the elder scrolls: mass effect

by Renegade of Sanity

the people of nirn unite and begin explore the star, but how will the rest of the races in the galaxy react to this newcomers with abilities almost god-like. Chapter five rewrite in progress

5. a quick message

I'm planning on rewriting Chapter five because of drui'id the druid's criticism. He or she mentioned several things in the chapter that didn't really make any sense. I'm not going to name them all, but they are enough to catch my eye and require a complete rewrite of the chapter. I also think I may have rushed the chapter a little bit. I'll like to thank drui'id the druid for pointing out he weakness of the chapter.

I'll post the rewrite of the chapter sometime during next Saturday and chapter six on the next.

If chapter five for any reason isn't satisfying enough then I'll just leave it and not rewrite it again for a third time.

Also many people suggested I get a beta-reader. Well, I don't really know anyone willing to be a beta-reader or anyone online willing to be a beta-reader. So, if anyone wants to be a beta-reader just ask and I'll listen to your criticism as long as doesn't completely rewrite the chapters.