The questionarie M shots.
I would appreciate if anyone were kind enough to answer this questions or at least the ones you find most important or flagrant so that I can improve my writing and the next story (ies). I remind you that you don't need to leave your name if you don't want (hello guests!).
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Is the story BORING?
- Does any part seems to Drag?
- Are there parts that you skipped to get to 'the good part'?
- Do I over-inform or over-describe anywhere or anything?
- Was there anything that I could have Left Out?
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Did you Get it?
- Did you understand phrases / terms I used?
- If someone unfamiliar with this Fandom read this, have I explained enough for them to understand WHY everything was happening?
- Did you have to reread any part of the scenes to understand who was doing what to whom?
-Did I forget to mention something? Anything ? Are there any plot holes?
-Did the actions flow smoothly from one to the next, or did they jump as though something was skipped?
-Could you see why the characters were 'doing it' below the smut?
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Fluff Scenes/actions/Dialogs?
- Where there enough or too many?
- Were they too fast, too slow, or too (in)frequent?
-Is there any action/fetish/position/etc that you would like to see?
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Do the scenes FLOW?
- Does one scene or action leads logically into the next?
- Is there enough downtime between intense 'scenes/actions' to allow it to build to the next?
- Do I repeat things (words, actions, positions) that don't need to be repeated?
-Could there be any other setting/place/situation for they to have 'done it'?
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Is anything VISUALLY Confusing?
- Can you SEE every action clearly in your mind like a movie? (I really hope so... although it would be a porn movie XD)
- Could you SEE what the characters looked like?
- Could someone who was Not familiar with the fandom SEE what the characters looked?
- Could you picture the places/items that were described?
- Did I forget to describe anything?
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During DIALOGUE scenes?
- Could you see what the characters were DOING while talking?
- Did the dialogs made sense ?
-Did something they did/said got on your nerves and WHY?
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Did the Characters WORK?
- Do the characters ACT realistic?
- Does the Dialogue sound realistic?
- Do their Reactions seem logical & realistic?
- Could you feel the Emotions and feelings between the characters?
- Did the characters seem IN CHARACTER?
- Did the characters with powers USE them when it was needed?
- Do you like this characters/pairing and WHY?
- What character would you like me to do next (well, Aria would be the one doing them XD ) and WHY?
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THANKS, This would make me improve and that will give your better M shots. :)
About updates: For the M shot's I ask for 10 or more reviews. Believe it or not this are hard work , not to mention that they have like 10 times more words than the chapters of the T rated stories.(around 10000 words each)
Do remember that you can leave a smiley face and who you'd like next as a review too, but I would really appreciate and make us of any and all the feedback you give.