Sorry this chapter came so late got distracted with writing my own book. Anyway I hope you like it but if you don't please tell me and let me now how to improve.
Chapter 2:
Mary opened her eyes, the trees swaying above her. She sat up and looked around. "I might get to Camelot today" she thought while standing up. After she'd routinely packed up the camp. Mary started to walk to Camelot with a confident stride.
She came down a peacefully quiet lane with trees both sides. As she walked past an unusually out of place bush, it started to rustle. Mary ducked behind a tree with no hesitation. She confidently peeked round the tree. Suddenly, something jumped out! It's just a squirrel she thought and leant back on the tree. It was at this point she noticed something in the distance. She decided to have a closer look.
It started to become clear that it was a camp so she stopped.
"Whoever is there must be important if there's at least twenty soldiers guarding it." she said to herself mockingly. She got a little bit closer and as she did, she started to hear footsteps behind her. Mary slowed down and thought to herself nervously, "Come on, pull yourself together, you've been trained for this!" Mary stopped and turned around. There stood Merlin. The wood from his arms came crashing to the ground. Mary turned her head to see if there was anything behind her. They were alone.
As my sister says: Short but sweet. You have any problems with the length, go talk to her. Here, I'll aid you. Complain to Iymea!
Sorry this chapter was so short I just thought it was goodish. The next chapter will be much longer. Will try and post again soon.