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I have been getting negative reviews for this and I would to explain some things :
Review 1) Even after she became a vampire she is still defenceless? What about her powers? Why does she has to in a cottage? Come on give us something about her POV? Will she hate Edward and kick his ass if she ever remember, because that would be cool?
Answer : She is not defenceless but is unfamiliar with her new life , later on the chapters she will be more outgoing but some other things are to occur yet . Her powers will be discovered later on in the chapters . They have a cottage because Farron is a gentlemen and thought Bella would be more comftable living in a cottage for a while , she is still new at her vampire life and is adjusting . Plus , having a bed helps the vampire sex!
Review 2) This make no sense! It was supposed to be a Bella POV. This new characters have a back-story, unlike Farron, whose Bella's mate why didn't say anything about. And I thought they became nomads, why do they have a cottage or need supplies
Answer : It does make sense in away but I see where you're coming from , this is a confusing story that will be clearer in the end . It jumps between POVS , this chapter is actually Bella's , also Farron's and it provides more detail on his life . They have a cottage for a while to make Bella more comftable , they need supplies as in clothes , they're not gonna wear the same thing forever.
Review 3) I like the form she is discrived after her transition, but this was supposed to be a story about Bella POV. How did she felt after her transition? How did she felt after seeing herself in the mirror? How was her first hunt? And then what do we know about Farron? Why did he give her a choice instead of drain her? How did she felt in love with and vice-versa
ANSWER: THIS CHAPTER REVELAS ALL ON HOW SHE FELT AND PROVIDES A BACKGROUND STORY TO FARRON .
REVIEW 4 ) I thought That this was a Edward/Bella story ?_
ANSWER: It is but Farron and Bella are mated at the moment , Eli wants Bella , Edward thinks Bella's dead , it's a love triangle or square or whatever but it's be EdwardxBella but …
Review 5) I like this new twist from NM, but don't think it's a little to sudden that a vampire just appear right after Edward took off. You could give more details about this Farron, like his appearance (weight, hair, age...) and his origin .
ANSWER: HIS BACKGROUND STORY IS REVELAED IN THIS CHAPTER.
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BELLA'S POV
Why? Why me? It's like I'm in a bubble , as if I've forgotten how to communicate with the world ! Ever since my transformation , I've felt a mixture of emotions that are impossible to describe . Farron reminds me of Ed- HIM , he is like my Ed- him . I feel as if he never left when I'm with Farron . I feel like my dead heart is beating again . Although , I wish I could tell him I wanted to hunt the way the Cullen's do . I hate hurting innocents for reasons beyond sanity . My heart belongs to HIM but it's now split in half for Farron . My life becomes more and more complicated each second….
When I first woke up from my transformation , I had forgot about Farron , until he came into sight . He held a mirror in front of me and waited anxiously to see my reaction . My features had increased in beauty due to my change from mortal to immortal . I now had chocolate , brown hair that curled slightly at the bottom , it lay just past my arse . My lashes were now thick and black , my iris were blood red , a sickly blood red . I had a straight , small but perfect nose and plump lips that matched my eye colour . Skin as soft as silk , I looked like a doll . I woke up wearing a white night gown that was made of soft fabrics , he explained he didn't see anything he shouldn't and for some strange reason , I believed him !
I truly do wish I could speak , I just can't ! I try to open my mouth to speak to him but all I feel is a numbing in my mouth . If I could speak I'd tell him :
That I loved him .
That I am thankful for his kindness .
That I wish to spend all of eternity with him , I will as well as soon as he says I do and I nod in the church , or wherever our wedding may be.
The nomads we passed scared the Hell outta me , the female seemed the most intimidating , followed closely by her mate but the other male ….he seemed nice , very nice . Attractive and kind hearted . I hoped we wouldn't cross paths with them again , I was fairly certain I wouldn't make it out of that one .
HIM , I miss HIM , although I feel content with Farron , I know that I will always have this huge hole in my heart , my special place just for HIM .
