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Tris.
"Last bite?" Tobias asks, shoving the cake into my face. "You can have it" I say with a passive hand, "what? Trissy boo doesn't want it?" He fake pouts and I laugh.
"Alright alright, we'll share." I say taking a bite, and he eats the rest off the fork.
"So, I know your not gonna like this but..." I cut him off.
"Another surprise?"
"Not exactly" he says, a small grin forming at the edge of his lips. Suddenly I feel a wet drop on the top of my head. I look at Tobias and he looks up, a full smile forming on his lips. The first flurries of the season start to come down, and I watch mesmerized as the delicate drops fall to the ground. "Change of plans, we're playing in the snow."
"Wait what?" He grabs my hand and pulls me toward the direction of the marsh.
By the time we get there, my hair and clothes are soaked, and the snow is coming down harder. I shiver as I step in a bank, and my foot sinks in.
I shiver again, and Tobias gives me his jacket. I look over to him, giving him a smile of thanks, he shrugs unaffected by the coldness, and takes my hand.
The touch makes my insides melt, and my hand burn. He pulls my hand and we run through the already forming snowbanks, kicking and jumping.
He kisses me, and jumps to the ground, pulling me down with him. I land on top of him, and he kisses me again. I kiss him back, letting his tongue skirt the edge of my mouth, begging for entrance. I let it in a little bit, and smile.
Deciding to play with him I roll off of his chest, and he makes a pouting face, I give him a small peck.
Slightly satisfied he goes and starts moving his arms and legs in a waving motion. I give him a look, "what? Just do it, trust me."
I shrug and drop back down to the cold snow, numbing my back. I copy his waving motions and he gets up, picking me up with him princess style.
I look down at the indentations in the snow, in front of me are two human sized angels next to each other.
"It's beautiful," I breathe, and kiss him, this time granting him full entrance.
Tobias.
God, Tris is so hot, even when she has wet hair, and soaking clothes. I kiss her passionately and start walking towards another snow bank. I misplace my step and we roll down the hill, still attached to each other, still kissing, passionately, making out, hard.
We break apart once we stop rolling and she bursts out laughing. I can feel my cheeks turning red, but she kisses my cheek, and starts making another snow angel.
I eye her, and think about how perfect she is. "Hey! Come on! Make some snow angels with the birthday girl!" She yells.
I chuckle and roll over to where she is. She starts laughing again, and I get another idea.
Tris.
"Hey do you wanna build a snowman?" A deep voice asks me. I whip my head towards it and he grins. I give him a questioning look. He gets up and starts rolling a ball of snow. He keeps pushing until it's as big as the trunk of the oak trees, and as tall as my thigh.
"That's a snowman?" I ask. "No, no, Tris honey we're not even close" he says in his famous instructor voice. "Welcome to The way to make the perfect snowman 101!"
I smack him in the head, and he laughs. "Just show me how to make it."
He guides my hand as we roll the ball, we keep rolling until it's just a little smaller than the first one. Tobias lifts the heavy ball of packed snow and places it on top of the bigger one. I take the chance to stare at his muscles through his shirt.
He takes my hand again and we roll a smaller one. He lifts it and puts it on top of the 2nd one. By now it's taller than me, and as tall as Tobias. He takes a handful of pebbles, and 2 sticks and places it on the top ball. After a few minutes he steps back, in front is a, 'snowman'.
"So how do you like it?" He says wrapping his arms around me from behind. "It's beautiful" I say. "Well I saved the best for last," he says while pulling out a carrot.
"What's this for?" I question. "You tell me" he says mysteriously. He hands me the carrot and I look at the snowman.
Where would it go? I look at the head, of course! I take the carrot and jab it into the top part.
I take a step back, admiring my work. Tobias takes one look and bursts out laughing. I turn red, and try my best to make an annoyed look.
"What?" I say. "I put it in the right place didn't I?"
"It-it's supposed to be the nose" he manages to get out. I feel warmness rush into my cheeks and I turn my back to face him.
A few moments later I feel a hard sphere like structure hit my back. I turn around, and another hits me square in the face. I let out a scream, and start charging Tobias.
He keeps laughing, and starts running away. He stops and forms another ball from the snow. He throws it and it hits me in the face again.
Exasperated, I make my own and start chucking it at him. I drop to the ground to re stock my pile, and when I get up, he's gone. I look around, snowball in hand, eyeing every structure. Suddenly I feel a pair of strong arms wrap around me, and I am swept down to the ground.
I land on top of him again, and smash snow into his face. "I think that will do, Mr. Four" He sputters and gets up, carrying me through a small pathway, into the forest and underneath a large rock. Beneath it is a new pair of clothes and many blankets.
We sit down, and he looks away as I change. I do the same for him, while I'm still look the other way, he embraces me with a warm blanket, and we watch the snowfall, fall around the forest like scene around us.
"Close your eyes"
"Again?"
"It's a surprise"
"Fine"
I close my eyes and wait for the next surprise, annoyed.
"Alright open." My eyes flutter open, and I look in front of me. Tobias is holding a plate of Dauntless chocolate cake with a candle, and 2 cups of hot chocolate.
I kiss him, and blow out the candle. We share the chocolate cake and watch the snow. I think all the way back to the first day I met Tobias, and started my new life.
I turn to him "you're beyond perfect" I say, he goes in for a kiss, and I take the chance to smush another ball of snow into his face.
"Gotcha" I say playfully.
So how'd you guys like it? So, now that you guys know what I'm trying to do, what should they do next? Please tell me! I would love to hear your amazing ideas! Also if you have any comments, criticism, suggestions please tell me! And like always it totally very much makes my day when somebody tells me that they read my fanfiction. So yeah please tell me your ideas! And I hope it wasn't too bad! Shoutout to all you wonderful people who took the time to follow/favorite and to tell me you read this! You amazing people know who you are! Thank you so much! CHAPTER 6 COMING SHORTLY!
p.S. IF ANYONE KNOWS WHERE THIS LINE IS FROM "DO YOU WANT TO BUILD A SNOWMAN?"
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