"Guest chapter 3 . 6h ago
You sure have a funny definition of creativity. All SessRin fics are the same pedo or child grooming crap anyway. Same horrible opinions trying to justify why the pairing isn't a horrible, gross violation of a child's trust. You all make me sick, and the fact that you're always outright lying and saying that the creator said she wanted them to get together just makes all of you even more disgusting. You're all pedo -enablers and you should be ashamed"
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Ah, welcome back Guest :D I thought I told you clearly your opinion is unwanted, and you are at the wrong website, but since you are insist, please write more. I want to know what you can come up next. And in case you have not read my note about name calling in chapter 1, please check it out. Lovely name by the way.
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You said "All SessRin" did you read them all or did you just assumed that they are that way? If you have not read all, please don't go claiming something that could or could not be true. Don't lump all the people that have something in common together because that's just plain narrow-mined. You don't know them or what kind of people they are. And it makes you look stupid to declare something you are not an expert at. And if you truly read all as you have claim, "THANK YOU FOR READING"!
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"You sure have a funny definition of creativity."
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I truly want to see what your creativity is like. Care to share? I wonder just how good you can be? I will read it even if they are not my favorite paring. And don't worry, since I have not calling you any bad names or personally attacking you yet even after reading the tone of your note, I won't give you any terrible review without the truth. I don't go and attack people or shut their confidence down or calling them names just because we disagree in opinions. If I absolutely think it's terrible, I would normally give some idea of how it could be improve or simply leave them be instead of shutting them down. I know how much courage people need to post their story and won't be like some people who only point out the negatives and shut people down. That's for negative people only only see the bad things in everything. So give me the link when you write it. (If you have creative mind and write that is).
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By the way, are you sure you are a Rin Sess Hater? If I hate something so much, I stay away from it. I don't even want to look at it or go near it. (I do not hate Sess with other woman, but i don't like them, so i never read them or leave bad comments. It's call respect of personal preference.) However, from the sound of it, you have read a good number of Rin Sess. Are you sure you are not just shy? Lol.
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As for "sick" you are not the only one. I'm sick and disgusted with "the know it all" type who think they have all the answer in the world and have the right to tell everyone else what to think while their mind are so narrowed they see nothing but what they want to see. I hate it the most when people force their opinion on me because you won't like it either if I force you to see RinSess as lover like I do. Again, why am I wasting my breath?
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Anyway, since you are here, here's a little story at the end for you. At first I planned to leave the story as it was, but you INSPIRE me to write this chapter. Think of it whatever you like. I'm looking forward to your review. Thanks for reading. With every comment you write, I will replay you with a story since debate is not allow here. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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You are this story's Inspiration.
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Every year, there was a race among the dog demons to determine who was the fastest. They also held a tournament to find out who was the strongest. However, once Sesshomaru decided to enter, even when no words were spoken, everyone knew he would be the victor. A prize of each year was different, but was a trophy that proved to all he had won and earned the respected of all.
However, Sesshomaru could care less about the trophy for he was powerful by right. He only humored himself when he was bored and because he was the Lord of the Western Land.
There was a big cerebration going on in his palace after such tournament and without saying, he and his wife had to be there. Everyone was eating, drinking, laughing, telling jokes, telling stories, or just simply enjoying the feast. Sesshomaru, however, logged for solitude.
He was not entirely dislike parties, but if it were his choice, he rather be alone. He always founded of serenity.
No, that was not entirely true. He wished to be alone, but with her.
His eyes trailed toward the young woman sitting beside him, engaged in a conversation with one of his generals. She answered politely to their jokes and laughed at the right part.
Her cheek blushed red as soon as their eyes meet, remembering his declaration of his personal prize. She shifted slightly in her seat, trying not to let her scent escape boasting to the whole room what her mind had conjured up.
But maybe that was already too late?
Her cheeks flushed to another shade of red, while Sesshomaru's golden orbs roamed over her form in a way that he preserved for only her. His eyes darken, promised her a long night. She nipped her lip slightly as she felt another guts of hot blood rushing through her vein. She knew that look in his eyes. And he knew hers.
Even so, she was the Lady of the Wasteland now and had to carry court manner no matter what. She just hoped that the generals' noses were clouded by alcohol and not noticed her scent. The scent that was meant only for her husband.
Sesshomaru lifted the cup of sake to his lips, his eyes never left hers. He elegantly sipped the sake. She could not tear her eyes from those lips, remembering what those lips could do with other things.
The tiniest smirk occupied the corner of his lips, knowing he had successfully seducing his wife. To be honest, he was tire of waiting and wanted the party to be over already. The longer the wait, the harder he could contain the idea of simply shove everyone aside and carried her away to their bed chamber.
As if reading his mind, her already scarlet face flushed even redder, and her heart skipped another beat. Her heart would not stop racing and she felt as if her entire body was on fire.
"Please excuse me," she politely excused herself and stood up.
"The night is still young, you are not retiring already are you, Lady Rin?" asked a general from beside her.
"It has been a long day. However, as you said, the night is still young so please enjoy yourself. I, however, must retiring for the night." she responded. The general wanted to say more, but only bowed his head and let her go.
Rin walked elegantly toward the exist, tried to look as natural as possible under the intense gaze of a pair of golden orbs that made her felt fire as her skin was burned.
She should have some time to take a bath and prepared herself before he would follow her, she mused as she walked down the long hall of their palace.
She reached her room and was gathering her supply for a bath; however, a pair of large strong hands stopped her.
He suddenly appeared behind her, wrapped that pair of familiar hands around her slim waist. His head berried on the nape of her neck, making the young woman shuddered.
"You are early." It had barely been five minutes since she had left the room. She expected him to wait a little longer before he would follow her.
"Not early enough," he whispered in his cold toneless voice, but his hot breath tickled at her skin sad otherwise.
The next second, she found her feet off the ground and herself in a pair of strong arms. She gasped before giggled at the realization.
His lips crashed against hers.
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There! You have it! Review? I came up with the story on the spot and published without checking the grammars many times, so please forgive grammars. There might or might not be the next chapter depending on our one reviewer. So let's prey that out beloved RinSess hater review again. :D Thanks for the read.
PS. I will add chapter 3 to chapter 2 and this chapter will become chapter 3 instead. I will do that as soon as I got the review I am waiting for to make sure that she has read this. Not that you guys are not important, please don't think that way, but this is just too much fun answering her. And somehow she set my writing gear on fire. :D Take care.
Monday August 18, 2014