Four New Clans Four New Secrets

by minimint12

"When the moon outshines the sun, the forest will fall and the path of stars will vanish in the smoke until the fire is quenched." I'm not done yet so updates will be coming soon. P.S Give me feedback of what you think needs to be changed. The full summary is in the Prologue!

15. Chapter 13 and a half

"Whoa, whoa." I meowed. " We can't go on with these non- commenters in the way," Thornfrost padded over to my side and mewed, "What are you talking about, Flamewing? Non-commenters?"

"These Twolegs are not commenting this story, and the TwoLeg who wrote it is getting very annoyed." I meowed. "So she isn't going to write this book anymore unless she get atleast, 15 comments on previous chapters. So, readers," I continued. " I command you by the power of StarClan to COMMENT!" Thornfrost cocked his head with agreement. "If you don't," He mewed. "Minimint12 will not write this story anymore!"

"Thank you for listening!" I meowed as I padded back, with Thornfrost to stare up the mountain with the frozen Tinypaw, Brightstorm, Lily and Darkblaze.

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Hey, minimint12 here! I have another Four New Clan Four New Secrets fanfic that I don't know what to do with. I think I should put it in third person but I'm not sure. Please R&R and tell me what you think!

15 comments due:

6/30/14