Our Father Kyuubi
Intro:
It should be noted that since I'm now out of school till next semester I decided to post this before my beta had a chance to get to it so I would not leave you with nothing, for more information go to my profile and scroll down to the bottom were my ANNOUNCEMENTS are.
So here is chapter three of OFK lol I'm not realy sure this chapter was necessary but it was fun, so many reactions so little time. Okay lets get on with things shall we? Don't forget to leave me a review just press the little button that says GO at the end of the chapter ^-^.
ANNOUNCEMENT!: Okay so I have 2 new story ideas only problem is I kinda promised my beta Ataraninja that I wouldn't post another story until RD (may or may not be out) had five chps. Out. So that means that I have to wait until the one that goes out first has five chps. Before I post the other so I'm putting it to the polls. Go to my profile now and find the place that says ATTENTION! VOTE HERE! Read it then come back finish the chap. And put your vote in for that in your review, or you could just pm me it's up to you. For Konoha the Other Village put in KOV, for Sisters put in S. Thank you for your time 'bows'
Disclaimer: I own Okibi's hair, Desira's hair, and maybe the hair I gave Sasuke and Naruto sadly that is about it 'cries'
"Speaking"
"Thinking
A day of parents and trauma –chapter 3
Desira followed slightly behind her new sensei taking deep calming breaths in order to stay calm. Said sensei was currently going on about the power of youth and how her teammates would show their flames of youth about having a fifth teammate (including Gai).
Seeing salvation Desira said "There's the academy!" pointing at the building with the words Ninja Academy written on it. Without looking back Desira ran right into the building. "Yosh! Desira-chan your flames of youth burn brightly!" Gai yelled coming up beside Desira. Desira twitched and said in a strained voice "Arigato Gai-sensei."
Gai gave her a bright smile before marching off down the hall. Desira sighed and reluctantly followed the spandex clad ninja. Stepping into one of the rooms Gai said "Yosh! Team nine (team Gai, it their number…someone pointed this out to me somewhere along the way .) please show your youthfulness by following me!"
Desira watches as an enthusiastic boy with bushy eyebrows, a pale eyed boy who looked board, and a bun haired girl that seemed scared got up and walked over. The four genin then proceeded to follow the strange man.
When they stopped they found themselves on a balcony. Yosh! My youthful students we have been granted a fifth member of our squad!" Gai said doing the good guy pose. After the other children had therally (okay guys I'm stupid apparently I can't get spell check to know what this is supposed to be and I can't spell it to save my life I'm sorry vv) looked Desira over she walked over and sat down on the bench with them.
"Yosh! Now we will introduce ourselves!" Gai said. "I'm Maito Gai (in the English version the use Might instead of Maito but I'm sticking with the original), I like training an besting my rival! My goal is to train you four into being the most youthful ninja of Konoha!" he finished.
Desira sighed before she spoke "I'm Ki Desira, I like beating up my tou-san, training with my nii-chan's, and if you influence any of these three (points at others) to dress like you I will castrate you Gai-sensei. Oh and my goal is to become a ANBU." She finished with frightening grin on her face.
Gai gulped before saying "Hai! Next please?" as he sweated a little. Tenten chuckled under her breath before saying "My name is Shinju Tenten, I like training with my weapons, and someday I hope to be as strong as Tsunada-sama."
Next to Tenten the bushy eye browed boy seemed a little confused from Desira's speech "I'm Rock Lee, I like training, and want to prove that hard work can beat genus!" he finally said.
Next to Lee the pale eyed boy sighed in exasperation before saying "I'm Hyuga Neji, I like to train, and do to my fate I have no goal." Desira looked at him and frowned "You know fate?" Neji blinked and said "What?" Desira nodded before saying "That's it when I get home I'm gonna give her a call and tell her a thing or two."
Clearing his throat Gai said "Yosh! Now I will speak with each of your parents about achieving your youthful goals! Now Desira-chan please lead up to your home!" he finished. Desira blinked at him "Seriously?" she asked causing him to sweet drop.
"Yes Desira-chan." Gai said. Desira shrugged and said "Okay but don't say I didn't warn you." When they arrived at the gate to the old Uchiha compound Gai frowned. "You live here Desira-chan?" he asked. "Yeah." was all Desira said as she walked threw the gates and all hell broke lose.
"Hold him Sasuke!" was heard before "RASENGAN!" was yelled by the same voice. "Dame it!" a different voice yelled as a crash was heard. Gai, Lee, Tenten, and Neji stared wide eyed as a red haired man walked around the corner.
The man blinked at them but before they could say anything screams of "RASENGAN!" and "CHIDORI!" WERE HEARD AS Sasuke and Naruto came around the corner. Each had their ultimate (sorta) move in hand and were charging at the red haired man.
