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SPECIAL THANKS TO :
Ha ha ha: thank u so much! U left me like 4 reviews! I'm dedicating this chapter to you lol,
Elmo's Stalker: XDXDXDXD that is the Fnicking funniest review ever! I loved how you tortured Lissa! If u guys are reading this, you should check out her review! Fang and Max were together, but Fang just thinks they cared about each other a lot. Just because you go out with a guy that doesn't mean you love them. Of course since they were Best friends for the longest time they love each that way too. That's why Fang didn't know that's Max loved him.
Kiki: Hey Fang guess what?
Fang: (covers into his corner of Emo-ness) what?
Kiki: you got virtually slapped 12 times and Iggy threw an ice pack at you
Fang: ugh! I know I still have a bump on my head.
Iggy: It's called I have skill and you don't! MVHAHAHA
Fang: (attacks Iggy)
Kiki:( slaps fang)
Fang: HEY!
Kiki: sorry Fang, but everyone loves Iggy now, you attack him then you'll get way more slaps then that.
Iggy: hehehe I'm the new favorite I can see it already …..Tall, Light and Smexy
Kiki: just because you're a figment of my imagination doesn't mean going to call you that
Disclaimer: I don't own MR,
Claimer: I own all OOC's and plot
Quote of the week: Birds of a feather Flock together
P.S I'm really happy with the way this turned out so I'm sure you'll enjoy
Chapter 4: Used
Lissa's pov
I'm going to kill that bitch, Angel…
I had everything under control until she had to come and screw everything up. I had Fang under my control! Do you frikkin' know how hard it was for me to find him? It took a lot of energy and the perfect timing. Plus the whole having a full moon crap really screwed things up. After I found Fang in Virginia, I knew that we were meant to be, but he only cared about that horrible B Max. She thinks she's so special! I mean HELLO…I'm part cat! And unlike her I'm not a mess up, I'm the real thing. I knew the only way to get to Fang was by getting rid of Max. Then I had to frikkin' figure out where the hell they lived, if it wasn't for my father, I would have given up this a long time ago.
My Father approves of this plan...I guess. It's not easy to seduce someone like Fang either, for starts seduction requires months of absorbing the moons energy, I get the most energy when the moon is full, and when we have a black moon it sucks the energy back pretty rapidly. Plus Fang was supposedly in "love" so it took twice as much energy. I waited day and night for six months planning and plotting. Then that little brat had to find out about my plans and ruin everything! Well if I can't have Fang then no else can either. Once I think I want something, it has to be mine or else….
First, I'll kill that bitch Max, and after her the little brat.
If Fang still doesn't want me after that then he'll leave me with no choice but to kill him too.
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Max Pov (bet u were waiting for it weren't you?)
I stroked my fingers along the keys of my piano, and then I looked up at the clock. Madame Dominique should be leaving any minute now. I loved playing my piano, but my teacher is so strict, I respect her very much but she is still a bit strict. But I'm not complaining about it, my sister works very hard to pay for all these private lessons and the homeschooling. I don't have the nerve to tell her I wanted to go to high school like all the regular teens in our neighborhood. But I could never be like regular old school children; I was burdened with the gift of wings at birth. Yes, actual 13ft long wings, they are a burden and I shamefully admit that I have no idea how to use them. Brigid told me that before the car crash I used to know how to fly.
Ever since the crash people have been treating me like I'm disabled just because I have long term amnesia, I'm glad I don't remember what happened before, at least I think not. But I have no time to dwell on the past; I have enough to do in the present.
I have to help my sister, Brigid, plan for her wedding (she's marrying a man named John Perry, who keeps on eyeing me weirdly. He and Brigid were colleagues, apparently. )
Work my shifts at Starbucks Café
Piano lessons
Homework
Homework
And more Homework
The list goes on…..
I felt a sharp sting on my hand.
"Ouch!" I shouted, pulling my hand back. I cradled it in against my chest. Madame was glaring at me furiously. What happened to 'violence is never the answer'?
"You should be playing keys C and F, not C and G and do you not see the sharp sign?" she yelled at me in her heavy French accent. I felt my face sink. I snuck a peek at the clock while she continued yelling. Yes! It's 4:30, her time is over and my shift starts in a half an hour!
"I beg your pardon Madame," she would smack me across the face if I didn't talk in proper language. "But I must be going, my shift starts in a half an hour," I think I sounded a bit too happy, and I'm sure she could tell too! I'm a horrible actress and an even worse liar.
"Oh yes, I don't see why such a young maiden such as yourself is working... In my days, women were required to stay home and work on needle work….." I tuned her out as she criticized modern culture. I tried to pack my things up as casually as I could and I stood up and signaled her to the door as she kept rambling.