"So Isabella I realised , I've never told you my story have I my love? Would you like to here?" His voice was music to my ears .
I nodded and sat on his lap waiting for him to start , I gazed up into his loving eyes and my life suddenly felt a whole lot better .
"It all began…."
Farron's POVS
Her hair was sprawled all around us , my arms tangled in her lovely locks . Her eyes were full of pureness and innocence , my love for this woman is enough to fill every life time .
"It all began…" I started , she rested her head on my shoulder , her gaze not breaking . " In a small town in Spain , I was born there to my half Spanish mother and American farther , my sibling ,Lucas and I , were raised in Arkansas by our parents and Aunt Penney whom was a kind soul , we were all happy ….. until my father was attacked by an animal whilst hunting in the forest . My mother reported he died shortly after the events . It wasn't long later , that she passed on herself due to medical reasons . My Aunt loved Lucas and I as if we were her own , when I was 14 she announced she was pregnant with a daughter , Blair , we were not alarmed or saddened but most happy for her . Her husband whom she married a year before our cousin arrived in the world was a great man , or so we thought…
Me and Lucas came in from our jobs of working in a bakery , our uncle was on a business trip out of town , our Aunt Penny broke down in tears . She explained that he husband had been abusing her physically and mentally , She showed us bruises and cuts , scabs and scars , permanent marks , also scratches . She told us how he threatened to torture Blair , then torture my brother and myself . Her exact words are still stitched into my brain : "As I promised your parents and myself , I'll keep you safe , but my responsibility as a mother is also on the line . So I shall not have any harm to damage your precious faces . You shall run away and take my princess with you , keep each other safe and don't turn your backs on each other . You don't deserve to live an abusive life style , nor does no one . When my Angel grows , tell her of me , her mother whom loved her as much as the world , tell her I'm sorry our time together was limited and tell her I miss her dearly . Tell her about me , tell her all the funny moments , tell her all the rules of reason she must follow to be safe , tell her to love me and keep me in her memory .Here's some money to keep you going , you boys must be in charge of yourselves and her now , I trust and l love you . I've packed some essentials , there is more money in your cases , now go , run , forever!" And so we ran …
We told Blair of the memories we once experienced when she reached the age of four , she loved her mother despite the fact she hadn't a single memory of her. She followed the rules and helped us out . She was a perfect , little angel ! Our most tragic moment was : When Lucas broke one of our rules – never turn your back on your family . He was tricked into joining a gang , he was promised food and water . All he got was pain . They stabbed him . I raised Blair on my own , when she was six and I was sixteen , I found us a little home and we lived in it until I was 20 . That's when I was turned, I wrote her a letter explaining that I had my life taken away , I will always love her and protect her no matter what . I found a family that was willing to adopt her . When she was 18 , I heard she got married , I was at the wedding but she hadn't known it was me . Later that year she gave birth to Ian Junior (named after her husband , Ian Senior) , followed by Melanie and Delilah , also Thomas .
I travelled alone , meeting various covens or other nomads such as our selves , I made many friends but continued to walk alone . Until I met you – the most extraordinarily astonishing creature I've laid sight on – I never thought I would be this happy." I leaned in and connected her lips with mine when I was finished telling her my story . She stroked my hair which I guess was a forum of symphony from her . Her eyes were laced with venom as was mine , I didn't want to upset her with my past memories .
"Let's discuss the wedding!" I beamed attempting to change the subject .
Her smile was growing as was my own . "Do you want to look up dresses and venues on the internet?"
She nodded , I logged onto our laptop and typed into Google 'Wedding venues' we decided we wanted it to be open and airy , light and open . Magical . We then looked up 'Wedding dresses' she pointed to a long white one that had elegance but still had modern tweaks made to the detail in it . She also seemed to take a liking to the white one which had a cut out on the back and on the sides , it had a bow decorated with a diamond in the middle right in the centre of the dress . Although , the decision remains un final , we have inspiration , we looked up 'men's tuxedos for weddings' and I found some that sparked my interest . Tomorrow we would shop online for the perfect outfits …
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