Hey guys! I'm back from vacation! School is gonna start in like, two days for me so I'll try my best to keep writing at least once a week. Also, I'M SUPER EXCITED FOR THE NEW EPISODE! And I'm not trying to seem needy or anything, but could you guys do some more reviews? youguysI just want to know that you guys are still there. Constructive criticism would be much appreciated. Now done with my boring speech and onto the story!
"Grunkle Stan!" Mabel called. She threw Dipper's backpack over her shoulder.
"Yeah Mabel?"
"I'm going to Candy and Grenda's for a sleepover."
"Alright, just be back by noon tomorrow."
Mabel sighed. "Okay Grunkle Stan."
As she walked outside, she looked back to make sure no one was watching her. Then when she didn't see anyone, she ran to the woods.
She wasn't really going to a sleepover with her friends. This was her one and only chance to save Dipper. It was 12 o' clock. Without making her grunkles suspicious, she had 24 hours to find Dipper. If she needed more time she would keep going, even if she made her grunkles worried sick. Not that she wanted that to happen, but if she had to do it she had to do it.
She made a check list in her head.
The five objects? Check. A big breakfast and lunch? Check. Shooting star sweater and Dipper's hat? Check.
She was ready. Just one problem. She didn't know where to find Bill. This is where an object came into play.
She took out the journal. Maybe there some kind of map or clue or something.
She flipped through every page.
She found a picture of the strange mountain-cliff. Maybe there was something in invisble ink on this page.
Ugh, why hadn't she brought the black light?
She went through the backpack, and maybe by some miracle she would find it...
Well, she didn't find Dipper's black light, but she did find a weird pen.
"What's this?" she asked herself.
She took off the cap, and tried to write on a blank page, but nothing came out. Or maybe...
She noticed a switch on the pen, when she pushed it...
A purple light shone in her eyes. It was an invisible ink pen!
She shone it on the page. There were markings on the two sides of the old railroad track. She remembered when she was on there that both sides were boarded up.
One boarded up side said secret entrance portal to nightmare realm. The other said secret exit portal from nightmare realm.
This HAD to be it.
She checked her watch. An hour had already passed! She had to get to the cliff! She picked up the bag and began the journey.
...
She saw the cliff and railroad tracks above her. She looked to side at the rocks. Too steep. She would have to use her...
"GRAPPLING HOOK!"
She took it out and shot it in the air. It wrapped around the old broken railroad tracks. She held her breath as she shot up through the air. It felt just like the time she had used her grappling hook to save herself and Dipper when they had fallen off the cliff along with the Gideon bot.
Flying through the air, Mabel could almost feel Dipper in her arms, when they were in this same spot about a year ago. But she didn't have time to think about that now. For now she just had to hold on tight, not look down, and hope she doesn't fall before the adventure had even started.
The journey has begun! Sorry that my chapters are short, I really try! Again, I would love some constructive criticism and any ideas of what the nightmare realm should be like. Thank you!