Hey guys. I'm super tired, but I'll try to make today's chapter good but don't get mad if there's any mistakes. The bathroom flooded and we have to pay $1,000 to fix the installation and the floor. I couldn't do the chapter yesterday because I went to a play then went out to eat and by the time we got back it was late so I couldn't go on the computer. Anyway on to the chapter.
The large tom walked closer and closer to Lunastar and her kits, claw's unsheathed glinting in the barn light. The tom was getting ready to pounce when- "Jack! Stop that, your scaring her kits!" A voice rang out and Lunastar looked around to see who the voice belonged to. Down from the loft jumped a pretty brown she cat. "Oh fine, sister." Jack grumbled.
The she- cat walked towards them. "I'm sorry about that Jack and I aren't used to visitors we don't know how to react to them." The cat explained. "Anyway I'm Jessie, and this is jack, there are 3 more of us but their sleeping right now, the sun HAS just risen." The she-cat named Jessie introduced herself. "What are your names?" Jessie asked. Before Lunastar could open her mouth Nightkit beat her to it "I'm Nightkit, this is my sister Snowkit, my other sister Hollykit, and my older sister Sweetpaw, and that's my mommy Lunastar." Nightkit said with energy.
"Oh your clan cats!" Jessie meowed. Lunastar nodded. "What brings you here, to our little barn?" Jessie asked. "These mean bully cats from another clan, killed all of our clan mates, except for us and our mom got a prophecy about how-" Hollykit started but Lunastar slapped her tail over her mouth over her kit's mouth before she could say anything else.
Before Jessie could ask Lunastar meowed quickly "Can we meet the other cats?" Jessie looked at Jack for permission and he nodded, "Come 'on cats! Get your lazy tails down here! We've got visitors!" Jessie yowled cheerily. "Visitors?" the word repeated over and over again from 3 cats in the loft above them.
3 heads pocked out and they all jumped off, keeping their eyes on the clan cats. "Clan cats these are our brothers and sisters, Wesley, Cassidy, and Cody." Jessie introduced. "Barn cats these are my kits, Nightkit, Snowkit, Hollykit, Sweetpaw, and I'm Lunastar." Lunastar introduced. Cassidy stepped forward. "You are more than welcome to stay; there are plenty of mice here." Cassidy meowed with a kind voice. "Thank you so much!" Lunastar meowed thankfully.
Lunastar's nose twitched, she sensed mouse nearby. She immediately got into a perfect hunters crouch. She stalked forward. And leapt into the straw where the mouse was. Straw flew everywhere. The plump mouse tried to run away but Lunastar took it into her mouth and bit its tiny neck and felt warm blood flood into her mouth and the mouse went limp. "Here you go kits; Sweetpaw did your mentor get to hunting before…" Lunastar meowed and trailed away, she couldn't bear saying the tragic event. Sweetpaw nodded. "Good we can teach your brother and sisters soon" Lunastar meowed forgetting what she had trailed off about. (I'm going to do someone's POV now I'm going to start doing that now that there are more cats.)
JACK'S POV!
When Lunastar, that cat jumped into the straw and reappeared with the mouse, I couldn't help but admire her. She seemed like a great cat, a great mother too. I suddenly wanted to know her. I was lying down in the loft with my sisters and brothers. I was the only one watching them; the others were doing their chores. I didn't care about them right now; right now I only had eyes for her. "Jack! Stop mooning over that she cat and start your chores!" Cody snapped me back to real time. My ears turned red, "I-I'm N-not m-mooning over a she-cat!" I meowed embarrassed.
The others laughed, after a little they forgot about it and continued their chores. "If you love her so much, how about you make beds for them to sleep in tonight!" Wesley teased. "Ok fine! But It doesn't have to do with anything with liking her." I muttered the last part. I took one last glance at Lunastar and gathered straw to make a nest out of. I made them on the far right of the loft, sort of close to my bed. I made sure it was the most comfortable bed in the world.
Lunastar and her kits deserve these beds, they had been through so much! I thought as I finished them up. I resumed my gazing at her except cautious this time hoping my siblings wouldn't notice. That day Lunastar and her kits started battle training with sheathed claws. Lunastar showed them some techniques and moves they would use in the battle when they would defeat the evil clan.
