YAY more reviews than usual! Thank you who reviewed. You have given me a good idea thank you. I think I will keep doing Lunastar&Jack. I think their cute. I have an hour on the computer so I better make this good.
JACK'S POV!
It had been a few nights since Lunastar and her kits had joined us in the barn. Every day I skipped my chores to help Lunastar and her kits with battle moves or hunting skills. Every night I watched over Lunastar and sometimes sleeping next to her. Each morning the rooster called "COCKADOODLEDOO!" and woke us up. Today was the 4 day Lunastar had been here. I met Lunastar and the kits down under our sleeping loft. "What are we going to do today mama?" Nightkit asked. "Ya mama!" Snowkit meowed. "Alright kits. Today we are going to do a test." Lunastar meowed. "What kind of test mother?" Sweetpaw asked.
"I'm not going to tell you." Lunastar smirked. I laughed. She turned to me "Hide and see if they can find you." She whispered. I nodded, we both ran from the kits and found our hiding places, and she was far away from me. I had hid in the straw next to a mouse den, hoping the mouse smell would cover my sent.
"I think they want us to sniff them out!" Sweetpaw said, the straw muffling her voice a bit. "Let's go!" Hollykit meowed. "Snowkit and I will look for mom, you and Nightkit will look for Jack." Sweetpaw meowed. I heard their paw steps marching away in different directions. 2 cats walked over my way. "Where do you think he is?" Hollykit asked. "I don't know!" Nightkit replied. "I think I smell something over here!" Said Hollykit, getting closer to me.
"You found me!" I heard a far away voice of Lunastar. "Looks like Snowkit and Sweetpaw found mom." Nightkit meowed. "Don't worry I think he's over here somewhere!" Hollykit meowed. I heard their paws getting closer and closer to me. I held my breath….. "Found you, Jack!" they meowed together pulling off the straw. "Good job kits, you did well!" I congratulated as I stood up.
They pounced on me. I fell over laughing. "Alright alright, let me get up young'uns." I meowed. They got off me. We walked together to the place where we had started off, Lunastar and the others were waiting. "Good job kits!" Lunastar meowed as we arrived. "You have passed your first assessment!" I grinned.
That night we all went for a walk, my siblings and Lunastar with her kits. We talked and walked under the sky that was turning pink from the sunset. I and Lunastar walked alone together. "It sure is a lovely sunset." Lunastar meowed, gazing up at the sunset. "Indeed it is." I replied, my heart thumping. "You are very good with battle skilled; do your siblings know how to battle?" Lunastar asked. "Of course they do, we grew up in the clans, our mother was Shadowclan, and our father was Thunderclan. We stayed for the first 10 moons of our life in Shadowclan, My name was Pinepaw, Jessie's name was Sparrowpaw, Cody was Ashpaw, and Cassidy was Shimmerpaw the medicine cat apprentice, We lived without knowing our Thunderclan father, but then our leader found out and kicked me and my siblings out, along with our mother. The next night a badger attacked, my mother died, but we got away. We were chased out by all the clans. We never stopped running. Then we found the barn. It was the perfect place to stay. We changed our name so nobody found out about us." I finished the history of my life looking up at the first stars.
"I never knew." Lunastar meowed softly. "Now you do." I said. "You understand what it felt like to almost die." Lunastar meowed. "So do you." I said looking at her pretty silver face, a spark of remembrance shined in her turquoise eyes. "Hey, I remember you! I was Lunakit, my sister was Palekit, and my mother was Lightstar, the leader that banished you!" Lunastar meowed. I remembered. We had always played together when we were kits. "Your mother was Lightstar." I growled. "Yes, but Jack, I had begged her not to do it, you were my best friend. You didn't deserve to be banished because of what your parents did. She considered it for a second, but then she refused." Lunastar explained.
"Thank you for trying, but in a way your mother saved us, we would have been lying on the ground dead along with your other clanmates." I said strongly. Lunastar smiled. "I never thought of it that way." She meowed. "Let's head back ya'll, the sun has gotten real low." Jessie called out. (That was a reference!) We all turned around and headed home.
We walked home silently. When we got to the barn door, it seemed to quiet, there wasn't even any crickets. I sniffed the air, so did Lunastar. "Wait! Windclan is here!" I yowled, but it was too late Jessie had already opened the door.
Inside was the whole Windclan waiting with claws outstretched, waiting to kill us
Ohhh cliff hanger! What will happen?! In this chapter you now know Jack and his sibling's background and Lunastar's mother and sister and her and Jack's background together. Their closer than you thought eh? I put a reference in there for you guys to figure out.
Lol I'm listening to Christmas music and my mom and brother are making cookies. Yum they smell good, I'm going to steal one.
Yum! Their delicious!
Q(s)OTD:
#1. What do you think about Jack's background?
#2. What reference is 'the sun's getting real low' from?
Until tomorrow!
Thunderclan:
Leader: Mousestar- a light brown tom with a white chest (a little small for a leader but he's quick and deadly)
Deputy: Scarnose: a dark brown tom with more than 1 scar on his nose and over 4 scars on his body from past accidents and battles. (Large and strong tom that will do anything Mousestar orders)
Warriors:
Smokecloud- a dark gray tom with patches of light gray here and there. (average sized tom alright with battle moves but is really smart)
Riverclan:
Windclan:
Shadowclan: all deceased.
Outsiders:
Lunastar: a pretty silver tabby she cat with white paws and turquoise eyes. (Former Shadowclan leader)
Sweetpaw: A light gold tabby she cat with white underbelly and amber eyes (Former apprentice of Shadowclan) mother: Lunastar
Snowkit: a white she cat with gray paws and pale blue eyes(Former kit of Shadowclan) mother: Lunastar
Hollykit: a black she cat with white paws and chest and underbelly and green eyes. (Former kit of Shadowclan) mother: Lunastar
Nightkit: a black tabby tom with grey front paws and white back paws and dark blue eyes. (Former kit of Shadowclan.) Mother: Lunastar
Barn Cats:
Jessie: a pretty brown she-cat with white paws and amber eyes.
Jack: A handsome tan tabby tom with 4 white paws and chest and underbelly with forest green eyes.
Cody: a handsome gray tabby tom with amber eyes.
Cassidy: a pretty blue gray she cat with a silver stripe down her back and blue eyes.
