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Chapter 3:

Percy POV

I woke up and rolled over to check the time it was around 8:00 and I heard a ruffle over near my bag I looked over and saw 2 telekhines rummaging through my bag and heard them saying this like let's kill them or ready and how should they kill us. I slowly reached under the bed and grabbed my backpack I pulled out a drink bottle and quietly unscrewed the cap, then just before I could attack Annabeth woke up yawned and said not quietly 'ugh whaaat time is it'.

I then gave her a shut up or we both die look as one of the telekhines jumped on the bed before it could stab me or Annabeth I made a few giant tentacles of water to grab it, it was starting to go unconscious as the other one lunged at me with a sword I then opened my shield watch and slammed it in the face, it lunged at me again and I hit it again, I the dropped to the floor grabbed my pants pulled out riptide uncapped it and just as it lunged at me I slashed it. In all my confusion and had forgotten about the other telekhine in my skirmish, I heard a yell behind me without turning slashed my sword backwards killing it, I heard more screaming and realizing it was Annabeth turned around and saw about another 12 telekhines, I suddenly threw my sword to Annabeth since she was defenceless, now without a weapon myself and telekhines surrounding me I made a ball of water out of the former tentacle and started shooting bits of water out of it at the telekhines in Annabeth's direction so she could take them out with riptide.

Annabeth then screamed loud with a voice full of pure terror as a telekhines stabbed her in the back 'help'.

I then full of complete and utter rage summoned riptide by using the water to bring it to me and released all havoc on those sorry sons of bitches(AN: there half dog)

Annabeth POV

After I had gotten stabbed I saw hell break loose. Percy had water flying; he had a mini water tornado where his legs should be and was skewering telekhines left right and centre. After about ten minutes all the telekhines were dead and Percy then ran over to me and inspected my stab.

'Shit its deep' he swore aloud.

Percy then created a rainbow and threw a drachma in.

He then yelled into the Rainbow 'Chiron, Camp Half Blood'.

'Hello Percy my boy what's the matter' Chiron answers.

Percy without talking at all nods in my direction.

'She got stabbed by a telekhine Chiron' Percy says.

'I'm going to tell you how to treat it person listen very carefully, time is of the essence'.

Percy nods at Chiron.

'Flip her onto her back, quickly now' Chiron instructs his voice filled with experience and confidence.

Percy does so, it is incredible painful.

'Now slowly and carefully cut the back of her shirt off' he tells Percy.

I feel the fabric on my back come as Percy cuts it with riptide.

'Good, know get some water and a piece of clean fabric, clean the wound, give Annabeth something to bite on and after that pour nectar on it' he says.

Percy grabs a blanket corner and puts in my mouth and tells me to bite on it I bite on the blanket as he instructs. He then uses his powers to bring some water over and dips the cloth in the water he cleans of all the blood from my back, he then douses the stab in water and very gently applies pressure to the wound. After that he grabs the nectar from by bag and pours it on my back

Chiron asks Percy 'do you have a bandage of any sort?'

Percy gives the room a quick scan before answering 'yeah we do'

Percy walks over to the curtain and cuts of a big piece.

'Know lay the curtain down on the wound applying lots of pressure' Chiron tells Percy, the concern on his face growing.

Percy does this and it doesn't hurt as much as you would think.

'Do you have anything to stick the bandage to her back' Chiron asks.

Percy says 'no'.

Then I realize I have sticking tape in my school supplies.

I then try to get Percy's by saying 'uh uh uh'

Percy stares at me I then motion with my head to my school bag. He then runs over there and opens it up and grabs the tape.

Chiron says 'sticky tape only one side at first, know stretch a corner and tape it, good good, know do the same with the other, yep keep going, okay tape each edge, know that you have done that go and get a long piece of curtain and cut it to about the width of the piece, well down, know sticky tape one side of the curtain on to the original piece of tape, start to wrap it around the wound, keep wrapping it around the until I say stop. Stop, know cut a small hole in the curtain, know keep wrapping round tighter then before and when you reach the hole stop and thread the curtain through it know pull very tight, try and slip it under the part just before the hole, perfect, know pull very tight and try and make a knot, yes just like that, know feed Annabeth some ambrosia and nectar'.

Percy goes and gets my ambrosia and puts a few pieces in then gets me to take a few sips of nectar, he looks at Chiron expectantly and Chiron nods his head motioning to give me more.

After a few more sips Chiron says 'stop, that's enough'.

'Thank you so much Chiron' Percy thanks.

