OMG just did a 5k with my mom, oh geez my legs are numb D: Anyway thank you Rosefire for following my story!
All Lunastar could hear was her own heartbeat thumping in her chest THUMP,THUMP,THUMP faster and faster it went. Lunastar felt herself sinking towards the bottom of the lake her soaked fur holding her down. All of the noise was muffled from above her. Lunastar opened her eyes. Fish swam everywhere you looked, it was beautiful down there. But Lunastar's lungs burned from the lack of air. She kicked with her hind legs off the sandy bottom. She peddled her front paws as fast as she could. Closer and closer she came to the top.
Lunastar surfaced. She gasped for air, sometimes her mouth filling with water. Lunastar chocked up the water. She surveyed the lake, she could see the monster on the other side and she saw 4 cats jump off. At least they made it she thought. Lunastar went under water again. She peddled her front paws up and she surfaced again.
Just as she came up again she went under water again, but this time she floated downward. The fish swarmed around her. She unsheathed her claws and struck out at one of the fish, her claws making contact with the scaly flesh. She kept her claws hooked in and then the fish went limp. Lunastar took it in her mouth and surfaced. She breathed hard in through her nose. Lunastar tried to keep herself a float but it was hard.
Lunastar didn't know what to do now. She heard the monster getting closer; the water rocked causing small waves. She sucked in air before she ducked under water. Then she surfaced again. A floating thing flew around her; Lunastar swam over to it as fast as she could. Lunastar scrambled up onto the floating thing. It was attached to a line and as Lunastar followed the line with her eyes she realized that two legs had thrown this object.
Lunastar felt herself being moved closer and closer towards the monster. She scrambled around the object but stopped moving when she realized she would fall into the water again. Lunastar crouched down, with her soaked paws over her head waiting for her life to end. When Lunastar was pulled closer to the monster her ears felt like bleeding from the noise it made. Lunastar closed her eyes and she felt strong paws grip her soaking body. She opened her eyes and stared into a flat pink face. Lunastar scrambled and scratched the hand; the two leg stayed calm and said something, whatever it was it sounded soothing like it had said, "I'm not going to hurt you." Lunastar relaxed a bit but still stayed tense just in case.
The two leg placed her down on a slippery surface at the bottom of the monster. The two legs yowled something to the other and the monster jerked forward. Lunastar slid. A younger two leg came up behind her and sat next to Lunastar and held her so she wouldn't fall back.
The little two leg said something with a soothing tone. The little two leg leaned over and grabbed some kind of moss looking thing. She put it over Lunastar and it warmed her up and dried her up. Lunastar looked up into the two leg's eyes and saw kind eyes not greedy evil eyes elder spoke of. Lunastar purred and licked her hand thanking her. The monster came to a halt and the girl picked her up. The little girl walked off the monster and stepped onto the solid ground. The two leg placed her down and Lunastar felt the rich soil beneath her paws.
The two leg walked away, the two leg paused and looked back at Lunastar. Lunastar ran towards her licked her pink paw and walked away into the tall grass of the moors. "Sweetpaw! Nightkit! Snowkit! Hollykit! Where are you?!" Lunastar began to call. "Mama?" Lunastar thought she heard Snowkit yowl faintly. The grass of the moor quivered and out jumped all of her kits pinning her down and hugging her. "Mama! Don't ever do that again!" Nightkit exclaimed. "I'll try not to little one but I can't make any promises." Lunastar purred. "Hush we're on windclan's territory now." Sweetpaw said.
"Where do we go now?" Hollykit whispered to her mother. Lunastar sniffed the air. She caught a faint smell of horse straight ahead. "Straight ahead kits, run there" Lunastar ordered kindly (can you order kindly? I dun oh) They ran as silently as they could. Before long you could see and smell the horse place clearly. The big creatures (horses) were grazing in the field with a fence around it.
Lunastar ducked under the fence and her kits followed. They tip toed around the horses and they finally made it too the barn. "We made it!" Snowkit sighed in relief. Lunastar smiled, the door was open just a tiny bit. Lunastar nudged it open with her muzzle. "Go in kits." Lunastar ordered.
Once all her kits were in she went in after them. In the barn it was warm, it had straw everywhere and you could smell the plump mice so easily Lunastar's kits could even smell them, their mouths watered, but before they could take another step, a cat leapt out of nowhere. His large body was blocking their way. His claws were unsheathed and ready to strike. Lunastar jumped in front of her kits her tail wrapping around them. "Leave now, or die." The tom snarled.
Oh geez everyone but the two-legs hate them XD. Seriously though can you order kindly? I'll just keep that in there because I don't want her to sound bossy. In this chapter I had to try really hard not to say boat instead of 'monster' that was hard. Tomorrow I'll try and have more references in there so u can try and figure it out, most of them will be from Disney or Marvel, well their pretty much the same since Disney owns Marvel D; Also no one has commented the answer to which movie 'the only cold heart around here is yours' is from, if no one answers it by the day after tomorrow (Monday) I'll tell u guys. Tomorrow I have to go to a play and get really dressed up -_- at least my cusions will be there :D I might not be able to write a chapter for tomorrow, so plz don't complain when I don't
Q(s)OTD:
#1. How many presents are under your tree at your house?
#2. What do you guys want for Christmas?
Thunderclan:
Leader: Mousestar- a light brown tom with a white chest (a little small for a leader but he's quick and deadly)
Deputy: Scarnose: a dark brown tom with more than 1 scar on his nose and over 4 scars on his body from past accidents and battles. (Large and strong tom that will do anything Mousestar orders)
Warriors:
Smokecloud- a dark gray tom with patches of light gray here and there. (average sized tom alright with battle moves but is really smart)
Riverclan:
Windclan:
Shadowclan: all deceased.
Outsiders:
Lunastar: a pretty silver tabby she cat with white paws. (Former Shadowclan leader)
Sweetpaw: A light gold tabby she cat with white underbelly (Former apprentice of Shadowclan) mother: Lunastar
Snowkit: a white she cat with gray paws (Former kit of Shadowclan) mother: Lunastar
Hollykit: a black she cat with white paws and chest and underbelly. (Former kit of Shadowclan) mother: Lunastar
Nightkit: a black tabby tom with grey front paws and white back paws. (Former kit of Shadowclan.) Mother: Lunastar
Till maybe tomorrow! Bye!