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Tris.
"Alright," Tobias says as he breaks away. "We have to go." I groan and pretend to pout. "Where are we going?"
"Surprise" he says. "Does everything have to be a surprise?" I question. He thinks about it for a while and I get lost in his muscles, "yes" he finally says, a smile playing at his lips.
Before I can groan, he takes my hand and pulls me towards a hidden pathway. We walk through and the wind shakes the trees, making the brightly colored leaves fall to the ground. I look up mesmerized, raining leaves, Tobias, the most romantic picnic breakfast. It was all so perfect.
I let out a laugh, and Tobias gives me a look. "What? I'm just so happy right now." He smiles and grabs my arm, throwing me onto his back. I laugh, as he starts running through random leaf piles.
He bounds up and down the pathways, and we end up in a little meadow. He gives me a look. And we start running. He hands me a rake from out of thin air, but I don't even question it.
We race to the pathways and start raking, bringing the leaves all the way back into the meadow. "Betcha I can make a bigger pile than you by the end of 5 minutes!" I call, challenging him.
He scoffs. "You're on Trissy boo." I give him a face, "alright, 5, 4," and I start running. "Hey!" He calls, running after me. He grabs me from behind and kisses my neck.
I squeal as he lifts me off the ground, and I turn around to kiss him. He loosens his grip and I take the chance to elbow him in the stomach. "Hey!" He yells, rubbing his stomach. "That's what you get for calling me Trissy boo!" I call back running for the closest pile of leaves.
By the time five minutes are almost up, most of the leaves are in our piles and are exactly the same size.
He looks at me, and eyes a leaf cluster about 30 feet away. I see where he looks, and give him a face. We run, getting in each other's way, but he beats me there. I groan and try to sidestep him, but he turns his rake over and jabs me with the rounded part.
"Oh it's on" I yell turning my rake. We parry and for a few minutes and I try to find an opening. I fake left and quickly run right, dodging his grasp.
I quickly rake as many leaves as I can and run back to my pile. "Hah!" I scream, as he runs back. "I win!"
"How about a celebratory kiss?" He asks, smirking. "You wish" I say, but give him a kiss anyways. "Wanna do something fun?"
I nod my head and he tells me to close my eyes. I roll them again, I hate surprises.
Tobias.
I make sure Tris isn't looking and start raking our two humongous leaf piles together to make a bigger one. I make sure she isn't looking again, and quickly jog towards a cluster of trees, taking out the next surprise.
Tris.
"What's taking so long?" I yell. "Alright alright, you can open your eyes now." I quickly open them, and look around, everything's the same, except for the immense leaf pile in front of me.
"Is this the surprise?" I question aloud. "Yep, guess what we're gonna do." He asks, giving me a mysterious look.
I think of the things we could do with a massive leaf pile, but nothing comes to mind. I shrug my shoulders, and he takes my hand. "Ready?" He asks. "3-2-1!" At one, he yanks my arm and starts running straight into the leaf pile.
We crash right into it, and sink to the bottom, surrounded by scratchy leaves and grass. I am stunned for a moment, and he gives me a kiss. "How'd you like it?" He questions. I slowly grin, "no biggie" I say. But he knows I loved it.
"Well, I have one more surprise for you right now, close your eyes and be a good little Trissy." I punch him in the arm when he says this but close my eyes.
Tobias.
I take out the chocolate cake, concealed in a basket under the leaves and light a candle. My hands trembling, knowing that she will be so surprised.
"Alright, open."
Tris.
"Alright, open" I hear a deep voice say, and my eyes flash open. In front of me is another slice of Dauntless chocolate cake with a candle in the middle. I small smile creeps into lips, until I am grinning widely from ear to ear. He smiles shyly, and I kiss him, forgetting to blow the candle.
It falls down and quickly erupts a fire among the dry dead leaves. He rolls me over and we run away, eating the cake, and laughing. Tasting the sweetness of his lips, I look up and embrace him. "I love you so much, thank you" I say quietly, nuzzling my face into his chest. He takes my chin, and lifts it so I have to look him in the eyes. "Tris, you do not know how much I love you back." I smile, and hug him tighter.
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