"Women of my country were to stay at home and raise a family…." I nodded at her and reassured her that those were my plans for the future. Thankfully she believed me, what do you know? Maybe I can lie after all.
She finally left five minutes later we just stood near the door frame as she lectured me. I slammed the door shut and rushed into my bed room. I quickly undid the hooks on my evening gown (Madame Dominique requires one) and ripped of my sunbonnet (which is ironic since I'm playing indoors!). Who the hell wears sun bonnets?
I quickly slipped on a light blue tank top and put on my favorite flowing jeans skirt that hung just above my knees. I yanked my pony tail so that my hair lay flat and in pretty blond locks of curls. I ran to the front and put on my blue chunky flip-flops.(A/N sorry people I couldn't find a picture, and no Max is not a slut so don't imagine a mini skirt or a short one, it's about an inch above her knees,)
Oh no! I was already running late! I yanked my door open and charged down the stairs and through the front lobby and out the front door. I ran about three blocks without breaking a sweat and I got there with a minute to spare!
I walked around back to the Staff room and grabbed my apron. I was struggling to tie it on when I felt strong hands replace mine; I turned around and smiled at him. Sam….
Call me crazy but I've had a crush on Sam since the day I took this job, he's just amazing, as in heart dropping amazing.
"Hey," I said and smiled at him. Sam is my absolute best friend, next to J.J of course.
"You're welcome," he smirked at me and walked away, I felt myself blushing and laughed at my silliness.
"Sweetie, your mouth is hanging open again," J.J informed. I blushed and clamped my mouth closed.
"I don't get why you don't just ask him out!" She said….again. We have this argument at least twice a day.
"I told you J.J, I don't want to ruin our friendship!"
"Well, all I see are two sophomores flirting outrageously again," she said, making a tsk-ing noise. I blushed tomato red.
"He's a senior!" I argued.
"By the way sweetie, your usual costumer is here," she said, bringing out a pitcher of black coffee.
"O, she's here again?" I sighed. My 'usual' costumer is some red-headed girl named Lizzy. She and Sam go to the same school, and they're good friends. I didn't understand why she always showed up here. She would always stare at Sam, and then bark out order at me. I really don't get it.
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My shift is almost over! Lizzy is still here, and has been for the last 4 HOURS! I was heading back to get my stuff out of the staff room when Sam stopped me.
"Hey Max," He says giving me that oh so beautiful smile. I swear my heart melted right there! I smiled back at him shyly. That's me shy, pathetic old Maximum Ride. Maybe I should change my name to Minimum Ride, Mini is a cute name.
"Hi Sam."
"I was just wondering if you needed a ride home." He flashed a smile at me and flipped his goddess blonde hair out of his eyes. I think I forgot to breathe.
"I-um…uh," crap, not good. I'm choking on my own words. "Sure," I fluttered. Smooth Max! I mentally lectured myself. He stared right into my eyes and smiled. I saw his face lean toward mine. OH MY GOSH! It's finally going to happen! HE'S GOING TO KISS ME. I squealed on the inside as our lips connected.
A minute later I pulled back and smiled at him. My lips were tingling with his touch.
"Wow," he said, I saw a tiny flash of regret in his eyes. What's that all about?
"I'll be right back, I need to get my things," I murmured, keeping my eyes glued to the ground. He nodded at me; his eyes were turned in a different direction. I followed his eyes to see the red head glaring at me. I whipped my head around before he could catch me staring.
I walked into the staff room, confused as ever but elated that Sam kissed. OMG! I can't believe that was my first kiss! Call me weird but I swear it didn't feel like a first kiss. And it felt weak to me? I stood in there for about 10 minutes before I realized I had to get back to Sam. I rushed out the room excited to see him, but he was in the booth with Lizzy.
I stuttered to a stop, he was smiling at her and she had her head on his shoulder. I took a deep breath and swallowed in my pain and walked up to their table.
"Hey guys, what's up?" My voice was surprisingly calm, I saw them break apart.
"M-Max I can explain," Sam stuttered.
"Don't worry baby, I'll tell her," Lizzy slurred and batted her eyelashes at Sam. I fought back the urge to cry. "Look honey, my boyfriend here was just using you to get to me; he doesn't give a flippin horse shoe about you, go find your own man because Sammy and I are meant to be!" She snapped. I tears slid down my face; I ran out of the Café. I liked him so much it hurt and he used me!
Is that all I'm worth? Being used? I guess I was never good enough for Sam. It's all my fault for not being confident. I kept running and running I didn't look back, after a while I realized I didn't know where I was going. I slowed to a walk and took in my surroundings for the first time.
Where am I?
I kept walking straight looking for familiar street signs or a cab somewhere. I've never been out in the city on my own, and I was scared to death at the moment. I kept going, too afraid to turn back;it took me a while to realize that-
I was being followed….
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