Okay, I rewrote the story. I didn't really change anything, only the grammar mistakes, mistakes and careless mistakes. I was sleepy when I first started making this chapter. I apologize for that by the way. Have a nice day!
A/N: Okay, umm…. I just wanna give a special thank you to KAOSmaster – for supporting me and motivating me NOT to be lazy XD. And also a special thank you to kungfuawsomeness – for the positive comments and the reviews that means a lot to me. but, I can't forget. Thank you also to everyone who have read my story. Here it is, Chapter 5
Simba POV
I woke up earlier than every adult in the den. All the cubs were gone except, Nala, Kula, Chumvi, Tama, Tojo and Ema. Ema decided to become our friends. She hated the bullies and her parents came to the Pridelands yesterday afternoon and my dad allowed them to stay. I was happy for Nala that she finally have more friends. We were known as 'The Special 7'. If Malka was here, it would be 8 but he's not, so it's 7. My friends in the den were still asleep. I managed to break free from cuddling with Nala. I was thirsty so I decided to go to the waterhole to satisfy my thirst and maybe reserve a spot under a shady tree. I stretched my body and heard several cracks which made me satisfied. Then, I walked over to the waterhole. When I reached there, all the cubs looked at me but I ignored them. I went to the edge of the waterhole and lap my tongue on the surface of the water. When I was satisfied, I turned around to leave. Suddenly, two lioness cub ran to me and said "Simba go out with me" said the first cub. "No, Simba, go out with me." said the second cub. I raised an eyebrow and said "uhhh, no thanks." Then, all the lioness cub except for Sikia said "BUT WHY NOT?" in unison. Sikia and Giza just glared at me. I rolled my eyes and replied "I g-got someone else in mind." With a smile. The cubs gasp. Some of them cried while others gave me a 'I'm gonna kill that someone' kind-of-look. Then, a cub named 'Sukari' said "WHO?!" I grin and said "personal information, it's classified." I smirked after saying that. The lioness cubs shouted "WHO?!" I just gave them a shrug. Sikia then said "It's Nala." I gasp. They all looked at me in disgust and said "THAT IDIOT? WHY WOULD YOU LIKE HER?! SHE'S A MORON AND SHE DOESN'T DESERVER A LIFE. OH, SHE'S REALLY GONNA GET IT." Suddenly, I became mad and said "SHE'S WAY BETTER THEN YOU GUYS, SHE'S KIND, AWESOME, HELPFUL, SELFLESS AND MORE. I WOULD TOTALLY PICK HER OVER ALL OF YOU COMBINED." Then, I gasp and realized what I said. The cubs growled at me. I just fake a smile and ran off in the direction of Priderock. I was running like I have never ran before. All the cubs at the waterhole chased after me. Suddenly, I saw a lion, it was uncle Scar. I shouted his name several times until he turned his head towards me. I jumped behind uncle Scar and the cubs stop in front of him. "Uncle, help me. There gonna kill me." Uncle Scar then smirk, I didn't understand why. Suddenly, he picked me up by the scruff of the neck and place me beside him. I sighed in relief. But then, Uncle Scar said "Go ahead" to the cubs. I was extremely terrified and shock. I started to run again, but I was to late. Uncle Scar ran away and left me alone with the cubs. Why did he do that? The cubs began to claw me, punch me, bite me, and beat me up. Suddenly, I fainted because someone punched me in the head hard. 20 minutes later, they stop beating me up and ran back to the waterhole. They left me there, under the sun. I couldn't open my eyes. There were bruises on my face, deep-cuts, scars, scratches, and it really hurts because it was under the hot sun. It was hot-searing pain. I couldn't move my lips nor my head. Is this where it ends?
Zazu POV
I was flying around the Pridelands to gather news for the morning report. So far, I got 2 news which are 'The monkeys and the chimpanzees kept fighting over the food' and the other one was '3 hyenas hunted a gazelle and brought it to the outlands." It was just about time to tell King Mufasa the news. On the way to Priderock, I spotted something golden in the grass. I flew down to the grass and I slowly walk over to the spot. When I got there, I gasp in shock because the Prince was beaten up. His eyes were closed. I bend my head down to hear his heartbeat, it was beating but it's quite slow. Without wasting time, I flew faster than I've ever had. When I reached Priderock, the adults just woke up. I flew into the cave without greeting them, I felt bad but this news was important. I was about to tell King Mufasa about Prince Simba but he asked me "Zazu, wheres Simba?" I panted and answered "PRINCE SIMBA GOT BEATEN UP, SIRE!" King Mufasa and Queen Sarabi exchanged looks and shouted "LEAD THE WAY ZAZU!" I flew out of the den followed by The King and Queen. Suddenly, 'The Special 7' group followed The King And Queen because Prince Simba was their best friend.
Mufasa POV
I was extremely worried about Simba, when Zazu said 'Prince Simba Got Beaten Up' I wanted to know if it was bad or just normal. I was beginning to run faster than Zazu, so I shouted "Faster, Zazu" and he replied "Uh Yes, Sire" and he flew faster. Sarabi and I ran at the same pace until Zazu stop and landed in front of us. He said "Through there, Sire." I slowly walked through the grass and saw Simba lying on the ground. I walked up to Simba with Sarabi following. Then, Sarabi went by my side while crying on my shoulder. It was worst then bad. It was horrible. I bend down to hear his heartbeat. It was very slow. Then, 'The Special 7' came into view and ran towards Simba. They gasp at how terrible his injuries were.
Nala POV
Simba was injured terribly, I broke down beside him and cried on his chest, I whispered while sobbing "S-simba please please, don't go. Please!" I cuddled up beside him and I could hear him breathing softly, so I licked the wounds to reduce the pain. Mufasa and Sarabi was crying. Suddenly, Mufasa said "We must take him to Rafiki, Now." And after that, he picked Simba up by the scruff of his neck and placed Simba gently on his back. Zazu flew ahead to Rafiki's tree to tell him about the incident. If I know who injured him, they will pay. When we arrived there, Rafiki already had his medicine in his tree. Mufasa gave Simba to Rafiki for Simba to get treated. We waited under the big tree. We wanted to go up there but Rafiki didn't allow us too. 2 hours later, Rafiki came down with Simba in his grasp. Simba's wounds were treated but he's eyes still remained closed. Rafiki gently put Simba on the back of Mufasa.
"Mufasa, your boy is alive, however he has scars and bruises everywhere. He could survive if his strong but if his weak -sigh- his time will be up." Stated Rafiki clearly. Tears started to flow down my muzzle. The members in 'The Special 7' group were all crying. Even Tama, the brutal one, also cried. Mufasa and Sarabi nodded with tears welding in their eyes. Mufasa and Sarabi walked back to Priderock in silence while 'The Special 7' talk with each other, but not me. I stayed quiet the whole trip. When we reached Priderock, Mufasa placed Simba gently on the 'Royal Rock'. I went next to Simba and licked his cheeks. Then I laid beside him, to protect him from anyone at all. His father and mother just sat and stare at us but I didn't mind. I nuzzled him and whispered "You'll be just fine Simba, trust me and I….I Love You." I licked his face once more before taking a nap.
Simba POV
I could hear people talking but I couldn't see because my eyes hurt to much. Suddenly, I heard Nala whispering 'I Love You' I slowly opened my eyes and ignored the pain. I saw my mom and dad walking out of the den. I wanted to shout but I couldn't because it hurts bad. I then said "mom….dad.." but they didn't hear me. My whole body hurts. I turned my head to the left slowly and whispered "Nala, Nala. Wake up." Then, Nala woke up slowly and saw my eyes open. She screamed "YAY! YOUR ALIVE!" She nuzzled me and licked my check. I smiled and whispered "I Love You Too." That's where Nala was shocked. She didn't move, so I continuously licked her face until she was back to Reality. She shook her head and answered "what did you say?" I smiled and said "I Love You Too." She leapt with joy while screaming "YAY!". She jumped around the whole den. Then, she ran outside the entrance of the den.
Nala POV
I ran up to My mom, Mufasa and Sarabi. They were crying and crying until I ran up to them."HE'S AWAKE! WOOOOOHOOOOO!" I said while jumping around with joy. But, they didn't clearly heard what I said because I said it quickly. My mom smiled but was still sad, she picked me up to give me a bath. I jumped away from her paws and said "Simba's awake now!" Mufasa, Sarabi and my mom exchanged looks and rush towards Priderock. I followed them from behind. When they reach Priderock, I ran into the den first and nuzzled Simba while he returned the nuzzle. Then, Mufasa and Sarabi rush to Simba and they nuzzled each other. Mufasa then asked "Who did this to you?" Simba answered "Did what?" Sarabi then walked up to him and said "The scars and bruises on your bodies, who did those?" However, Simba answered "I don't remember. What happen actually? All I could remember today was, going to the waterhole in the morning." Then Mufasa answered "With who?" and Simba answered "No one." After that, he said "argh, my head hurts." Mufasa, Sarabi and I sigh because he couldn't remember who did it.
A/N: Sorry, if its boring. Its quite late here and im tired. Soooo I hope you enjoy chapter 5. Peace out ~K_4_E