Hope its not too bad!

Tris.

The train slows, and we break away. By now the sun had risen fully, and was making it's way up, towards the West. I look over at Tobias, questioning if we were getting off or not, he nods slightly and we jump off. I laugh as the feeling of weightlessness overcomes me, and prepare myself for the landing. My feet slam into the ground, and an uncomfortable pain shoots up my leg, but I ignore it.

Tobias puts his hands around my eyes again, and I sigh. "I have another surprise" he says mysteriously again. I can't help but shiver, his touch could make me do crazy things.

Tobias.

I lead Tris to my secret hiding place from when I was younger. When things would go from bad to worse, I would escape to this. It had so much sentimental value, and was the very thing that got me through my childhood.

Part of me feels nervous exposing so much of myself. I quickly push that thought aside, this was Tris, the one who accepted me, hands down, under any circumstance.

I slowly guide her, ending right at the edge of the foliage, beyond, is a circular lake, with water clear as day.

I slowly release my hands, and hold my breath.

Tris.

Tobias slowly releases his hands from my eyes, and I gasp. The sight in front of me was a lot to take in. Glass like water in front, evergreen trees and oaks surround me on all three sides, and most important of all, my wonderful boyfriend.

"This is amazing" I breathe. And he lets out a breath I didn't know he was holding. I take a step forward but feel something different, I look down and see blankets, all different colors and sizes, covering a huge space with a picnic basket in the middle.

I look up at him, and he looks down, he smiles and we race to the picnic basket. We have this game for picnics where we each pull out food items, alternating from person to person, and we make a meal for the other person out of the ingredients we pulled out.

First I pull out fresh strawberries. He grins widely, oh how he loves his strawberries. Next he pulls out a chocolate muffin. He eyes me, and I can't stop smiling. I pull out waffles, and he pulls out cinnamon, gross. And so on and so forth.

At the end, I am left with strawberries, blueberries, milk, waffles, syrup, brown sugar, peanut butter and bacon.

I can't stop myself from grinning, Tobias is gonna love this.

Tobias.

I look down at my ingredients, chocolate muffin, cinnamon, Nutella spread, cantaloupe, whipped cream, orange juice, sausage and celery. Great I think to myself, most of these things are things she hates. And then the idea strikes me.

Tris.

I spread the peanut butter and brown sugar on the waffle, adding liberal amounts of syrup on top. Next making flowers out of the strawberry slices and blue berry balls on top of that, finally adding milk and bacon to the side, and I'm done. I sit back and enjoy the scenery, waiting for Tobias to finish.

Tobias.

I spread the cinnamon and Nutella on top of the muffin, and glaze the top with whipped cream. Next to it, I awkwardly put the cantaloupe, sausage, and celery, finishing with the oj on the side. Not my best work but it will have to do. "Ready?" I ask.

Tris.

"Ready?" A deep voice sounds and I look up. "Ready" I say. And we take our plates out. He slides me his and I slide him mine. I look down and see the most horrendous plate of food I would ever eat, and I look up at him. He has a sheepish look, and I burst out laughing.

"Sorry" he says apologetically, pulling me towards him. "No, it's fine" I say between laughs. "I'll just nibble on the muffin and drink my oj."

We finish our 'breakfast' and sit together and laugh and talk. I kiss him slowly on the lips, tasting the sweetness of the syrup. "I love you so much, this is the best surprise, thank you." I say, heart racing. "I love you too, but the surprises don't end here." He says and pulls out a slice of Dauntless chocolate cake with a single candle in the middle, I gasp. "Happy birthday" he says smiling. "Since you didn't get the birthday breakfast you deserved, I hope some chocolate cake will be enough to wash those memories away"

"Why do you have to be so perfect?" I ask and I let my lips crash into his. What a perfect birthday.

Alrriiighhhht! Chapter two! How do you like it? Suggestions, comments, questions? Contact me! In the form of pm, review, email? Idk haha I sound like a commercial. But yeah, thanks for reading! Chapter 3 coming your way!