Chapter 6
Echopaw's pov
Echopaw sat there grooming herself in the middle of the camp in the warm sunlight; it had been a day or two since she had arrived there with Firepaw, Pinenettle, and Blackpaw. Everything had been pretty fun she had explored the territory, learned battle moves, and impress everyone with her hunting skills. She had met some of the other apprentices too ravenpaw and greypaw seemed nice but sandpaw and dustpaw were mean. Blackpaw and Ravenpaw had hit it of real well and were best friends and Firepaw and Greypaw were like brothers. Echopaw just wished her and Sandpaw could be friends but Sandpaw was just too stubborn. "Hello young Echopaw." Bluestar said as she walked up behind her. "Hello Bluestar, how are you." Replied echopaw. "I need to see you in my den now, it is urgent."
Echopaw ran after the blue she-cat to her den, "what is it Bluestar?" she asked worriedly. "I am expecting hawkclaw's kits!" she said. "You are! That's wonderful." She exclaimed. "I know, but how am I going to do my duty as leader?" just then they heard a kit like voice say. "You said duty." And then another kit laughs along with him. "Are you two supposed to be here?" bluestar said to rootkit and rainkit. "no." the brother and sister say together. "You two need to get back to the nursery, ok." Said bluestar. "Fine." Say both of the two kits together. "You're so good with kits; you're going to be a great mother." Said echo. "I was a mother once, want to hear the story?" asked the grey she-cat. "sure." Said echo. "I was a young warrior when I met him, he was young and handsome. I met him at one of the gatherings; we soon agreed to meet at the border between riverclan and thunderclan. His name was oakheart; he was the deputy of riverclan. Soon one thing leads to another and I was soon expecting his kits. At that time there was a really ambitious cat named thistle claw, are old deputy had retired and it was either me or thistle claw who would be chosen, so I gave my kits to oakheart and said a fox took them. I had three there names were mosskit, stonekit, and misty kit. Mosskit ended up freezing to death by the time I reached oakheart. Soon after I was chosen to be deputy thistleclaw was found on the riverclan border in a pool of his own blood, the main reason I didn't want him as leader or deputy was because he thought the answer to everything was war." "That's sad, but that won't happen this time."
"Can you go get hawkclaw for me please. "Asked bluestar. "Su-…" she started to say but then a warning yowl cut her off. "Lionheart senses trouble." Yelled ravenclaw. All of a sudden ravenpaw came through the entrance. "What happened?" Asked a couple cats ravenpaw looked around the crowd fearfully then said "redtails dead!"
Cliffhanger! So how was that chapter? might not update for a while, so don't get mad. I got a soccer game tomorrow so wish me luck!