Without turning around said man reached behind him and grabbed the boys by the arms (on wrist in each of his hands) before slamming both boys into the ground were they twitched.
Desira blinked before saying "Gai-sensei, team this is my father Ki Okibi, and my brothers Ki Uchiha Sasuke and Ki Uzamaki Naruto. Tou-san, nii-chan's this is my team Gai-sensei and my teammates Rock Lee, Shinju Tenten, and Hyuga Neji." she finished.
"A pleasure." said Kyuubi with a smile. Naruto sat up in the Naruto shaped indention in the ground and said "Hi!" with a bright smile. "Hn." said Sasuke from the Sasuke shaped impression in the ground.
"Yo…YOSH! I'm Maito Gai and I will be training your youthful daughter!" said Gai after a slight hesitation. "Ah! I'm glad to meet you!" said Kyuubi with a big grin. Desira twitched slightly before saying "Can we go now?"
Gai blinked and looked at her saying "I wish to get to know your family better." Desira nodded her head before saying "I see." she looked at Kyuubi as Sasuke and Naruto flanked her.
"MOVE OUT!" she shouted as she, Sasuke, and Naruto rushed Kyuubi causing him to quickly go on the defensive. Team one stared in shock as the four seemed to dance around each other.
The three children complementing each other perfectly never leaving an opening. The forced Kyuubi to stay on the defensive. Ten minute after the battle began it ended. The three children were on the ground panting while Kyuubi didn't even have a sweet going.
"Yosh! Lest go meet Lee-kun's family!" yelled Gai giving up on getting to know Desira's family better for now. Desira said "Hai Hai." in an out of breath voice as she climbed to her feet and followed her team out.
"Desira-chan your family is weird." said Tenten. Desira looked at Tenten and replied "Yeah." causing Tenten to face plant at the other girls reaction to her comment. "Desira-chan?" said Lee looking over at his new teammate.
"Yes Lee-san?" Desira asked. "Why did you and your brothers attack your father?" Lee said hie brow furrowed in confusion. Desira blinked before answering "Well here are a couple of reasons. The main one is that it's the best way to train and gain experience at the same time."
Lee's eyes widened before saying "Yosh! that is awesome Desira-can!" Desira nodded her head before saying "Plus I get a chance to try to kill tou-san." Lee sweet dropped at this. The rest of the team had various reactions. Gai was torn between cheering for Desira's desire to train, and horror that she was trying to kill her father. Tenten wondered if any of her teammates were sane. And Neji was ignoring them and wondering how two ninja academy students knew such advanced jutsu."
"Yosh! Lee-kun lead us to your youthful home!" Gai said. "Yosh Gai-sensei!" Lee replied before dashing off causing his teammates to race after him. After several minuets they arrived at an apartment building.
They followed Lee into the building as he made his way to one of the apartments. "Okaa-san! My teammates with to meet you!" Lee yelled opening the door and walking in. As his teammates looked on a short women walked into the living room out of what appeared to be the kitchen.
Her short cut soft red hair framed her bright blue eyes. "Ohyio! Welcome to our home." the women said with a smile. Gai's eyes widened as he stared at the women "Rose-chan?" he said in a slightly shaky voice.
The women blinked at him before looking at Lee with a bright smile before saying "See Lee-kun I told you you would find your Otou-san!" Lee's eyes widened as he looked at Gai "Otou-san?" he said in a shaky voice. Gai looked at Lee with wide eye's before saying in an equally shaky voice "Son?"
"Otou-san!"
"Son!"
"Otou-san!"
"Son!"
The pair began shouting while hugging as what would come to be known to team one as the unbreakable genjutsu from hell appeared behind them setting sun over waves washing onto rocks and all.
Several more hugs and a lot of crying later Gai pulled himself together and said "Rose-chan I will come back and we will talk later. For now Tenten-chan lead us to your youthful home!"
Tenten sighed and said "Sure why not." before leading them to a weapons shop. Looking at the rest of the team Tenten said "I live with my family above our shop." Desira smirked before saying "Looks like a fun place to live."
Tenten smiled over at the other girl before saying "Well I always have plenty of kunai and shuriken for target practice!" Desira laughed at Tenten's comment, before Neji scowled and said "Can we get this over with?"
Tenten frowned and Desira said "What's the matter Neji-chan, got your panties in a wad?" Neji turned bright ret at this but before he could say anything Gai stepped in "That was very unyouthful Desira-chan!" the spandex clad man said. Desira looked at Gai and said "Your point?" this caused Gai to break out into tears.
Laughing to herself Tenten pushed open the door to the shop "Welcome to Toushin! Can I help you with anything." an older version of Tenten said from behind the counter. Tenten smiled at the women and said "Hi kaa-san this is my team Gai-sensei, Desira-chan, Lee-kun, and Neji-kun."
