Our Father Kyuubi
Intro:
And on with chapter four of OFK 'grins' oh how I love this chapter 'snicker'…it helps that I was having trouble with the chap ten of HKC…oh well I'll get it soon hopefully for that story. Any way on with the story!
ANOUNCEMENT!: Okay so I have 2 new story ideas only problem is I kinda promised my beta Ataraninja that I wouldn't post another story until RD (may or may not be out) had five chps. Out. So that means that I have to wait until the one that goes out first has five chps. Before I post the other so I'm putting it to the polls. Go to my profile now and find the place that says ATTENTION! VOTE HERE! Read it then come back finish the chap. And put your vote in for that in your review, or you could just pm me it's up to you. For Konaha the Other Village put in KOV, for Sisters put in S. Thank you for your time 'bows'
Disclaimer: I own the pants I gave Naruto and Sasuke, yeah that about sums it up 'looks depressed'
"Speaking"
"Thinking
Oh Kami Help Us –chapter 4
Naruto and Sasuke looked at each other before Sasuke shrugged and Naruto rolled his eyes and they entered the classroom. In the class a hush fell as the students looked at Naruto and Sasuke in shock at the changes the two had made over the break. Both had their long hair held back in low ponytails.
Sasuke's sharp Uchiha bangs (yes I made that up) still framing his face. He now wears a long sleeve white button up shirt with the top buttons undone leaving a part of the shirt hanging open. His shirt is tucked into a pair of black baggy pants. The back of the shirt has the Uchiha fan on it, he has a kunai holster on his right hip, and wears a pair of black ninja sandals.
Naruto's bangs seemed longer and softened his features. He now wears a long sleeve shirt with dark orange and lined in black with black baggy pants trimmed in a matching orange. On the back of the shirt a dark red spiral rests, on his right hip a kunai holster rests, and on his feet is a pair of black ninja sandals.
Many of the girls in the room got hearts in their eyes as they looked at the two. Naruto gulped unaccustomed to the manic look he was receiving. Seeing his reaction Sasuke chuckled under his breath as the two took their seats.
As the two tried to look inconspicuous (unsuccessfully I might add) one specific girl stood up. With a greedy look in her eyes the girl walked over to Naruto and Sasuke and leaning over their desk grinned at the two. "Hello, I'm Yamanaka Ino. When did you two gentlemen move to Konaha?" the now identified Ino said batting her eyelashes at them.
Naruto looked taken aback and Sasuke attempted to stop the laughter building up. "What are you talking about Ino-chan? We were both born in Konaha." Naruto said confused. Ino's eyes widened before she quickly smiled and asked "Well then why did you two take so long in joining the Academy?" Sasuke placed a hand over his mouth as his eyes sparkled with myth.
Naruto looked even more confused before saying "But Ino-chan we joined the Academy at the same time you did." Ino frowned before saying angrily "No you didn't!" Hearing the door open the room looked up as a black haired girl entered the "Ohiyo Hinata-chan?" shouted Naruto.
Looking over Hinata blushed scarlet taking in Naruto's new look "Ohiyo Naruto-kun." she said shyly blushing bright red. The class fell silent as everyone stared in wide eyed shock at Naruto. Naruto looked over at Sasuke who was banging his head on the desk in an attempt to keep the Uchiha's world famous cool. "What the heck is you problem Sasuke-teme?" Naruto said with a scowl.
"SASUKE-KUN?!!" Most of the female population in the classroom said eyes as big as saucers and mouths hanging open. "Oh man it's too much!" said Sasuke before bursting into laughter and falling out of his chair.
This only served to cause the whole of the class to sweat drop. "Dad gum it teme stop that!" yelled Naruto standing over his prone brother. "Don't talk to Sasuke-kun like that!" yelled a pink haired girl suddenly standing up.
