Hey everyone! I want to thank OverlordMiles for following my story thank you so much! Also I want to thank Bella (guest) sorry it was a bit confusing in the beginning anyway on to the story

Rise of hopeclan: chapter 2- the journey begins

Lunastar woke up in a starry place. She felt like she was floating in air. Lunastar looked around, suddenly the ground formed beneath her. It turned into a smooth, grassy meadow with trees along the left and right side.

From this spot she could see silver pelt as clear as the sun. As Lunastar looked at it more closely she saw the stars begin swirl. Lunastar looked up at it in confusion. Suddenly a cat with a gleaming white pelt appeared from the stars and floated downwards toward her.

"Whitecloud?" Lunastar called. "Is it really you!?" She meowed. "Yes it's really me!" her mate said in a smooth voice. Lunastar happily ran over to her mate and smiled as she kissed her mate's cheek. "As much as I love you my dear Lunastar there is no time for celebration. Darkness is headed your way." Whitecloud meowed in a stern voice.

Lunastar dropped the smile immediately. "What is it, Whitecloud?" Lunastar meowed softly. "The thunder will roar and destroy everything in its way, but hope will rise and save the day." Whitecloud said in a clear voice.

Lunastar thought for a moment. The wind began to pick up. It lifted Whitecloud into the air. "Whitecloud, wait!" Lunastar called chasing after him. "What does it mean?!" she screamed. "I cannot answer that my love, but you must remember you are not the only clan or cats around, when there is still Sky." Lunastar thought she heard Whitecloud say as he disappeared into silver pelt

Lunastar's eyes snapped open. "Mother! You're awake!" Sweetpaw cried happily. Lunastar tried to stand up. "Don't stand up, it will re open your wound!" Hollykit squeaked. Lunastar gave up and slumped back on the ground. She faintly remembered her dream. "I had a dream." Lunastar meowed, her eyes glazing over.

"What was it mother?" Sweetpaw asked. "There was Whitecloud, and he told me a prophecy…" Lunastar started rubbing her head. "Whitecloud! You mean our father?!" Nightkit asked. "Yes, your father but her told me that: The thunder will roar and destroy everything in its way, but hope will rise and save the day." Lunastar repeated recalling the prophecy. "It sounds like Thunderclan and them destroying the clans and then maybe we will beat them?" Hollykit suggested.

"Well I agree- wait how do you know so much about herbs and prophecies?" Lunastar asked Hollykit. "When I broke my leg trying to climb that tree, I had to stay in the medicine den for a moon and Mint leaf taught me some herbs and then I became interested and I started seeing her everyday to learn about herbs. It's a good thing I did too!" Hollykit explained.

Lunastar recalled seeing her go every afternoon to the med cat den. "He also told me that; 'you are not the only clans or cats around, when there is still Sky.'" Lunastar meowed. "I think 'sky' is skyclan, you know that's one of the clans you used to tell us about in stories." Hollykit meowed thoughtfully. "I think your right!" Lunastar bounded up forgetting her wounds. She winced. "Don't worry the cobwebs should hold them together just fine." Hollykit reassured her. "Wait a second, where exactly are we?" Lunastar asked. "Technically, were still on the clan's territory…" Sweetpaw meowed.

"We need to go right away." Lunastar meowed. "Mama your forgetting something Whitecloud said." Hollykit meowed. "What?" Lunastar asked. "Whitecloud said 'only clans or CATS around' I think that means kittypet, or the barn cats." Hollykit explained. "Kittypets! Why kittypets! Their useless balls of fur that sits around all day doing nothing!" Lunastar spat outraged. "Mama, wasn't the great Firestar a kittypet before he joined the clans?" Snowkit asked. "Yea, I think he was and he saved all the clans, mama just give them a chance, they might save us in the future." Nightkit meowed begging his mother.

"Oh fine! Let's go find them, well start off looking in the barn." Lunastar gave in. Her kits cheered. "Wait mama, if the horse place is on the other side of the lake how are we going to get across?" Snowkit asked. "Good question." Lunastar said thinking for a moment. The sun was rising now and then a sudden idea popped into Lunastar's mind.