The women smiled and said "Konichiwa I'm Shinju Hibana!" Tenten looked around before saying "Tou-san in the forge?" Hibana nodded before saying "Yeah, but it should be alright for you to stick your heads in and say hi."
"Alright then this way." said Tenten as she led team one around the counter and to the back of the shop. From there there were two doors and a stare case, opening one of the doors the group was meet with a blast of hot air escaping the room.
In the room a man with short cropped black hair looked up from were he had been cooling something in some water. "Hi Tou-san this is my team Gai-sensei, Desira-chan, Lee-kun, and Neji-kun they just wanted to say hi."
The man smiled at them threw kind black eyes before saying "Hi there I'm Shinju Keikan!" Gai gave him the good guy pose before saying "Yosh! Good to meet you Keikan-san now shall we go to Neji-kun's home and leave Keikan-san to his work!"
Neji rolled his eyes before saying "Hn" in typical emo mode. After some time spent walking the group found themselves in front of the Hyuga compound. Neji looked at the group, rolled his eyes, and led them in.
By passing many of the bigger houses Neji stopped in front of a modest dwelling. Neji opened the door and said "Okaa-san my team wishes to meet you." A women with long lose pale blond hair entered the room, her lavender Hyuga eyes making her already pale features almost ghostly, or angelic.
She gave a soft smile and said "Konichiwa, I am Hyuga Hatsuhi." Desira bowed and spoke in a foreign language. Hatsuhi's eye's widened before she answered Desira in the same language and bowed as well.
Neji's eye's got as big as saucers as he listened to the two. Gai, Lee, and Tenten looked on in confusion as Neji joined the discussion in the foreign language. When Desira broke out laughing Neji seemed like he was having a heart attack and Hatsuhi was giggling at her son's rare expression of shock (normally neutral face).
Finally Tenten said "What the heck is gong on!" Desira, Hatsuhi, and Neji looked at Tenten, Lee, and Gai as it they had forgotten the three were there. "Nothing you'd be interested in." said Desira.
"Why don't you let me decide that!" Tenten said angrily. "Just some old family business." Neji quickly put in much to everyone's shock (normally doesn't volunteer to talk). Hatsuhi lagged and said "Come in, I will get us some tea." "Hai! Hatsuhi-san!" said Gai doing the good guy pose.
…later that night at the Uchiha compound…
Desira smirked as she sat down to super. Naruto looked over at her and said "So what do you think about your new teammates?" She looked over at him and said "It certainly isn't a dual (I don't think that's right .) team." Sasuke snorted at this before saying "Right…" Kyuubi chuckled as he sat down "Just try not to kill anyone Desira-chan." the great fox lord said. Desira smirked and said "I make no promises."
End:
Okay some things you might want to know: I felt like making Gai Lee's father I mean come on look at them 'points at Lee and Gai' anyway I haven't worked out the kincks about why Gai didn't know about Lee yet so I left that out of the chap., so what is up with Neji, Hatsuhi, and Desira?...I'm not telling yet, when I do tell you will also find out what they talked about and what nearly caused Neji to go into cardiac arrest ^-^
Oh and just so you now honorifics:
Sama is like talking to your boss, saying lord (like saying Hiashi-sama instead of Lord Hiashi), or someone who you respect a great deal.
San is like saying miss, misses, or mister
Kun is the typical male honorific
Chan is the typical female honorific
Exceptions: when added to a males name chan can be seen several ways 1) he can be very girlish looking (example would be Tokiya from Flame of Recca..no seriously he's even been mistaken for a girl in the anime, course saying that to his face is suicidal), 2) you like him (like want to marry him and you're a guy kinda like), or 3) you are making fun of him by suggesting he is girly…in this case Desira would be using number 3.
Translations:
Kaa-san means mother Okaa-san is basically the same thing but honorific kinda respectful like
Tou-san means father Otou-san see Okaa-san
Ohyio means good morning
Konichiwa means good day or hello
Shinju means pearl I just felt like giving Tenten this last name
Toushin means sword blade
Hibana means spark
Keikan means crown of thorns
Hatshui means New Years Day sunrise, this name is taken from Konoha the Other Village, no I haven't started the story officially but I have the basics down…like everyone's name for example…well the main characters anyway (look under the beginning announcement of well ANNOUNCEMENT!)
I will refer to Kyuubi as Okibi only when someone is talking to him, about him, or introducing him other wise he is still Kyuubi. Question do you think he should have a pairing? If so I already have one picked out but im not saying yet 'looks mischievous' okay I think that's everything don't forget to review. (note that i've gone threw and made some major spelling changes, i still need to do some more but for now they will have to wait)
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