Hey guys, this is the first chapter of my rewrite, I may have rushed through it, so please be honest and tell me what you think!

And I know it's a bit of s short chapter ^^'

and as always I own nothing and own nothing

"Rain...again?" Simone muttered to herself. It had been raining an awful lot lately in central Amestris, thanks to this, a lot of Simone's clothes were still wet. She sighed as she felt the cold soak through her cardigan.

Off in the distance there was a loud crashing sound, for a second Simone thought it was thunder until she saw the ground crack.

'What's going on?' She didn't have time to be thinking, she needed an escape or battle plan fast. Her eyes flickered towards the source of noise and destruction, it was a short blonde kid, suite of armour, a short fat man and a very curvy woman.

Maybe she could help the armour and blondy out? She knew they were state alchemists but she tended to avoid them...because of reasons.

All of the crashing and yelling was making her head hurt. She looked around the now empty street, there was no where she could go without being seen or being crushed by debris, speaking of debris, a large Boulder came her way, on instinct she quickly 'transmuted' a column to get her out of its reach. She realised her mistake as the debris crushed the beginning of the pilar causing her to fall to the ground.

She hit her back hard, pain scorching through her body making her completely ignore how numb the rain was making her. Her eyes welled up as she was gasping for air. Thankfully no one noticed her and they continued on with their battle. She tried to move, but the pain was making her weak.

She heard the woman in black say something about human sacrifices and that her and the other man should leave.

Human sacrifices? Her day was getting weirder and weirder by the minute.

"Hey, Brother. There's a girl over there" shit... They'd seen her. She stumbled onto her feet and ran, she heard them following close behind. She tripped over a wet newspaper that was lying forgotten, she hit her head on the concrete, corners of her vision going static. She reached and touched her forehead, wincing as she felt a large gash was there.

"Al! Help her up" she heard the other one order. It wasn't long before the world went black around her.