I have decided to rewrite this story! I know a lot of people were disappointed when I stopped it so abruptly and rereading I've made the decision to rewrite and extend these chapters.
I'm publishing it under the story 'Shake Me Down' so anyone who's still interested in this idea, please check it out! I'd say my writing has drastically improved since writing this, so I hope people will enjoy the rewrite!
Thanks to all the people who read this the first time around, reading all the reviews is the main thing that encouraged me to rewrite!