose heart didn't seem to be in it. That's new. Iggy always loved talking about bombs, especially to Gazzy. Nudge was still off playing Einstein with Jeb. Every so often they would mutter something and then their hands would zip across the keyboard.
"I FOUND HER!" Nudge screamed, Angel woke up instantly and we all ran to Nudge.
"She's in New York! ZOMG I was like totally talking about that a while ago! Remember we were, like, with Dr. M and she was all ticked off at us, but Angel made her help us and then she like, talked about Jeb finding Max and I mentioned how Jeb tracked us all over the world and-"Gazzy shook his head at her as she talked through his hand, and then finally shut up.
"Jeb-" both Ig and I said at the same time. I saw him turn to glare at me and of course I returned it. What's his fnicking problem? I let him continue . . .
"Can you give us an exact location?" Iggy inquired, irritated.
"Afraid not," Jeb murmured sadly. I didn't push it; I decide to just let it go.
"That's fine, thank you Jeb. Come on guys, we have a lot of ground to cover," I said in leader like voice, and I started to head out the door.
'How are we going to find Max in city with over twenty million people?'
"Don't worry Fang, we'll find her," Angel assured me. I smiled at her. I actually felt better.
"Thanks Ange,"
"Mhmm, oh and Fang?"
"Yes Angel?" She smiled at me and raised her hand up. Oh no. I closed my eyes as the searing sting came back.
Guess what? She slapped me. Big surprise.
"What. The. H. Was. That. For?" I curled my hands into fists.
"Well everyone else got to do it," she said all wide eyed. Iggy and Gazzy high fived and laughed like hyenas. Nudge was biting her cheek to hold back her giggles. I sighed and shot up into the air. They all followed me one after another.
Don't worry Max, I'm coming . . .
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You guys must hate me for slapping Fang four times.
Kiki: Hey Fang?
Fang: (has a hand on both of his bruised cheeks) yes….
Kiki: Here hold my cookie, (hands Fang a half bitten cookie)
Fang: (takes cookie) why?
Kiki: SO I can do this! (Slaps Fang)
Fang: Ow!
Kiki: (Grabs cookie and runs away before he can strangle her) MVHAHAHA!
Hehe, there's slap number Six?
WARNING! I'm going to be switching Pov's a lot in the next chapter, and I might just bring Max in…..
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