Chapter 11
Firepaw's pov
Firepaw sat there in the middle of the camp grooming himself when ravenclaw came in the camp along with longtail and a dark grey she-cat with matted fur. "Ravenclaw, what is yellowfang doing here." Asked bluestar. "I don't know you are going to have to ask her that yourself." said ravenclaw as he turned to yellowfang waiting for her to explain. "I was exiled for something I didn't do, brokenstar killed raggedstar himself and then he killed two apprentices in training. He convinced the clan I did it and he exiled me." Yellowfang sadly, "could I please join your clan? As you know I'm a skilled medicine cat." As she said that bluestar thought for a minute. "Yes, you can join thunderclan. Our medicine cats can use all the help they can get, especially during times of war and sickness. But you can't be a full medicine cat, spotted already has an apprentice." Said the leader as yellowfang meowed gratefully "thankyou." As the whole clan left from the highrock. Firepaw walked up to her and meowed "hello, I am firepaw." Yellowfang looked him over with piercing eyes and then said "hello." She said as firepaw sat there for a moment before he said "how about I show you around camp." Yellowfang thought for a moment and then said okay and followed firepaw as he showed her the dens and then they ended the tour at the medicine cat den. "Here is the medicine den; I think this is where bluestar wants you to stay." He meowed as she went in the den to talk to Spottedleaf and rainpaw. He then went off to find echopaw, blackpaw, and olivepaw.
Echopaws pov
Echopaw sat there with blackpaw and olivepaw thinking, they were going to be going to training soon and then bluestars kits were becoming apprentices later. Then they were going to gathering as soon as the ceremony was over. "Come on you three lets go practice hunting." Called ravenclaw with pinenettle, Lionheart, and hawkclaw behind him "okay!" they all called together and followed there mentors out of camp. When they got there ravenclaw turned around and meowed "I'm going to pair you up, echopaw and firepaw will be paired up, blackpaw and olivepaw are paired up, pinenettle and Lionheart are together, and then me and hawkclaw will pair up. I want us all to come back with at least three pieces of prey about a little after sun high." Then they all split up and went off to hunt. "so where you want to go hunt at?" meowed echopaw as they walked through the forest "what about –" he started saying as two rouges jumped out and attacked them. "Get out of our territory!" spat echopaw angrily as she dogged there blows alongside firepaw when suddenly a fox jumped out and killed the two rouges and turned on the two apprentices.
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How was that chapter? I still need names for starclan, darkforest, and kits. Plz tell me how that was. And plz review. Thankyou for reading.