AN: Hello guys, well, I'm sorry about the long wait for the update. I've been having wicked writers block and unless it clears up, updates will be like this. Though I do love reviews and they motivate me to write faster... *hint* *hint*
Honestly I am bored of this story, but I promise to continue to write it.
Anyways, here is your new chapter; also, I am considering changing this to a three book story instead of a six book one. A few reasons are that I am just honestly bored with this story at the moment and I would be happy just to stop writing it and start a new one, but I don't think I'll be the most popular user if I did that….
But even if I do this plan, and it is not decided yet, this will make the books longer, like, instead of thirty chapters maybe fifty or sixty for the last two books. Please tell me how you feel about this plan.
Lastly, if you want to contact me, please note me or comment on deviantART a website that I browse on frequently. I am more likely to respond on this sooner than I will if you try to contact me on Fanfiction. I am Wolftacoz, the same name I am on here!
So here is your new story, from a new point of view as well! :D
Fallenwing stumbled through the burned undergrowth. For all he knew he was the only survivor of the terrible blaze that destroyed his beloved clan BreezeClan. Embers still licked the green pines that were left of the clan.
As he walked he noticed a golden pelt lying in the unburned brush, the cat was covered in soot, making its small golden pelt look almost black except for the small golden patches that peeked through. He ran over to the cat and recognized it as Eaglepaw, an apprentice of the clan. His green eyes were closed, though he was still breathing. Fallenwing gently picked up the young apprentice in his jaws and carried him away from the embers that threatened to start the blaze again.
After walking for many fox-lengths he found the sheltered area by the river, far enough to be safe from the blaze for now. He had no idea what happened to RainClan. He remembered what had happened vividly. He blinked trying to push away the horrible memories, the memories of his clanmates dying as they unsuccessfully tried to outrun the blaze.
Fallenwing sighed as he sat on a rock waiting for the leaders to begin the meeting, RainClan was late, like usual; and he wasn't the most patient and understanding cat, just ask his apprentice Fernpaw. His tail twitched and he looked up to see Icystar, the leader of RainClan leading his clan into the clearing. Icystar smirked as Burntstar the leader of BreezeClan snorted at his tardiness. The two leaders began to converse and discuss what they would bring up at the gathering and Fallenwing sighed hoping that the leaders would finish their business soon and let the gathering start.
A crackle of lightning split the air as a storm gathered on the horizon. The humidity of the air increased and Fallenwing's fur began to poof up. He hissed in annoyance and began to groom his fur down, relentlessly only for it to arise again.
Suddenly Burntstar let out a yowl, "Let the gathering of BreezeClan and RainClan begin!" he declared. Chattering between the two clans seized and after a few heart-beats all was quiet, almost too quiet.
"Would you like to start Icystar?" questioned Burntstar, his golden eyes curious. Icystar simply nodded and rose to the front of the boulder that the two leaders stood on in the clearing and looked around the clearing.
"RainClan is doing well," he sighed. "But the two-legs that invade half of our territory in green-leaf have returned. They make so much noise and scare the prey away, and we are suffering dearly for it. Hopefully we will survive through green-leaf, and they will soon leave us in peace for no-leaf."
Burntstar nodded, but made no offer to give up any terriroty for the clan. Fallenwing sighed, this why he and Burntstar would never agree, he was always willing to help someone in need, and Burntstar was never willing.
Suddenly another burst of lightning shatter the sky, and everything was silent for moments afterwords. Finally Burntstar broke the silence as he stepped forward, his voice sounded uncomfortable and scratchy. "BreezeClan is doing exceptionally well, prey runs good and we have two new warriors, Harefoot and Swift-talon."
"Harefoot! Swift-talon!" cried the two clans, but not with much enthusiasm. The two warriors, looked sad and Fallenwing looked around the clearing glaring at a few cats who didn't join in at all.
"We also have a new app..." started Burntstar but he was interrupted by a roll of thunder and a bright white flash of light and heat. Suddenly a loud crack was heard and quickly droned out by the chaos that erupted shortly after. Finally the light dimmed and Fallenwing could see what had and was happening. A stray sliver of lightning had struck a tree overhanging the leaders, it had fallen on them both presumably killing them. It had also caught fire, fire that was quickly spreading from branch to branch and tree to tree.
Many cats were rushing from the enclosed clearing at one time, effectively blocking the exit as they all tried to escape. Fallenwing was already on his paws bounding away towards the exit, pushing past cats and finally he was through, along with about five other cats. Sudden the tree that was used to get to the clearing had caught fire, trapping every cat inside. Fallenwing turned and shuddered as he heard screams, screams that slowly disappeared the farther he got from the clearing.
He wanted to stop, to sleep but he could see the fire racing behind him, threatening to catch him like it had caught the cats in the clearing. Soon everything had become a blur, the running, finding Snowflash alive, the falling branch hitting her, the branch killing her. Fallenwing's mate, was gone. He kept running.
I know this is short, and I'm sorry, I'll will make the next one longer. I really hate writers block and please don't kill me for not posting for so long. My writers block has been so bad that this little chapter has been in the works for about two months now.
I am terribly sorry, Wolf.