The second chapter was fine, but when I read it myself, I got lost. I made mistakes on the names twice and mistaken it on pronoun things.
Hope you all enjoy my current story I am writing right now, A Week's Worth.
Chapter 3: Week 3
Day 1
The school started off like always. But life as a freshman wasn't that easy. To Blossom, it would, but Buttercup might just don't care about any of her grades, and Bubbles is just worried. She doesn't like the start of her freshman year but liked to meet new friends and her current boyfriend Boomer Jojo of the Rowdyruff Boys. She knew that their love was forbidden and that they couldn't be together. Her father told her whichever boy you like best is yours, but when he found out that the boy could only be Boomer, Professor started to avoid his beloved daughter.
Blossom just went along with it and never talked to Bubbles about these things. She talks for help and sharing stories and staying together with Bubbles when she's hurt. Blossom cared about her sisters. Whenever Bubbles is so deeply depressed, Blossom promised that she will watch over Bubbles until midnight, staying awake trying to warm Bubbles up by the hall lights.
Buttercup also began to think about her sisters since her start of a freshman from reading books and other information. She didn't know what to do when she grows up or when she graduates college. Will she survive her life? She thought that cooking was way more difficult and was one part of life, so she eventually became a level 2 cooker. She learns from Bubbles and the Professor, barely Blossom because she's bad with it and has to look through recipes.
Bubbles still have a caring heart to many other people. She was popular around the school, sometimes around town, and famous for being a Powerpuff girl. There were rarely any fights or crime happening, but she still loved how Townsville worked out become. When she's alone, not with Boomer, since high school, she would go to a hill so high that she could see the sunset going down and the rays reflecting Townsville's outskirt. Each and every day, the sunset is at a different angle or is just not like the same thing happening over again. It not's exactly right where it is, because the 24 hours always change and the seasons come.
Bubbles' POV
I walked with my backpack behind me; I only brought my backpack to put in my locker for some other issues. It's not that I am secretive; it just feels so comfortable with my backpack around my back. I know High school has a lot of subjects and tons of big notebooks, but don't underestimate me! I can reduce the weight or mass of my backpack since I have superpowers. In addition, it feels like it's as light as a feather.
Someone pushed me, every day the same. Everyone pushes, squeezes, and bumps into people. Still, that is the same even for a high school level. Most high school students feel brave and confident by walking to their classrooms and are used to being quick, not late. High school students don't care about chatting – well, at least for Blossom. I like chatting with friends, but it bothers Blossom. Whenever she walks just to hurry to become number one to reach there, someone stops in front of her and hugs the person near that someone. It slows Blossom down and it sometimes causes her to crash into somebody else.
Buttercup, however, has no problem with the hallway. Though yeah about chatting too, she thinks those people are noisy and how does the voice level temperature decrease when everyone's inside a classroom? She doesn't even seem to knock down people, push people, or even have done something to other people by walking on the hallways, that's because she's always FLYING!
I remained with my own way. But walking here today felt like I was going to melt down and causing everyone to step on me. I felt like I was being avoided by people, especially my family. I didn't even hear any more caring and welcoming sayings from Buttercup, neither Blossom. Professor starts another subject as soon as I talk about school, he was afraid of me for bringing up Boomer. Blossom just stops us all by saying "Save it till dinner is over" but that never happens and I eventually forgot what I was going to say. Buttercup just grabs food and food on the dinner table and ignored the bad comments Blossom made, ignored the dinner policy Professor made, and ignored my speeches when possible.
Day 2
I saw Boomer and my heart immediately sank. I wanted stay with him for now just to cheer my emotions up. But I had another thing in mind, I wanted my family more than Boomer, and the way I could bring it back was to avoid Boomer. But would they notice it or just kept on ignoring me? Or is it just my problems inside me, not the way they thought about me?
After school, Boomer came up to me with a bright face lit up. I was so sorry that I had to avoid him, avoid his cute face and nice behavior that I wanted so much. I sighed and I looked up at him, his smile also disappeared and followed my actions. I wanted to tell him "Leave me alone, I just want some independence for now…" But I couldn't say that…
"What's wrong, Bubbles?" Boomer blurts out, I felt very sad once he asks me that. I don't know what to tell him, but before long, he replied to himself: "Is it that I am a bother to you?"
I wanted to answer him "No, you aren't…" Nonetheless, he was really right. Soon, I found myself saying: "Boomer, will we be together forever? I heard about the Buttercup news. She fought Butch and stuff…"
He cheered me on, "Of course! You will be the happiest, the healthiest, and the fortunate one! Buttercup just did it because she was so worried about you! She only did it because she thought people's relationship, like their own siblings, should have a happy life! You see, Buttercup thinks and worries about you. So does your family, don't worry."
Boomer went away with it, and I accepted his words. But I never said anything about Buttercup doing this thing for me, I only said Buttercup fought Butch and that he will be mad at my sister for fighting his brother… And also, he seemed to know what I was thinking.
"Bubbles, don't think too much. You will be with me, I don't know if we will ever separate," he told me. I don't know what to do now, is Buttercup on my side? Will our relationship balance up my family? As I start to think more about it, the way I wanted to achieve things fell.
Day 3
I had to go talk to Buttercup; I had to talk to her what she really meant for fighting with Butch.
I saw her going to the entrance of the school. I was walking with Boomer, so she and Blossom went ahead. I excused myself to Boomer so I could talk to Buttercup. I hadn't thought about it last night since I was so nervous with Blossom and Professor being there. Besides, all Buttercup does around the house is just basically playing video-games.
I wish that I would just keep up more and more.
Anyways, stay tuned! The next chapter is Chapter 4: Week 4! It is still about Bubbles and Boomer's relationship… if somehow I could make it better?
- ScienceCRaZyZone
