Imprinted by a slap chapter nine:
A/N: Hey people , I still got low reviews, it seems that no matter how nice I ask you people just don't care at all to review all you do is read or favorite and add to your alerts. I ask only because I want to know if I should continue because If you don't review I don't know what you expect in the story. If you don't make suggestions I can't put them in my story so that is why I ask to please review. Look how much people add me to their favorites add alerts or author alerts and favorites , but won't review . I am going to say all the people who review AND follow me and my story as well as favorites:
Koga's older woman
Roganjalex
Redshot redhead1985
Bratstopmom84
Those are all the people who review after every chapter and some guests but the point is, is this the ONLY people who read this story? Because I am starting to believe it .
I am so tiered of asking . I feel like calling this story quits . I know I said that I really HATE an unfinished story, but if the reviews aren't going to get better I am going to quit this story really I am and it's not a threat but a promise so please guys if you are still interested in " Imprinted by a slap " Just leave a review , it doesn't have to be long just a ' good work' or a 'please update soon' or ' OMG, I love Paul' or 'Bella and Paul are so adorable'. Or something like that I really don't care how long your review is , just post something so that I can see , okay this is how many people are still reading my story should I update or should I call it quits?
So please guys I really don't want to quit this story , because it's not fair towards the people review and I Know that you will review and won't disappoint me so please don't make me change my mind.
Oh and one more thing. I am turning my cell phone and laptop in to my mother for exams because I have to start studying ASAP so I can do about another two or three updates and then you will have to wait until I am finished with exams if I get good enough reviews so please I am really serious about this.
Warning : No fluffy stuff ahead only a very angry Paul so run while you can. ( No lemon if you were wondering)
Okay love you all and enjoy.
Bella Pov
I woke up on something really soft and warm. I cracked open an eye and peered down on what was holding me. I then remembered that Paul stayed the night over and Charlie had come home yesterday. I wasn't sure if he saw us together.
I shot up in a panic state and Paul fell off the other side of the bed.
" What the hell?!" He said as he grumpily stood up and glared at me.
"Paul you have to leave! Charlie! If he just as much sees you , he will shoot you with his pistol .I know my dad! He almost shot Jake when he fell into my room, as he climbed through the window!" I said as I paced back and fourth .
" Wait black was here!? I knew I smelt him! " Paul angrily said . I glared at him. " Well it doesn't help that you are jealous of him because I am not going to stop being friends with Jake. I have known him since I was in dippers and yes he was here because if you hadn't noticed , Jake and I are family friends and he is my best friend, nothing more. I love him as a brother I never had.''
Paul went to my bed and smelt it he growled and grabbed my wrist."So why does the bed reek of him too?". He said in my closeto face as a very angry expression showed on his handsome features . I gulped . I could feel that he was on the brink of phasing so I had to choose my word carefully. I could feel his grip get tighter on my wrist and I knew I was going to have to deal with an ugly bruise later on.
" He sat down on the bed when we used to talk a lot or do homework and study together that's all.''
His grip grew a lot tighter and I could feel my wrist start to crack underneath all the pressure. " Paul.. Ouch you hurting me! Let go! I screeched out. He grabbed me and pinned me to the floor. His face towering over mine. I looked into his eyes they were black YES BLACK not brown BLACK! I swore the human Paul was gone and the wolf was taking over as much as he could in human form.
" Paul… I whispered out. "M-Mine!" he growled out. I nodded, not wanting to upset him more than he was.
" Your eyes…" I tried to reach out to what was still left of human Paul. " SAY YOUR MINE! " He screamed at me and his grip on my wrist went tighter and it snapped ." I'M YOURS!'' I said in a painful screech and he let go and buried his nose in my hair and inhaled. " mmm, you smell is amazing , addicting, mouthwatering….. and it's all MINE " he mumbled in my hair.
I lay there wimpering in pain , My broken wrist was on fire and I was crying , the pain was just too much. I started to think that I didn't want to see Paul again, I just wanted him out my house and life. My hart clenched in pain at the thought . I felt as if I couldn't be far away from him. I felt as if my hart and soul was bind to his. " He got off me and then stepped back . his eyes seemed to start turning normal again. He rubbed his head and saw my wrist .
" What happened! Oh my God Bella ! did I do that! I am so sorry I didn't realize that my wolf had taken over, we were just jealous. We didn't mean it but I will understand if you don't want to see me again.'' He said and moved to the window I threw myself at him.
" NO! don't go! I forgive you, you weren't thinking straight" I hastily said , I wanted him to be by me and I couldn't deny that I didn't feel anything for him.
It was true …. I was falling in love with Paul Lahote.
Okay how was that? No Paul is not abusing Bella , he just snapped like Sam did with Emily just a whole lot lighter.
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Spicecherry
