Hey everyone, I am still breathing. Sorry if I haven't gotten to this story in like... months or somethin' . But don't worry, I haven't forgotten about this story, in fact, i literally have been thinking about for my entire absents.. The thing is that ever since I have gotten a WattPad page, I have been drafting stories left and right. I still check up on my fanfiction page ever once in a while.
Anyway, I will contine this story one day, just not anytime soon (a.k.a maybe in a year in a half). I just have so much to do, I set my own deadlines and I am kinda due on one of my stories.
But also, around the time I was having fun writing this story and I was in the middle of writing chapter five. I went to check up on how Tragic Magic was doing so far, and I noticed I have gotten a review. But when I read it, the person who review violated more than of the rules that has stated when you sign up for it. The review read "This story is awful, you are {CENSORED} rubbish when it comes to writing stories."
Well, if the same person who wrote that is reading this, this is just for you; I did not write this just for you; so you have not a single right to judge someone who is still learning to write at a age of 13. I do have certain connections, and I could have you reported and other things to make you feel regretful for reviewing that, but instead, I was being more mature and responsible than you and just block your review from having it read by innocent people other than yourself. So to you sir, I hope this teaches you a lesson about being more retarded than a 13 year old.
Ok, now that I have gotten that off my chest, lets continue. I have thought to make it up, I would give you a sneak peak of Chapter 5
Lj suddenly found himself in a empty black room, well that's what it seemed like at least. Lj felt sweat come off his forehead, it was as if the room was heating up. Lj cautiously walked forward, but soon stopped when he felt a stinging sensation in his right hand. Lj fell to the floor in pain, he barely made out the look of his hand. But to soon see that it has been burnt. He felt a sudden deja vu, and that really scared him. The room suddenly lit up red, and all you could see what black flames getting closer and closer to LJ. His pupils narrowed as he soon realized where he was. He recognize the great hall of the Gloomsville Mansion. It was up in flames and Lj felt fright and pain that he only felt once in his life. Lj stood up and gazed at the great hall slowly falling around. Lj suddenly heard a familiar voice, a voice he hadn't heard in two years.
"Lj look out!" said the voice. Lj turned his head quickly to the side, and was really shocked to see Mizbiz running towards him, but she looked scared. Lj heard a cracking noise above him. He looked and saw a beam on fire falling right above him. Lj didn't know what to do, he just stood there paralyzed in fear. He soon felt a sudden push, causing him to fall to the ground. He looked up again to see, Mizbiz looking down at him, with a smile, like she was happy that he was now safe kind of smile, but, it also looked like a good-bye. But that all vanished when the beam fell on top of Mizbiz. She was knocked out (well that's what it seemed like). Lj just sat there in horror with tears flowing from his eyes, looking at his cousins body, crushed; and bleeding out . Then, a laugh echoed from nearby, Lj stood up from his spot, he could barely see because tears filled his vision. All he could see was the image a boy, slowly walking towards, with a grin on his face that was growing bigger and bigger.
"Know what it's like to suffer." He said. Lj didn't know what to do, he just stood there, with a weak look on his face. The boy turned his head slightly to the side, as if he was looking at Mizbiz. His eyes then narrowed and his grin was completely wiped off his face. He then looked like he was about to throw up, then turned around and started running off into the nothingness that once was the great hall. Lj was confused, but he didn't care anymore. He felt himself growing more and more tired at the second. He fell to the ground once more, and closed his to what seemed like death.