Caleb finally made it to the room where his girlfriend was.

"Han, why did you scream?"

He didn't get an answer. Hanna wasn't making any movements. She was just standing there, looking down at something.

Caleb asked again, "Hanna, why did you scream?," but he still didn't get an answer. He just got silence. Being ignored was making him angry.

Caleb moved closer to Hanna to see what her problem was, but then he saw what she was looking at. Now he knew why she screamed, and why she was being silent. On the floor was his father and mother lying in their own pools of blood, dead.

Caleb couldn't believe what was in front of his eyes. He muttered under his breath, "My mother and father…are…dead."

Hanna turned around and just stared at him, trying to figure out what to say. "I think we should call the police now. We can't do this on our own anymore. This is way too dangerous. Can I, please?" You could tell by the look in her eyes how desperate and scared she was.

"Fine, go ahead. I'm going to try to find Jenna while we wait.." He began to walk away but then he realized he forgot to tell Hanna something. He turned around and added, "By the way… the money is gone. Jenna took it, she tricked me.."

"We'll find her and the money. Now go, I'll catch up with you after I make this call, but be careful and don't wander too far. I don't want you to get hurt…. Help will be coming." Saying that made her a little relieved. The police were going to come and they would be safe.

Caleb continued on further and further into the warehouse to find Jenna.


Hanna took out her phone and dialed 911, but something popped up. "Shit, there's no signal in here." She had to move somewhere else in order for the call to go through.

Hanna ran as fast as she could to the outside the warehouse. She saw that her phone had a few bars, so she proceeded to make the call.

"911 what is your emergency?"

"I need help. I'm about 7 miles away at this old warehouse. My boyfriend's father is dead and we're in danger. She paused for a moment.

"And please hurry!"

"The police are on their way. Don't move they'll be there soon."

Hanna hurried back into the warehouse to try to find her boyfriend.


"Caleb… where are you?," she yelled.

There was no response. She opened her mouth to yell again, but she was stopped by a loud crash coming from the roof of the building.

Hanna got a painful feeling in her gut. She knew Caleb had to be up there.

Thinking to herself: Run, run, and don't stop. Hurry, before it's too late.

The voice inside her head persuaded Hanna to move even faster to find Caleb. She found a staircase and began going up, skipping as many stairs as she could. After climbing stairs, she finally made it to the roof. Hanna complained, "Ugh, that took forever."


On the roof:

Hanna heard Jenna and Caleb talking, and she saw an object in her hand. It was a gun. Interrupting a girl who had a gun wouldn't be such a good idea, so she decided to stay hidden until she could figure out a plan before someone got hurt.

Caleb and Jenna's conversation:

Caleb yelled, "YOU KILLED MY PARENTS!"

"I told you I would get revenge," Jenna evilly laughed.

"I'm not going to let you get away with it."

Caleb went over to Jenna, pulled back his hand, and punched her in the face. A red mark slowly appeared on her face.

In the distance, Hanna saw Jenna raise the gun and point it at Caleb. She instantly got up and ran right in front of Caleb.

The sound of a gunshot went off.


I put a few cliffhangers in this story to make people curious and excited about what is going to happen. I can tell you right now that no one will die, I promise. Please review and thank you for reading! I hope you all can't wait to see what happens next.(: