Lol thank you OverlordMiles for commenting almost every chapter that means a lot to me!
OMG OMG OMG! I forgot something in the thing that has all the names in it (I forgot what it's called) I forgot to add Wesley! noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
Sorry about that people. *turns to Wesley* "Sorry about that, Wesley." *Wesley runs to a corner and cries* "Well folks! Onto to the story!"
JACK'S POV!
That night we all slept peacefully, I was happy I was back with my family again. We woke up to a stormy day. There were dark clouds hanging over the sky, but that wouldn't change our mood, we stayed happy and positive and chatted some. After a while (I couldn't tell what time it was) we reached a hill. Before half way up the hill Nightkit collapsed, soon followed by his sisters Hollykit and Snowkit. "Come one kits almost there!" Cassidy meowed. "I can't go anymore!" Snowkit groaned. I scooped them up. Nightkit and Snowkit on my back while I hold Hollykit delicately in my mouth. They all sighed in relief. "What do you say, kits?" Lunastar asked. "Thank you, jack!" they meowed. I smiled. "You're welcome little ones." I meowed.
We reached the top and saw a breath taking view. Nightkit almost slid off my back! "This is skyclan." Cassidy explained. Below us about 100 tail-lengths away was a hole in the ground, about 35 feet down was the bottom. The entrance was easy, a zigzag trail leading down to the bottom and holes, probably dens along the way. "Wow." Lunastar gasped.
"HALT! Who are you!" said a cat from far away. "Must be a Skyclan patrol." Sweetpaw meowed. We made our way down the hill and towards the cats. We went closer and closer. "Come, no further!" said a she-cat. We were about 5 tail-lengths away for each other. I observed the patrol. All of them had strong, long legs that when they jumped it seemed they could reach Starclan! They had a muscular built body, good for fighting, and light paws, good for hunting.
"Who are you?" a younger, more curious cat asked. Cassidy stepped forward. "We come from the other clans." Cassidy meowed. The patrol leader hissed. "What have you come seeking from us?" The patrol leader asked. "Our home has been attack and all of our clan mates have been killed except for us, we need your help, please were begging you!" Lunastar explained.
The patrol looked at one another. "Come with us." A she-cat meowed. The patrol walked off, the outsiders followed, not knowing another option. The patrol led them down to the trail. Soon even before the first turn there was the first hole, or den. "Stay here." The patrol leader ordered before walking into the den. There was some talking and then the cat stepped out again. "Come in," he meowed.
We followed him into the den which opened out to a pretty big den; in it was a white she-cat, sitting up with her tail wrapped neatly around her paws. "Hello clan cats, I am Flightstar, leader of Skyclan. Ratpelt, told me of your troubles and I have decided to help." She meowed calmly. She stood up. "Come, I will make an announcement." She meowed. We followed her out of the den. "All cats old enough to catch their own prey join beneath me, under skyrock!" Flightstar called. Cats joined underneath the leader, most of them had heard about the odd travelers. "As some of you know, there are travelers seeking our help." Flightstar started. Murmurs spread uneasily throughout the camp. "And yet some of you know that I am going to help them, any volunteers, to help this group?" Flightstar asked.
Silence. But then yowls broke into the air. Cats were coming out of nowhere, attacking every cat in their sight. Queens protected their kits, apprentices protected their siblings and warriors protected their friends. The stench hit my nose like a lightning bolt, Thunderclan! I turned to Lunastar.
A small tom was attacking her violently. The tom had her pinned down, spiting in her face. I growled and attacked the tom. I clawed the tom's back. He turned around, facing me and losing his grip on Lunastar. She saw her chance and she squirmed out of the toms reach and attacked him while he was distracted. The tom fell to the ground in front of me and I pinned him down.
I stared into his green eyes; they were almost the same as mine. When I locked gazes with him, I felt a pang in my chest, realizing the truth. "Father?" I asked. At the same time the tom said "Son?" Lunastar gasped, and my pulse raced, to extreme.
WOAH! Big shocker, eh? Lol your gonna have to wait 2 days to… OMG in two days is Christmas eve! Tell you what, I'll do a chapter tomorrow and then I'll do the adoptable stories the on Christmas eve, thanking everyone. I might sometime go back to Ravenkit's destiny, if you guys think I should. Oh and one more thing
*turns to the coffin of qotd* "RELIVE! BE ALIVE!" * the ghost of QOTD rises and turns into a real QOTD. "hmmm…." *reads QOTD*
QOTD:
#1. Do think I should go back to Ravenkit's destiny after I finish this story, or should I start another story (which I have in mind)?
I will add Wesley to the list sorry about that. *Wesley is still crying in a corner* Don't mind him!
Thunderclan:
Leader: Mousestar- a light brown tom with a white chest and forest green eyes. (a little small for a leader but he's quick and deadly)
Deputy: Scarnose: a dark brown tom with more than 1 scar on his nose and over 4 scars on his body from past accidents and battles and yellow eyes. (Large and strong tom that will do anything Mousestar orders)
Warriors:
Smokecloud- a dark gray tom with patches of light gray here and there and amber eyes. (average sized tom alright with battle moves but is really smart)
Riverclan:
Windclan:
Shadowclan: all deceased.
Outsiders:
Lunastar: a pretty silver tabby she cat with white paws and turquoise eyes. (Former Shadowclan leader)
Sweetpaw: A light gold tabby she cat with white underbelly and amber eyes (Former apprentice of Shadowclan) mother: Lunastar
Snowkit: a white she cat with gray paws and pale blue eyes(Former kit of Shadowclan) mother: Lunastar
Hollykit: a black she cat with white paws and chest and underbelly and green eyes. (Former kit of Shadowclan) mother: Lunastar
Nightkit: a black tabby tom with grey front paws and white back paws and dark blue eyes. (Former kit of Shadowclan.) Mother: Lunastar
Barn Cats:
Jessie: a pretty brown she-cat with white paws and amber eyes. (Former Shadowclan member: Sparrowpaw)
Jack: A handsome tan tabby tom with 4 white paws and chest and underbelly with forest green eyes. (Former shadowclan member: Pinepaw)
Cody: a handsome gray tabby tom with amber eyes. (Former shadowclan member: Ashpaw)
Cassidy: a pretty blue gray she cat with a silver stripe down her back and blue eyes. (Former shadowclan member: Shimmerpaw)
Wesley: a smaller tan tom with white chest and paw and bright green eyes. (Former shadowclan member: Thrushpaw)
Wesley is happy now *Wesley smiles* good now see you tomorrow!