Back on track

I was reading some of the review for my first FanFiction story SHY LOVE AND A CHANGE OF HEARTS, and wow did I suck a writing back then lol.

I STILL DO, but I have improved big time. No periods, the sentences are majorly broken with enters wow I sucked at writing and grammar.

I'm not going to delete Shy love just sharing my thoughts; I am working on Ch 33 now.

Special thanks to BadassAlec, Aki666, KagomeMarie and Rougue101 for reviewing.

I hope you like this chapter. This one is for the both of you!

"Anything for you, Hime?" she thought, he's gone to the trouble of asking the Hokage to postpone the battles; for her.

"I hoped he would understand-" he grunted "- then Naruto and Kiba burst in-"

"Ki-Kiba and Na Naruto also…um ta-talked to him?" she asked.

"- they interrupted, that's what they did," he told her, he pulled away from the hug "Arigatou" she thanked him once again.

Sasuke nodded, "Ready to go home" he asked, with a smile she nodded at him. She was ready; she had been ready "Hai"

Sasuke looked at Hinata, she'd been quite on the way home. Was something wrong?

"Is something wrong Hinata?" he asked her, she saw her bit her bottom lip, "Nothing's wrong. I'm fine." she said with a sad smile.

"Four words and two lies. What's wrong?" he asked her again.

"Not-"

"-I know it's not nothing Hinata-" he told as he stepped in front of her, he looked at her eyes "-don't you trust me?" he asked without thinking.

"Sorry-"

"Sasuke-kun, I do trust you-" her eyes sadden, "-it's just. What if I can't be in the battles-?"

"You will be in the battles" he told her lifting her chin; however the sadness was still there.

"-I'll still train you and look after you to make sure your don't over do it-"

He smiled, a real smile came from him, which normally never happened "-we'll be back on track, you will be in the battles"

As if he had lifted the pressure off her shoulders he smiled, a real smile.

He saw the spark come back to her eyes, "Arigatou"

...

She fell asleep the minute her head hit his pillow, he needed to get some sleep as well in order for him to train with her.

Darkness, he saw only but darkness "Wh-where am I?" he asked himself.

A mirror, he saw a mirror. Walking towards it he saw his reflection, it was him when he was young.

His eyes were teary, he was crying.

His dream had become nightmare when he saw him; Uchiha Itachi.

"Foolish little brother-" that voice it was his voice.

Sasuke turned and turned and still, darkness.

"S-Sasuke" cold sweat fell from his face, it was her voice, Hinata' voice.

"H-Hinata?" he called out...

He smiled at she saw her, Hinata.

Her indigo hair and her pearly white eyes that when in the sun they look a light lavender color.

Then she vanished "-she only a memory, Sasuke" it was him again, his voice, his brother; Itachi.

She was an illusion, she wasn't real.

"NO!" he yelled bolting up from his nightmare.

...

"S-Sasuke-k-kun a-are you okay?" he heard her voice but this time it was real, it wasn't a nightmare.

"Yeah. I'm fine" he said whipping the sweat of his fore head.

He was shaking in his sleep, maybe he was cold. Covering Sasuke with a blanket, she rested her head on the pillow again.

They had slept on the same bed, she felt her face turn red just by thinking about it, and then she heard him scream "NO!" her heart stopped.

He bolted up from the bed, sweat dripping from his face.

She had to ask him, "S-Sasuke-k-kun a-are you okay?" she was worried for him.

"Yeah. I'm fine" he wasn't, she'd never seen him like this.

Sure he'd had nightmare before but-

"-a-are you s-sure?" he nodded. Dry sweat, was all he felt as he sat on the bed.

"I need to know-"

"Kn-know wh-what S-Sasuke?" she asked.

"I need to know that you're real." he told her.

There was silence, only the wind was heard "She's only a memory" the wind whistled as it passed by the window "-only a memory"

She got off the bed, and stood in front of him. Sasuke looked up; his heart was beating faster than ever, as it thought he had run around the village one hundred times.

Slowly she leaded down and kissed him.

Their lips touched sending electricity down his spine, she was real. She wasn't an illusion.

He depend the kiss and she moaned separating a bit he heard her "I'm r-real S-Sasuke-kun."

"Arigatou" he said kissing her again.

...

The field seemed used; the dirt and tree were used and broken.

Must be the other genin training just as they were going to do, they were going to train.

"We have to start from the begging," he told her. She didn't question him just nodded "H-hai"

He stood in the middle of the field "Begin" he told her.

She ran towards him, chakra at hand.

He dodged her hit by jumping back "-again!" he told her, she nodded turning back she dodged back and attack, but missed again.

"Aga-"

"Enough!" they heard a harsh voice, Hinata' chakra vanished as she saw "-father?"

"-Hinata, you are going back to the Hyuuga compounded-" he looked at the Uchiha "-today!"

Hinata' heart stopped "You are going back to the Hyuuga compounded" her father's words cut threw her like a kunai knife.

"NO!" Sasuke told Hiashi as he stood in front of Hinata "-she's not going back."

Hiashi could have argued, but he said nothing.

The third Hokage appeared with two ANBU Black Ops "-I'm sorry Sasuke, but Hinata has to go back to the Hyuuga compound, today."

"No" he said activating his Sharingan, the ANBU disappeared and reappeared behind him.

They held him back the Hokage said"-there is nothing you can do Sasuke, Hyuuga Hiashi is her father." the Hokage told him.

I'll stop there. Thought there wasn't going to be anymore problems huh; well Hiashi is back!

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