"Follow me kits!"Lunastar meowed, heading west. Her kits followed without a question, they knew that their mother knew what she was doing. Soon they arrived at a fishy smelling territory. "This is the border between Riverclan and Shadowclan." Lunastar announced. "That's what Riverclan smells like? Belch!" Nightkit said holding his nose and sticking out his tongue. Lunastar smiled."I agree little one." She grinned.

"Anyway on the other side of this border is a twoleg place that they go to and ride around in monsters that float on water, but they only come in Greenleaf." Lunastar explained. "And…." Nightkit asked. "Right now is Greenleaf! And that means the twolegs are here!" Sweetpaw exclaimed. "Right, Sweetpaw! So the plan is that we will sneak onto their monster and wait till they stop by the other side and then we will hop off and continue!" Lunastar smiled. "Sounds dangerous but it's the only option besides swimming because more than likely the clans won't welcome us." Sweetpaw agreed.

Snowkit, Nightkit, and Hollykit agreed too so they stepped over the border and followed their mother. It wasn't long before they found the place. It had a little two-leg nest and with a half bridge that had two-legs on a monster looking thing that was floating on water. It looked like the Two-legs were about to leave. "You there! Shadowclan!" they heard someone say. "How are you still alive, I mean Mousestar said he had killed you all!" The cat said.

Lunastar stepped in front of her kits. "We need to kill you!" a smaller cat exclaimed charging at them. The other Riverclan members followed. A roar sounded from the floating monster. "That's our cue kits! Run towards the monster!" Lunastar screamed over the roar. They started to run, Nightkit, Snowkit, and Hollykit's started to fall behind. Lunastar picked them up and put them on her back as she ran faster. The monster was starting to pull away. "Faster!" Lunastar cried. By the time they reached the end of the bridge there was just enough time to jump and make it onto the monster.

Lunastar gave the kits to Sweetpaw. "You have to jump! Before it's too late!" Lunastar screamed as the Riverclan cats caught up. "But-" Sweetpaw started. "Don't worry about me I'll be fine!" Lunastar meowed know what she was going to say. Sweetpaw jumped with a bit of uncertainty. Sweetpaw and the kits barley made it but they managed to climb on. "We've got you now, Lunastar!" The Riverclan patrol leader hissed.

They came in closer, there was only one way. Lunastar jumped, at the last minute the monster sped up and she missed it. Lunastar felt her heart sinking as she splashed into the lake.

Oh no! What do you think is going to happen? Will she die and lose one of her lives or will she make it? I hope you like this chapter. I started it later than I planned on but me and my dad and brother went rocket launching and model airplane flying. We lost one of the rockets and I crash one of the planes twice :3 (I'm a terrible polite, it's funny cause my dad is a polite!), but it didn't break. -3-

Anyway hope you like this chapter.

QOTD!

#1: do you think this plot is good?

I have a lot of story ideas that I might need to get rid of so I might make a new story that is filled with ideas that you can adopt. Just let me know if you need ideas in the comments on this chapter and depending on the amount of people that need one I will make a story for it.

Thunderclan:

Leader: Mousestar- a light brown tom with a white chest (a little small for a leader but he's quick and deadly)

Deputy: Scarnose: a dark brown tom with more than 1 scar on his nose and over 4 scars on his body from past accidents and battles. (Large and strong tom that will do anything Mousestar orders)

Warriors:

Smokecloud- a dark gray tom with patches of light gray here and there. (average sized tom alright with battle moves but is really smart)

Riverclan:

Windclan:

Shadowclan: all deceased.

Outsiders:

Lunastar: a pretty silver tabby she cat with white paws. (Former Shadowclan leader)

Sweetpaw: A light gold tabby she cat with white underbelly (Former apprentice of Shadowclan) mother: Lunastar

Snowkit: a white she cat with gray paws (Former kit of Shadowclan) mother: Lunastar

Hollykit: a black she cat with white paws and chest and underbelly. (Former kit of Shadowclan) mother: Lunastar

Nightkit: a black tabby tom with grey front paws and white back paws. (Former kit of Shadowclan.) Mother: Lunastar

Until tomorrow peeps! :p :D -3-