Naruto began sweating as she marched over to him cracking her knuckles. IN an instant Sasuke had pulled himself together and stood beside his brother scowling at the girl. "What the hell do you think your doing Sakura?" Sasuke said stopping the girl in her tracks. "Sasuke-kun?" Sakura said in a shaky voice.
Naruto sighed before saying "You know nii-chan I can fight my own battles." Sasuke blinked before sighing and saying "Gomen, nii-chan." Naruto chuckled as everyone face vaulted. "I didn't know you were brothers with Sasuke-kun, Naruto-kun?" said Hinata finding her courage to ask her question.
Naruto blinked before saying "We weren't, but Sasuke and I were both adopted by Okibi-tou-san so now we're brothers." Hinata frowned before saying "Does this mean you have a different name now Naruto-kun?"
Naruto gave her a huge grin before saying "Hai! I'm now Ki Uzamaki Naruto, and teme here," he points at Sasuke, "Is now Ki Uchiha Sasuke. Oh and we have a big sister named Ki Desira too." Hinata blinked and said "Sister?"
Naruto nodded and said "Yeah she's a genin now." giving her a big grin causing her to blush a brighter red and poked her fingers together. Naruto's eyes widened as he remembered something "Oi, your cousin Neji is on onee-chan's team!" he said shocking her.
"How do you know Neji-nii-san is related to me?" Hinata asked in a confused voice. Sasuke quickly said "Last night Neji came by our house with onee-chan, he told us." Hinata frowned and said "Neji-nii-san mentioned me?" Naruto realizing his blunder said "Yeah, he was muttering something about branch houses." as he did his best to look confused at this.
Sasuke sighed as Naruto looked closer to being constipated then confused, luckily Iruka chose that moment to enter the classroom causing the students to quickly get to their desks. With a sigh Naruto thought to himself Just in time Iruka-sensei. Iruka looked at Naruto and Sasuke and raised a brow.
He had talked with the Hokage about the boys being adopted and possible change in the way they dress. Kids these days, Iruka thought to himself "Alright class, let's get back to business." he said causing several groans as he began to lecture.
…With Kyuubi…
Kyuubi blinked awake as he stretched and got out of bed. The kittlings are all gone for the day since Desira is on her first mission He thought to himself as he grabbed some clothes and ambled to the shower. Blinking sleepily he stepped in and turned on the shower.
What should I do He wondered stepping out of the shower he dried off and with a sigh slipped on his clothes. Shaking his head vigorously to dry his shaggy mane of hair he shrugged and said out loud "Might as well explore." Stepping out of the Uchiha compound he cracked his neck before setting off.
..At ninja academy..
Iruka looked up at the clock and said "Okay class we'll take our one hour lunch break now. When we get back we will be doing target practice, and then some sparring so make sure you have your kunai and shrunken."
As he finished the class filed out, and in the blink of an eye, he was in an empty class room. Sighing he took out his bento box and a stack of paper. Will I ever just be able to enjoy my lunch without paper work? He thought to himself.
…Naruto and Sasuke…
The two sat on the roof of a building gasping for breath "You go through this every day?" questioned Naruto leaning over the railing. Sasuke nodded and said "Yeah, the terror that is known as fangirls has plagued me for as long as I can remember." Naruto nodded and sat down taking out his bento box he winced as he heard the yelling of "Where are you Sasuke-kun?!" from below.
"Naruto-kun let's eat lunch together!" was heard soon after causing Naruto to choke on the food he had just placed in his mouth. Sasuke shook his head sadly and patted Naruto on the back "Think of it as good evasion training." Sasuke said in a solemn voice.
Naruto teared up and said "Oh Kami! What have I done to deserve this!" in a surprisingly soft voice. Sasuke nodded again and said "Ask for me as well will you?" Naruto continued to eat as the door to the roof opened and he and Sasuke froze. As the two prepared to flee, Hinata walked out and closed the door behind her turning around she noticed Naruto and Sasuke for the first time with an eep.
