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This is Kili's PoV of Chapter one. I will be home soon then I will edit chapter 3 which will be back to Fili's. Comments, suggestions, etc. review and mail me please ;)

Warning: Kili and Thorin do get hurt in this, no Slash.


~Chapter 2, Kili's PoV: Keep careful watch of my brothers soul~

The last thing he remembered was seeing his uncle bloody and wounded.

Thorin had taken many spears, arrows and sword wounds to his body, Kili remembered yelling "We have to get to Thorin!" knowing his brother would hearand rush to his aid.

He then took off running through the lines of the enemies and could sense his brother come up behind him. Fili had never let him down, he knew he could be a little more reckless anytime his brother was around.

Kili and his brother pushed, shoved and fought their way through the Orcs and Goblin, it seemed to have taken for ever to break through in his mind but finally they came to stand at each side of their weakened uncle raising their weapons to defend him against all odds, both Kili and Fili were steadfast and would do anything in their power to protect their uncle and uphold their word, even if it meant their own deaths, as long as they went together.

He remembered how his heart raced with adrenalin and fear. Until he glanced at Fili, The sight of his brothers always brought kili courage and calmed his nerves. He felt as if anytime Fili was nearby no harm could come to him. His brother Fili was an incredible warrior and had always been there for Kili

As Kili pulled an arrow from his quiver it was as if the orc's could sense the comfort Fili's presents gave Kili.

His brother was fighting an orc, it was so fast and fluid, in fact it nearly looks like they were dancing in their sword fight. Then 2 other Orcs joined in on attacking Fili.

Kili could see his brother was struggling and would not be able to last long like this.
He quickly aimed his arrow and with great accuracy and the eye of a hawk he aimed then fired his shot past his brother's head taking out one orc then just as fast knotted a second arrow and took out the other orc leaving his brother with only 1 foe.

Kili, glanced back over his shoulder to seeing his uncle, Thorin fall to his knees...

His dear uncle and king..

His heart sank into his stomach and twisted into a fearful knot. Than at that moment he felt a sharp pain stab into his back near his right shoulder, he felt as if someone jammed their fingers into his back and was trying to rip him in two like a piece of bread.

He let out a scream of pure pain and agony as he fell to his knees reaching back feeling what was the cause of his pain, an axe.. As he traced his fingers across it he could feel the markings and text 'Fili's axe,..' he thought before looking back at his brother who was fighting an orc then he heard something nearby that caused him to look off into another direction. He was in so much pain he had trouble thinking, trouble breathing.

Kili gritted his teeth trying to take his mind off the burning heat in his back, he then felt sharp pressures piercing his body several times over in the split second that he was distracted by the aching throbbing feeling in his back.

He glanced down looking over his body that was not much more than a pin cushion right now, seeing his wounds he felt fear wash over his entire body and a cold chill ran through him. He then heard the sound of Ori's yell of panic as an Orc was about to beat past his defense.

'….I can at least save him…I, I am sorry Fili,.. to leave you..' he thought as he glanced down at his bow and reached painfully for it. He took in a deep jagged breath trying to breath as little as possible to keep the pain away the most he could. Taking his bow in hand, then against his bodies protest he stood knotting an arrow, aimed then released and killed the Orc that was giving Ori a hard time.

As soon as Kili released his arrow he had a rush of pain that caused his vision to go white. His body suddenly grew too heavy for his own legs, he felt the earth meet his knees with a rough thump before he fell back onto the cold earth letting out a scream as he felt a few of the arrows in his back push in further and the others snap off, He also felt the axe rip further into his shoulder but then turn sideway where it didn't go in as deep as it could of.

'I'm going to die?.. like this? I'll,.. I'll never see Erebor…and Fili, what of,..h,he'll blame himself…' Kili thought as his eyes turned red and he fought to keep from crying, thoughts of his brother racing through his head. He knew of the promise Fili had made to their mother and he knew Fili would have to be the one to tell her.

Kili felt so alone and scared, he could no longer hold back as tears rushed his eyes and he was unable to fight them away. He then thought of his uncle and glanced up to where he last saw Thorin.

Seeing his uncle laying there with blood trickling from the corner of his mouth Kili reached for his hand unable to tell if he was dead or alive. "U,uncle…" he said hoarsely then when he saw his uncles icy blue eyes shift to him he felt slightly warmer, he did not want to die alone.

He reached as much as his body would allow him too, then he saw Thorin do the same their fingers touching, his uncle trying to give his nephew the little comfort he could.

Kili then heard his normally noble sounding, stoic uncle speak "S,s,…stay…s,strong…k,k,..ki..li" in a raspy voice as his uncle choked on his own blood then in a lower voice Thorin added "L,live..f,for..f,fili…Li,..ve,..for,..m,." but then Thorin's hand went limp

Kili felt warm tears rush down his cheeks as his heart ached in despair he then remembered seeing his brother, Fili standing over him protectively defending him, taking on every enemy that came near them, his thoughts seemed sluggish at best as his world started to go dark.


Okay don't worry Kili is not dead just hurt so there will be a next chapter, hopefully quite a few more depending on reviews.
Reviews fuel me and make me want to write more and faster so please review for me. I like suggestions and tips so please feel free=) I want to improve all I can. my goal is to be as good as Italian Hobbit (if you have not read hers you are missing out!) She can make me cry, laugh, and just all around feel for her characters omg _ Start with Race against time and move on to Illusions. But yes anyway

Thank you so much for taking the time to read! Personally I like Fili's PoV more but I think its because I have a little brother my self thats a lot like kili, Dark hair, dark eyes, mischievous , handsome as a devil and always brightens up my day=), hes the world best to me. lol but anyway yeah if you haven't read it please check it out=).

Please review and God bless you^^
~Rem