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It was a took a few seconds for Mabel to realize that the creature "statues" were alive.
And pretty angry.
Mabel was horrified at the sight in front of her. There were two creatures, both identical, probably Bill's guards. They were giant, red with spikes along their back. They had razor-sharp claws and layers of teeth, much like a shark. Whenever they exhaled, Mabel noticed that steam poured from their nostrils.
They growled at the sight of her, and pawed the ground with their feet. She noticed they held swords.
She was terrified.
These must be Bill's little pets.
"Nice..." she whispered nerveyey, slowly moving towards the cave opening.
They whacked her with the back (thankfully the non-blade side) of the sword and she hit the ground.
She didn't want to mess with these creatures.
But she had to get through.
"You wanna fight?" she yelled.
They growled.
"COME AT ME!" she screamed.
They charged.
She slid right under their legs.
While they stood confused for a moment, she took this chance to reach in to her backpack and grab exactly what she needed.
She got it. Perfect.
They were coming at her again. She knew what to do. Wait for their mouths to open.
She had smile dip in her hands. When she had eaten it she immediately had hallucinations. Maybe, if she could get the dip in their mouths, they would start hallucinating and she could get past. It was worth a shot.
They came at her again, swinging their swords. One was dangerously close to her. He swung the sword, and she ducked, feeling the whoosh of the blade right above her head, a close call.
Okay, this was it, his mouth was open.
She dipped the stick into the sugar, and threw it...
It went right in his mouth. He fell to the ground.
"YES!" she screamed aloud, doing a victory danec, until she realized there was still another monster trying to eliminate her.
This time it would be harder. She didn't have the stick to throw, so she would have to climb on him and poor the sugar in his mouth without getting sliced to bits.
He came straight at her, and she dove around him. She jumped on his back, and began to climb. He tried to slice her with the sword, but he missed most of her, but Mabel felt the blade slice across her arm.
"Ahh!" she screamed, but she held on.
She looked to see if there was any damaged. Her arm hadn't been severed, but there was a big cut across her arm.
She kept climbing.
Mabel got the bag ready, and forcefully opened the monster's mouth.
Oh the struggle. It took forever to do it without being sliced, but she finally poured it in..
And he fell to the ground.
"Woohoo!" she shouted. She had done it! Who else could say that they defeated two demon pets with a bag of sugar?
It was awhile before she realized what was next.
Something that made the monster guards look as easy as 1+1.
Bill Cipher.
She stared at the giant, looming, dark cave in front of her.
Her former joy became an tremendous amount of fear.
Was she really going to do this? Was she going to see her brother?
Was she ready?
"I am ready." she shouted allowed, as if banishing her fearful emotions.
She walked inside, and entered the castle of the king of nightmares.
...
The cave was sort of as you would imagine a nightmare castle to be, just a bit different.
It was empty, and her footsteps creepily echoed in the long corridor. It was the only corridor she could see. No booby traps. No maze hallways. Just one long corridor leading to somewhere.
The floors were black. The walls were both red and black, and a few chadeliers and torches dotted the walls and ceiling.
The long long long (did she mention long?) corridor finally came to an end and revealed some kind of throne room.
The end of the room revealed a huge throne, with spikes and velvet and a frightening look all together. There were also curtains behind it, adding as a scary feature.
To her right was nothing. But to her left was some kind of huge tube, about three times her size, with a key hole. Inside was a wider than usual stone pole. But it wasn't any of that that caught Mabel's. Not at all. It was something else inside the locked chamber. Something that made her burst into tears of joy.
"DIPPER! It's you! It's really you!"
She hugged the tube, crying, tears flowing down her cheeks, before getting a better look at her brother. Her brother. She couldn't wait to get out if here and talk to him and they would all be so happy!
She looked up, ready to see a smiling face, but when she looked up she was horrified.
His eyes were closed. He was chained to the stone pole. He was floating.
How?
Mabel looked closer, and saw red light beams seem to light up and go out every now and then. There must be some kind of energy that kept him floating. At least he wasn't being hung by his arms.
He wasn't waking up. His clothes were ripped, his shoes gone. There were too many scrapes and bruises to count, one of his eyelids were black, and his lip split. His hair was in a frenzy, it looked a bit ripped and a bit singed.
She felt as if her heart had literally broke. She could almost swear she heard the crack echo across the room. She rolled into a ball on the floor and cried. Too late. She was too late. Dipper was gone.
No. She couldn't be too late. She had to check one more time.
She got up and looked more closely at him. She noticed his chest rising and falling. He was breathing. She wasn't too late.
She couldn't express her joy. She had succeed. She found Dipper. They were going home. Now how would she get him out?
She needed to wake him up. She whispered, "Dipper?"
Nothing.
"Dipper?"
Nothing.
She knocked on the glass and shouted desperately, "Dipper, please wake up!"
She suddenly heard an evil cackle.
She froze. She knew that voice. The one who caused this all.
"YOU!" she shouted.
Bill Cipher emerged from behind the curtain, floating calmly toward the angry girl.
"Look Pine Tree," Bill laughed, "We've got company."
Mabel looked back to see if Dipper had woken up, but he still floated there, eyes shut.
"I've come for Dipper," she shouted bravely, "Hand him over or face the consequences!"
Bill laughed hysterically. Mabel swore she saw a tear fall from his one eye he was laughing so hard.
"That's very funny Shooting Star," he said, finally calming down, "But I think YOU should go before YOU have to face the consequences."
She looked again at Dipper, her brother who would do anything for her. She would do the same.
"No."
For Dipper.
"Not without my brother."
"You're choice," said Bill, as he began to turn red.
Mabel glared back, and tightened the pine tree hat on her head.
The battle had begun.
OKAY OKAY THIS IS IT! *WHEEZ COUGH WHEEZ* NEXT CHAPTER IS MY LAST SO SAD! SORRY BUT IT MUST BE DONE! I WILL BE WRITING OTHER FANFICS THOUGH! SEE YOU NEXT TIME, AND HOPEFULLY I CAN GET MY MIND OFF CAPS LOCK!