Not As Perfect As It Seemed

by how to catch a moonbeam

Five girls. Three years. One room. There never was a clique. After waking up from a three-year-long coma, the PC finds out it was all just a dream. They're nothing more than five classmates who barely knew each other, linked together by a car-accident-induced coma and a silly dream. That "silly dream" was all they had, though, but is it enough to bond them together?

3. Chapter 4

Hey! Yet another update. This one from Kristen's POV.

Yeah, feel free to call me Caity! I don't mind! :)

Chapter 2- Outside the Pinewood apartments in Westchester, NY

Kristen Gregory huddled further into the backseat of her mom, Marsha's, car.

"Are you cold, sweetie?" her mom asked. "Do you need a blanket?"

Kristen grunted something like a yes, and reached for the worn red quilt her mother was holding out to her. Pulling it even tighter around her, she fluffed up her pillow.

She knew that being part of the Soccer Sisters was hard, but getting up at six a.m. to travel to a game? Whoa.

At least her mom had volunteered to chaperone Kristen and her soccer-bffs, Lila Ambrosi, Riley McMullan, and Perry Hess. They were crammed into the van, with Perry in the middle, Riley on the far right, and Lila up front.

A tendril of Perry's long, strawberry-blond hair blew into Kristen's face, courtesy of the AC. Waving it away, Kristen studied her friends. Only the back of Riley's head and her long black pigtails were visible, since she was digging in the trunk for her iPod touch, most likely so she could play Minecraft. Lila was already asleep, her caramel-colored bangs shielding her eyes.

You know, Kristen thought, sleeping doesn't sound that bad.

She sipped some lemonade Ice, and nestled into the corner seat. Slowly, she fell asleep.

Anyway, I am just so happy that I have so many favorites AND reviews already! Big hugs and virtual cupcakes for every reviewer!

Tell me what you think so far. I'm only up to chapter 7, so feel free to suggest any ideas for the character's personalities.

And, oh boy oh boy, one of the girls (hint: initials are AW) is the middle child of large family. I won't give you very many details, but I need some characters. Here's the form:

Name (be creative):

Age (20, 18, 16, 15, 15, 12, 10, 10, 9, 7, 5, 5, 5, 3, newborn) :

Boy/Girl (if the age is in bold, it's a girl, if it's in normal, it's a boy. refer to ages above):

Eye/Hair color:

Height/Weight:

Personality:

Other:

Runs from now until August 5th. If yours is late, sorry! Might use it as one of their cousins or friends. Also, you can submit up to five characters. If there's any empty spaces, I might personally ask for a character or use my own. Okay? Okay!