They were having so much fun! I wanted to join but I didn't want to make a fool out of myself. So be it! At least I'll be with her for a little without threatening to hurt her I thought. I finally made up my mind and jumped down from the loft. Their eyes looked over to me. "Umm, c-could I-I join you?" I asked nervously. "Of course!" Lunastar purred.
I smiled. "Show me what you've got so far, kits." I meowed. The kits showed me some impressive moves, there were some mess ups but they were only kits, so I couldn't blame them. "That was awesome! This is called the Leap-and-Hold. It's good for you kits because your opponents are most likely going to be bigger than you right now." I winked. "I know what it is! Let's demonstrate it!" Lunastar offered. "Start!" Lunastar called to me. I jumped onto her back keeping claws sheathed, now I was where she couldn't reach me and I could do damage without her injuring me. I pawed at her back pretending to scratch her. She yowled and drops and rolled, but I saw that coming and jumped off before she could squash me. There I pinned her down. She struggled underneath me and went limp. I let her get up.
We turned to the kits who were gaping at us in awe. "Now you try! Nightkit with Sweetpaw and Snowkit with Hollykit." Lunastar meowed. We practiced that whole day. Afterward our muscles sore from the work out.
"I had fun today, thanks for letting me join." I meowed to Lunastar. "If anything we should be thankful for you for letting us into your barn." Lunastar meowed back. "If it means helping you than anything for you." I murmured. "What did you say?" Lunastar asked. "Nothing! It's getting late, you can sleep. I'll keep watch just in case." I meowed quickly, as I escorted them to their beds. "Thanks, Jack!" Snowkit meowed. "You're welcome little one." I purred. I watched as they all fell asleep. I looked over and my siblings were fast asleep. "I will watch over you, Lunastar." I vowed.
LUNASTAR'S POV
Jack is acting more welcoming than the first time we met I thought as he joined us. He was very good at battle moves; he will be helpful on our mission to get rid of Mousestar. As Jack escorted us to our nests he thanked me
"I had fun today, thanks for letting me join." He said. "If anything we should be thankful for you letting us into our barn!" I meowed back. He murmured something I couldn't hear. "What did you say?" I asked. "Nothing! It's getting late, you can sleep. I'll keep watch just in case." Jack meowed quickly, as he escorted us to our nests. "Thanks, Jack!" Snowkit meowed. "You're welcome little one." he purred.
I pretended to sleep wondering what Jack would do. "I will watch over you, Lunastar." He meowed. Awe that was sweet of him. I thought, and as I actually fell asleep I imagined him sleeping right next to me, guarding me with his life.
YAY, another chapter done! I liked this one, you could see how Jack changed in this one as his heart fell for Lunastar. I thought that was super cute. I'm going to start doing POV's now, it will be easier to understand that way
QOTD:
#1. Did you like me pairing Jack and Lunastar together or do you think that Lunastar should stay loyal to Whitecloud?
Thunderclan:
Leader: Mousestar- a light brown tom with a white chest (a little small for a leader but he's quick and deadly)
Deputy: Scarnose: a dark brown tom with more than 1 scar on his nose and over 4 scars on his body from past accidents and battles. (Large and strong tom that will do anything Mousestar orders)
Warriors:
Smokecloud- a dark gray tom with patches of light gray here and there. (average sized tom alright with battle moves but is really smart)
Riverclan:
Windclan:
Shadowclan: all deceased.
Outsiders:
Lunastar: a pretty silver tabby she cat with white paws and turquoise eyes. (Former Shadowclan leader)
Sweetpaw: A light gold tabby she cat with white underbelly and amber eyes (Former apprentice of Shadowclan) mother: Lunastar
Snowkit: a white she cat with gray paws and pale blue eyes(Former kit of Shadowclan) mother: Lunastar
Hollykit: a black she cat with white paws and chest and underbelly and green eyes. (Former kit of Shadowclan) mother: Lunastar
Nightkit: a black tabby tom with grey front paws and white back paws and dark blue eyes. (Former kit of Shadowclan.) Mother: Lunastar
Barn Cats:
Jessie: a pretty brown she-cat with white paws and amber eyes.
Jack: A handsome tan tabby tom with 4 white paws and chest and underbelly with forest green eyes.
Cody: a handsome gray tabby tom with amber eyes.
Cassidy: a pretty blue gray she cat with a silver stripe down her back and blue eyes.
Until tomorrow ppl!