Alright! First chapter here we go... This is my first ever fanficton! Please send reviews if you like it! I love positive feedback!
* = Ending/Beginnig of a thought. For example: *Dog* (first thing that came to mind...) Also another note, Showing your legs during the Victorian Era for girls, was not lady-like.
I own nothing! Except my idea's and my character Estelle! (and a few other characters that don't stick around long...)
The sun was barely up yet, but Estelle awoke from another nightmare about a boy named Ciel... "Estelle!" Estelle's foster mother calls up the stairs. "Are you ready yet?" *That's right... I'm going to a funeral...*she thought. *My foster father's funeral.* "Er... Just a second Luella" she called back down, then shut the door and got dressed in a black dress with a scarlet red ribbon around her rib cage, tying into a big bow in the back. She wore leggings under them of course... Showing your legs would be disgusting! She ran down the stairs and jumped from the last two steps.
"Don't jump off of the steps. It makes your dress fly up. Proper ladies walk a steady pace the full way down the stairs." Luella -Estelle's foster mother- said. "Yes Luella."
The funeral was the most heart-wrenching thing she ever went through. Jasper was her only father figure since the fire, now all she had was Luella. Don't get me wrong, she loved Luella. Luella's just not as care-free and fun loving as Jasper was. Estelle sighs and goes to her toom after eating roast turkey with dressing for dinner.
Mina -Estelle's maid- helps Estelle out of her dress and into a night gown. "Sleep well my lady..." Mina says and shuts Estelle's room door.
When Estelle awoke it was about 4am. "Luella?" Estelle called down the stairs. "Luella i know your up. The lights are on!" she says making her way down the steps. As soon as she can see Luella she screams. Luella has a knife in her neck and is laying in a pool of blood. "LUELLA!" Estelle screams in horror. Estelle then lost all faith in God, which summoned a demon. A figure of a boy appeared and time froze. "Do you wish to make me a contract?" it said. Estelle thought for a minute "Well i don't have all day, you know." It said. "Yes i do" Estelle settled an argument in her head by saying this. Her whole world froze. The figure nodded. "What do you wish for?" it asked. Estelle though for a moment, "To find out who did this to my foster parents. And kill them." The figure nodded again. "Where would you like your mark then?" it asked. "How about my shoulder?" "Perfect."
The figure of a boy came out into the light. A boy who looked about 12 or maybe 13 with silver-ish blue-ish hair, red eyes, and all black clothing came out. "Well then. Shall you name me?" Estelle thought about her continuous dreams of that Ciel Phantomhive boy... "Your name is Ciel." Ciel looked shocked "Um... Okay." he said with a smile. *does she know of the Phantomhives?*
END OF CHAPTER ONE
So thats the end of the first chapter! I really hope you liked it! Dang! Jasper and Luella were such pretty names too...
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