PSA #2

Good evening everyone! Couple things...

Thanks again for everyone's support. I am glad you are enjoying the story so far. Special shout out to f3arsentinel for the review! First!

I have just uploaded a revised version of chapter 1. Same basic content, but brought more up to the standard of chapter 3, so enjoy.

This also means I will be revising chapter 2. This is my top priority. I am working on chapter 4 as well, but I wont post it till ch. 2 is fixed. So hang in there.

As always, I am always looking for criticism, good or bad, so don't be shy.

If anyone thinks they know what is going on in Nick's head, sound off. I would love to know what you all think is happening.