First of all, if you don't like this story, don't read it.
Secondly, did anyone notice where I said he doesn't think this house is right? People have been asking and begging for an obstacle to be thrown in, so I'm putting one in. And YES, he will get better. I'm not trying to be rude, but seriously… The house will be the obstacle. Something is in the house, okay?
If you want me to just stop writing this, I will. If people don't like it and want me to stop, I will.
And if the chapters are a little repetitive I'm sorry, but I've been busy and write these chapters when I have a little time. It'll get better when school lets out, because I've been busy and this was my schedule until now. Promotion practice, class trip –from 6 am to 11 pm- Promotion practice, graduation practice, cookout, promotion practice, and then I graduated. I'll have time during the summer.
I didn't mean to rant. Sorry. And sorry if you think this story's horrible.
Edward POV
Bella and I were finally here, with my family.
Jasper still wasn't quite well, but Carlisle had him getting a little better. Now he was upset because this house unnerved him.
It unnerved me too.
I could… just barely… hear the faintest whisper of thoughts that did not belong to my family. It frightened me, to be honest.
I tried to speak with Alice, just like Jasper had, but she said she didn't see anything.
Carlisle wouldn't hear of leaving this house, either. He said Jasper needed peace and solitude to recover, that this house was perfect.
I disagreed.
Out of all people, Peter and Charlotte believed Jasper and I. The others didn't. They were being pig-headed about staying in this damn house.
I wanted out, and soon. There was something in the house with us, and it couldn't be good.
Peter was always hovering over Jasper, worried that the unseen creature would hurt him. Jasper didn't mind. He just wanted to know what it was.
Charlotte was always looking around, quietly fretting. She could feel it too. Something bad. Something heartless, cruel.
I desperately wanted Bella out of this godforsaken house, but she refused to leave. She believed me, but wanted to be near Alice and Jasper for now.
As for Jasper himself, he just wanted to leave, like me.
"Edward?"
Bella pulled me from my thoughts.
"Yes?"
"I.. I just saw something upstairs. Outside Jasper's room."
I leaped to my feet, alarmed. "You what?"
"It… it was kind of a human-like shape, but it was glowing.. and I couldn't really see features."
She looked worried- not frightened, but worried. Why wasn't she afraid? Even I was afraid, and I was a goddamn vampire.
"Show me where you saw it, love," I said. Bella took my hand and led me to a spot just outside Jasper's doorway.
"It was here."
I looked where she pointed.
Whatever it was, it certainly wasn't there now. All I heard was Jasper's breathing and the hum that was his faint thoughts.
"Are you sure, Bella?"
"I'm positive." She stared at the place hard, as if the thing would reappear.
Nothing.
Bella sighed. "It was there."
"I believe you," I assured her. "I'm sure it was there."
She turned and left, leaving me standing alone.
When I looked back at the spot… I saw something. It was very faint, and I could hardly see it, but it was there. It's thoughts were a faint buzzing noise, and it was indeed a human-shaped figure.
I turned to shout Carlisle's name, glancing back only briefly.
When I turned back around, it was gone.