'My pleasure, wouldn't want my favourite camper killed would I, Percy I am going to shadow travel on a Apollo camper over on Mrs O'Leary to take care of Annabeth, it will most likely me Will Solace, oh and one last thing tape a pillow to her back and sit her up on the bed not a chair, Will will help when he comes bye' Chiron tells us as he signs off.

Percy POV

I grabbed a pillow and cut another piece of long but thin curtain. I walk over to Annabeth and before she could see what was happening I sat her up and she groaned I then stuck the pillow on her back and tied the pillow on her and leaned her up against the headboard and stuck the other pillow behind her head.

'Can I have some breakfast Percy' Annabeth asks barely audible.

'Yeah sure Annie, what do you want' I say.

'Something hot' she asks.

'If I take my shirt off you'll get to excited' I arrogantly say.

'Actual food please' she chuckles out.

'I'll pick something on the street' I say while putting a pair of jeans on.

I grab a jacket, wallet and phone.

'Bye' I yelled to Annabeth as I walked out the door making sure to lock it.

I walked down the street spotting a Starbucks and some breakfast takeaway place. I go to the breakfast diner first.

I walked up to the counter and tell the cashier what I want as I quickly go to the Starbucks and order two Frappuccino's. I then ran back to the diner.

Just as I walked in they called out 'order 229'.

I run up thank the cashier and take the food with me as leave to go back to Starbucks. When I get back to Starbucks I see my order take it and walk home.

I open the door to our room and put our food on the table I grab Annabeth's Frappuccino and pass it to her.

'What did you buy me' Annabeth asks as I take a bite of my breakfast burrito.

'Was I supposed to get you something' I joke.

Her smile disappears and looks upset; I roll my eyes and chuck her the bag containing her food.

Her face lights up as she looks at the contents of the bag

'French toast' she beams.

Oh wait a minute I say as get the ambrosia and nectar.

I feed her some ambrosia and pour some nectar in the Frappuccino.

Annabeth smiles at me and says 'I love you Percy, do you love me?'

'I love you very very much Annabeth' I say.

'Hey, knock knock, Percy, Annabeth' a voice from the hallway calls out.

'Yo, Will' I yell out.

'Hey Percy' Will says and gives me a nod of recognition.

I nod back.

'Oh what the fucking shit happened here' Will says regarding the state of the room.

'I know shit indeed happened' I say.

'Hey Annabeth how ya feeling' Will asks Annabeth as he walks over to her.

'Okay I guess, not feeling too good and I can't sleep in this position' she tells him.

'Let me fix that up' he says as gently prompts her up and sticks another pillow under her and lies her head back down.

'Much better' Annabeth regards.

'How are you going to get her to New York, Percy?' He questions.

'We were going to shadow travel but that's not an option anymore' I said.

'Why not' Will said puzzled.

'It takes to much toil on a body and in the state she's in' I sigh.

'I can take, Percy, don't worry' Annabeth argues at me.

'No offense Annabeth, but you would be barely able take it when you're at full strength and at the moment the only reason your awake is because the pain is to excruciating for you to sleep' I argue back.

'On that cheerful note, you need to sleep Annabeth, I am going to give you a sleeping potion, please don't fight it' he tells Annabeth as he pulls out a vial.

'I am going to go know, she's fine, Percy, just remember to change the bandages' he advises me.

'About that I don't have any real bandage and first aid equipment' I say sheepishly.

'You can have this' he says giving me a satchel.

'And, she needs all of these potions here one for each, day and a regular dose of nectar' he quietly whispers to me and showing me which potions to give her.

'Okay, see ya' I say to Will.

He then takes an arrow out of his quiver and shoots it into the ground.

'New prototype, Transport Arrows' he says mischievously as he disappears.

Frederick POV

I had just arrived at Annabeth's Hotel and had walked into the elevator and pressed the up button, I hopped out on Percy and Annabeth's floor and opened the door. I then saw a mess everywhere.

'Hello Mr Chase, how are you?' Percy questions.

'Um good, not so sure about you two though' I say bewildered.

'Yeah monster attack Annabeth got hurt, stab to the back' he says as he motioning to the sleeping Annabeth.

'Okay here's Annabeth insurance cheque' I say as I hand Percy the cheque for 2,500.

'Whoa that's a lot of money' Percy exclaims.

'Yeah there was a lot of furniture, and other stuff' I told Percy.

'Okay bye, Percy, give Annabeth my regards' I say just before I walk out the door.

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