Me: Here is the new chapter today!

Pit: *Coughs* Were is Pittoo?

Me: You can rest today Pit, make sure Dark Pit heals your fever!

Pit: No, I know what he's going to do. I'm heading to Lady Palutena's.

Me: I don't own anything except my story plot!


Chapter Eight: Kidnaped!

Palutena gasps as he saw Pit in Dark Pit's arms. "What happened?!" She cried as she ran over to Dark Pit who settled the angel on the couch.

"He was poisoned by Rose Mana. It was homemade." He replies with venom dripping in his voice. Palutena saddens at this.

"It seems it has started." Shiira spoke up.

"What do you mean?" Dark Pit asks.

Palutena whispers to Shiira that she we'll handle this. Pit's mother nodded and moved to caresses her son's head.

"The Mana family is a family that is always hunger for power and tries to get what they want. Before Rose's parents died they gave it to a witch named Sura to raise her until she dies. When Rose turned ten years old the witch gave her powers and died from the cause of an illness. She is the last member of the family in her generations. It happened to Pit's mother a long time ago. Shiira fell in love with a man named Hein Mana who lives as a human. Hein couldn't have wings because his father was mortal, he only had angel powers. He became obsessed with her. I can't tell you the rest, it is not my place to tell." Plautena finishes her story.

"Why don't we move Pit to his bedroom and have some centurions watch out for him." Shiira suggested.

"I guess so.." Dark Pit agreed and brought Pit to the Angel's room.


"Now let's talk about that poison she made." Shiira spoke as Plautena, Dark Pit and her sat down in the garden table.

"The poison she used is the same thing my husband would use whenever he sees men looking at me during his meetings. This recipe was passed down to the Mana family. There is a cure, but only the Mana family held it." The mother of Pit told them.

Dark Pit growled, "Then I'll beat the sh*t out of that Mana girl!" He tighten his fists in anger.

"Now, now. Clam down Dark Pit, we'll find a way." Palutena told him.

"Find a way?! But Pit's in-" Dark Pit cut off as he heard footsteps and flapping.

"Lady Palutena! Pit is kidnaped!" One of the centurions shouted.

"What?!" The three yelled.

The three got up and ran to Pit's room. They saw everything torn, some glass ornaments smashed on the floor. Lastly a window that is wide opened.

Dark Pit punched the wall beside him, making the women flinch.

"Damn her!" He growled with hatred, anger, and bloodlust.

"Something interesting is going on. I might as well join in." Another familiar voice is heard in the room.

"Viridi!" The Goddess looked at the nature Goddess who came in.

"Now, instead of standing here. Let's go and plan this out." Viridi told them.

Shiira gave one last look at the room, 'Please be safe Pit...' She thought and folllowed the others out the room.


Pit groaned in pain and coughed. He opens his eyes drowsily, 'Where am I?' He thought and slowly looks around the room. He tried to get up, only to meet chains bounding him to the ground.

"It seems you're awake!" Rose smiled evilly at Pit.

"Rose?" Pit asks.

The crazed girl rolled her eyes, "Of course." She says sarcastically.

"Why are you doing this?" Pit asks, still drowsy from the poison.

"Because Dark Pit is mine! He doesn't belong to you!" She shouted and hit the whip on the floor, making the other wince.

"If he is yours, then why didn't he go to you?" The Angel asks another question.

Rose grew mad, "SHUT UP! YOU'RE A JUST A LOSER THAT NO ONE SHOULD APPRECIATE!" She screamed and and whipped Pit's back.

The Angel cried out. After about 20 lashes, Rose stopped and panted. She grab out a knife and cut tiny wounds on Pit skin.

Pit cried out in pain, until he fainted from it. Blood was dripping on his back and his wounds.

Rose smirks, "Ah. I wonder how long will you last?" She asks herself and laughed as she walked out the room.

The Angel felt cold and lonely as he slept. "Someone, please help me." He managed to say.


"No!" Pit screamed.

"Hahaha! This a payment for killing your mother!" His father yelled.

"Please stop!" The Angel screamed as Shiira's husband abuses him.

Blood dripped to the floor, "Hope you learned your lesson." His father left the room.

The dream shifted.

"Dark Pit?" He asks as his Yami stood there.

"Pit, I-I don't love you anymore." He told him.

"W-Why?" Pit asked the darker Angel.

"I love Rose, she's more worthy than you.." Dark Pit said and walked away with Rose clinging to his arm.

Rose looks back and smirks at Pit.

"No wait!" The Angel yelled and ran to the two.

The dream shifted again.

"We're no longer your friends Pit." Lira spoke up.

"Did I-I do some-something wrong." He stutters.

"We don't want a loser in our group." They all said and left him.

"No! Please come back!" He begged and saw Rose again with them.

The dream shifted to another one.

"I shouldn't have gave birth to you!" His mother yelled.

"I shouldn't have taken you in!" Palutena also yelled.

"Who cares about a loser!" Viridi exclaimed.

"Why?" Pit mumbles. "What did I do?" As he saw the leaving him.

The dream shifts one last time. This time Pit is alone.

'It's so cold and lonely in here..' He thought and looks around.

'No one loves me.'

'I can feel the pain coursing through my veins. The poison spreading.' He thought, closing his eyes and he cried.

Back to reality. Rose was outside, hearing Pit cry in pain and sorrow. She smirks, "Finally the power is mine!" She laughed evilly and walked away.


Lira and her friends were called over to the Goddess's place. They entered with two centurions led them to the garden. They awed how big the place is.

"Thank so much for coming." Palutena smiled at them.

"It's a pleasure to be here Lady Palutena." They all answered.

"Come sit." She offered and they sat down.

"Dark Pit is something wrong?" Lira asks the angered darker Angel.

"I will explain it." A woman they didn't recognize spoke up.

"Not to be rude. But who are you?" Shine asks kindly.

The spirited lady smiled, "I'm Pit's mother, Shiira." She answered.

All of Pit's friends jaw-dropped.


Me: I'm done! I actually have a lot of free time now! Considering I'm done doing busy stuff in reality. Well, except for piano lessons and walking with my family everyday.

Palutena: Positive stuff!

Me: Yep, criticized comments are welcomed!

Palutena: Thank you for reading and please review!