"Na..Na…Naruto-kun?" she said with a stutter in her shock. Sasuke's eyes widened slightly as Naruto sighed and said "Arigato Kami-sama! Hi Hinata-chan! We were afraid you were one of those rabid fangirls."
Hinata blinked and said "hai…Hai." with a stutter once again in her voice. Naruto cocked his head to the side and said "Oi, Hinata-chan wanna eat with us?" "Ea..Eat with you?" Hinata replied her eyes getting even bigger. "Yeah, take a seat." said Sasuke with a strong gleam in his eyes. Nodding dumbly Hinata sat down and shyly began eating her lunch.
…With Kyuubi…
He had purchased several sets of new kunai and shuriken at a place called Toushin to replace the ones the kittlings had lost, damaged, and gotten broken during training as well as some interesting looking training weights that promised to make the kittlings sweat.
After leaving Toushin he had found himself in a place called an adult book store. He had been curious and gone in. He found he quite liked adult book stores, and had purchased the most interesting set of orange books. Now he found himself looking for a place to eat lunch. As his eyes fell on a particular stand, his eyes lit up with stars.
…ninja academy…
Naruto and Sasuke crossed kunai again as they continued their spar. The rest of the class looked on in wide eyed wonder, Iruka included, at the two's spar. Target practice had been a similar occurrence as the boys had hit the center nine times out of ten.
Now the two were sparring at speeds most genin couldn't dream of. Shaking himself out of his shock Iruka said "Okay that's enough you two." Stopping Sasuke and Naruto. "That's all for today, see you tomorrow everyone." said Iruka to the class.
Sighing Naruto shook his head and said in an undertone to Sasuke "I think we may have over done it." Sasuke rolled his eyes and smirked as he caught Hinata watching Naruto. "Oi, Hinata-chan want to join us for a snack?" Sasuke said to Hinata and Naruto's surprise.
"Nani?" Hinata asked shyly. "Our tou-san isn't the best cook so we were planning to get something to eat." Sasuke continued. "Yeah! Come on Hinata-chan let's eat ramen together!" Naruto said excitedly his mind zooming in on the food fact. Nodding shyly Hinata said in a soft voice "Hai."
As the group of three arrived at Ichiruka's they were greeted by the most peculiar sight. "Welcome kittlings, what kind of Kami food would you like from the Kami stand?" Kyuubi asked from behind the counter. He was in an apron and one of the stand hats giving them a big grin. Sasuke face planted, Hinata sweat dropped, but Naruto simply said "One bowl of beef ramen to start tou-san."
End:
Okay so what do you think? I know some characters are a little OC, but a lot happened in that one year back through time. I really enjoyed the ending of this chp lol I couldn't resist -.
Translations:
My honorific translations were meant to be simple so everyone could get an idea, I'm not into lengthy explanations :P
Nani means what
Bento box's are similar (notice I said similar not exactly) to lunch box's.
Teme means several things but here (and generally in the show) it means bastard (usually used in turn with Sasuke calling Naruto baka which is basically stupid or dumb, this is Japanese people words generally have more then one meaning so please don't get mad at me for not putting all translations up I know at best basic Japanese learned mostly from watching the original (as in the Japanese version with subtitles) and reading fanfic so yeah I'm learning it the hard word I have a sight I go to for things like name translations so they are all accurate.)
Kami means god or gods or even goddess so yeah its relative (not meant to offend anyone)
Oh and yes they are wearing the shirts from after the time skip, but with different pants because I felt like it - I think that is everything so let me know if I forgot something, and please leave me a review (be kind).
From my beta Ataraninja: I liked this chapter. Sasuke was hilarious in the classroom too. I like the OC Sasuke about as much as the original so no problems here.
HNN: that's a relief I was worried everyone would be all 'that's not how he's supposed to be' and then id be all like 'I know that but I felt like changing that its called author (authoress really) write!' anyway glad ya like it -
From my other beta Blue Bunny2: