Soooo, hey guys! I'm back! this chapter isn't much and it's a bad chapter.. i'm just trying out Four's pov and tell me if you like it or not.. i'll always accept your feedback and thank you for the support! ily guys. here's chapter 4.


Chapter 4-

FOUR'S POV

it's been two weeks since I teased Beatrice when Peter spilled milk on her on purpose. I wanted to help her but she's Abnegation, "faction before blood" remember? Even though we both came from the same faction. I remember that day when I was beaten to a pulp by my father, should I even call him that? No. By Marcus. Since I'm a sophomore, I'm not allowed to transfer faction yet, until the end of school year, but I was put in dauntless when I ran away from home. When I couldn't take another beating because it would be pleasurable for Marcus. I remembered someone put me in a Dauntless orphanage because I was near the dauntless compound and in the orphanage was where they would raise the children until they can live on their own, I was there for only a year, and in that particular year, I tried my best to do the training. surprisingly, I was good at aiming, I felt that I could fit in among the Dauntless. In my freshman year, I moved out from the orphanage and rented an apartment with my friend, Zeke. We rented this apartment together because we were going to the same school, Sefflar High. I met Zeke in the Dauntless compound one day, and he seemed like a really nice guy.

Zeke is a type of guy who likes to throw parties and who is popular. He has a thing with this girl, Shauna. I'm sure they aren't dating but they would make a great couple.

Tonight, it's the Halloween Party. I'm not sure what would I dress up as, a vampire? No. werewolf? Definitely not. Zombie? Ugh, no. An axe murderer? No, just no. Why is it so hard to dress up?

I ended up wearing black clothing, like my usual style. From top to bottom, I don't really need to dress up anyway, I'm going to be in the haunted house, scaring freshmen and sophomore. I planned this haunted house with Zeke and Shauna, this is going to be fun.

I reached school in ten minutes. I quickly ran up the stairs and jogged along the hallway where I found Shauna waiting for me.

"Come on Four!" Shauna yelled.

"Chill, I just reached school." I replied.

"Get your costume and change already, we're opening in five." She told me.

"I am in my costume."

"No. Nu-uh. you are not wearing that. I mean, its Halloween and we're scaring some students!"

"But…I don't know what to wear.."

"Ugh. just, get ready in your place. We're opening this haunted house...like about…now."

The bell rang and she pushed me inside, making me stumble.

As I waited to scare people, I heard some screams a few feet away. Eventually, I got bored and hid in a closet at the end of the hallway, waiting for a victim to come.

About half an hour later, I heard some shuffling feet. I peaked from the door and saw someone. Without thinking, I grabbed her and covered her mouth from screaming, then I pushed her into the closet. She thrashed around, searching blindly for the light switch and fighting me. It was no use, I was stronger than her. She's one wild girl, well...maybe not, people would do that if they were kidnapped.

"Hey! Someone help me!" she panicked.

"I'll let you out," I told her "If you can answer my riddle."

"Oh, please." the wild girl scoffed, turning away from me and bang on the door

"Come on, you're no fun." I said, chuckling.

"Yeah, what's the fun in getting thrown into a supply closet with some creep?"

Creep? I'm no creep. I'm just messing with her.

"Just answer the damn riddle, you haven't even heard it." I snapped.

"Fine, give me the riddle."

"Give me food and I will live. Give me water and I will die. What am I?" I told her.

She didn't answer for a long time, tapping her foot repeatedly.

"Fire!" she yelped.

I sighed. 'She's smart.' I thought and turned on the light.

A light bulb flickered on above her head, she winced at the shining light and rubbed her eyes. Beatrice turned to look at me and her eyes went wide and she looked irritated. Of course I was shocked too. she's Abnegation, what's she doing in a haunted house?

"You?!" we said in unison.

Beatrice shook her head, "Give me the key, Four. I'm getting out of here."

I see this as a chance, I could be with her tonight.

"No way, Beatrice. You're staying in here with me."

She glared at me "Give me the key or I'll—"

A threat. Hmm.. That is not abnegation at all.

"You'll what? Abnegation aren't violent." I smirked.

As soon as I said that, she looked furious. Without warning, she slapped me.

She. Beatrice. My Best friend's sister. Slapped me. She did. WOW.

"Ow! Beatrice!"

"The key, Four." she snapped.

I sighed and handed her the key. She unlocked the door, and she glared at me before she stormed off towards the gym.

'Damn, why isn't she dauntless?' I thought.

I turned to leave just as Mr. Hawthorne passed the hallway.

"What are you doing here? You're supposed to be in the gym or along the hallway. NOT HERE." he said.

"I…uh…" I stuttered.

'Nice going, Four.' I thought to myself.

"Detention. NOW." he yelled.

'Oh great.' I thought to myself, as I followed Mr. Hawthorne down the hallway.

As we approached the biology lab, he told me, "You are going to stay here until the end of the event, write a reflection or something, I don't care, just don't do anything stupid. Oh, and no electronic devices or any gadgets."

I was shoved inside the biology lab. 'Great! three more hours to go' I thought.


The minutes passed by and I was laying on top of the table when I heard the door unlock.

A girl was pushed inside the lab.

"Wait, I have to wait here? Alone?" she growled.

That voice, I know that voice.

"You've got a friend." Mr. Hawthorne pointed at me.

She turned to look at me and her jaw was set in a hard line just as Mr. Hawthorne slammed the door.

I felt myself grin mischievously.


Okay.. So.. Hey guys.. Im sorry this chapter sucks, i'm really stuck with all the assignments i have to do, and i'm supposed to be doing my homework but i'm too lazy so... yeah.. anyway, tell me if i should do more of someone's POV or just from the third person.. anyway, i'll try to post soon!

-K