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Victoria's Secret
I run along next to the train with the other Dauntless, trying not to trip as well as timing when I should leap on. I'll just wait until they all start jumping on to see how they do it. Before I know it, the person in front of me jumps on, a muscular, and hot guy. I stumble and almost miss the jump. He grabs my hand and pulls me into the train car. I feel sparks go up my arm we he touches me, and lose myself in his electric blue eyes. We stare at each other for a couple of seconds until I get shoved in the shoulder by the Abnegation girl.
"Watch it, Stiff," I glare.
"S-sorry," she stammers, I must look intimidating, I'm tall, gorgeous, fierce and curvy and she's well, she's not as beautiful as me. Call me stuck up, I don't care, it's true, I would never lie.
"Don't be mean...?" the guy says to me.
"Victoria," I answer.
"Well, don't be mean Victoria"
"Sorry," I say in a flirty voice, twisting my hair around my finger, "and you are..?"
"Four," he says, "your training instructor."
"Nice to meet you Four," I reply. He can't stop staring at me, I smirk, this happens with every guy I meet. The Stiff coughs, waking us out of our conversation and I scowl at her, she keeps interrupting us.
"I'm Tris," she says, shaking both of our hands. I roll my eyes, it's not that I don't like her, just that she's a little annoying, and she's trying to steal the guy I like. I laugh, like she could ever steal a guy from me.
"What's so funny?" Tris asks me.
"Oh nothing," I reply, "just relieved that I've already made it this far!"
"Me too!" she exclaims, relieved.
I laugh, in my head this time, she's so gullible. Suddenly all the Dauntless start leaping off the train onto a roof. Between the roof and the train there is a gap, at least 4 feet away, I would never admit it, but I am a little scared.
"Wanna jump together?" Tris asks me, just as Four leaps off the train.
I shrug, "I don't see why not," I reply.
"On three," she says, "One," I gulp, what if I don't make it? "Two," I get ready to run, "Three!" We leap off the train and roll over on top of the roof. We sit up, laughing, giddy that we made it. I'm beginning to like Tris, she's funny and nice, a little annoying and trying to steal the guy I like, but funny, nice.
"Hurry up initiates! You at the back! Hurry up!" a guy with like, a billion piercing's says, "I'm Eric, a Dauntless leader, I will choose whether you stay in Dauntless or not."
"Wait," a guy from the back yells, "everyone will get into Dauntless won't they? Shouldn't they have told us that before?" His voice shakes.
"Would that have changed your decision? If you were really Dauntless, you wouldn't care, are you really Dauntless? Or should I send you on the train to the factionless?" He says maliciously, eyeing everyone suspiciously. The boy shakes his head in fear.
"To get into Dauntless, you have to jump off this roof, who wants to go first?" Everyone backs away, except for me, I step forward.
"Well, well, we have a volunteer, hurry up, we don't have all day," He says.
I step up to the edge, there is a hole, filled with blackness, and I can't see what's down there.
"Initiate," Eric growls, threateningly. I take a deep breath, and I jump. It isn't even that scary, I let out a whoop, and land on a bouncy net. I did it. I did it! Four helps me off the net.
"Great job, Victoria!" He says, staring again, he shakes his head and yells out "first jumper, Victoria!"
Everyone claps for me and I smile. Four is still staring at me and I smirk. Tris comes screaming down and lands in the net, breaking our moment again. I sigh as Four helps Tris off he net. She holds his hand a little too long and I cough. They look over at me and Four stares at me again. Tris scowls. Looks like this is going to get competitive.
TIMESKIP
The Transfers gather together and watch the Dauntless-Born train. We started our training today but everyone was terrible apparently, everyone except me, he kept staring at me too, but sorry, I'm Four's. Eric wanted us to watch some initiates that could 'actually train', as he put it. They were really good. One guy stood out the most to me, he was tall, with brown hair and pretty, determined, brown eyes. He was hot too. He was beating the shit out of that punching bag and I wouldn't like to get hit by one of those strong arms. He stopped punching the punching bag, took off his shirt and started throwing knives. All of the hit the bullseye. I looked at his stomach, oh boy he had abs. I imagined what it would be like to kiss him.
No Victoria, you love Four
Go away stupid voice, I can love two people
You don't even know this guys name
The guy walks up to me, startling me out of my daydream.
"Hey, I'm Uriah," He says, staring, like everyone else.
"I'm Victoria," I say smiling at him.
"That's a really pretty name," He says, smiling back. He has a really nice smile, is there anything not perfect about him?
What about Four, Victoria?
I thought I told you to go away!
Just remember Four
Like I could forget him!
"Well I got to get back to my training, see you 'round, Uriah," I say, turning around and walking back to the other transfers, I feel his stare against my back as I walk away and I smirk. I got all the boys trippin'. I suppress a laugh and say hi to Tris and Christina. I met Christina after I made the jump and she is really nice, I like her more than Tris.
"Where did you go?" Christina asks.
"I was just talking to that guy over there," I say pointing to Uriah, "his names Uriah."
"He is hot," Christina says.
"I know, he is really nice and funny, and he has the best abs, like wow," I reply.
She laughs, "you got that right," and we turn back to watch Four demonstrating how to throw knives, which I already know how to do. I used to practice at home when I was by myself, and I almost always get bullseye.
"Victoria!" Four yells, "would you like to demonstrate instead of me?"
"Sure, I say, walking up to the front and taking the knives from him. He looks surprised, but steps back to give me room. I take my stance and throw the knife, it lands in bullseye. Four looks impressed, but I'm not done yet, I throw the next knife and it lands right next to the other knife. I throw the last knife and it lands right next to the first knife again, Four's look is priceless as I smirk at him.
"Uh-Thank you for that Victoria," he says, his face expressing disbelief. I walk away flipping my hair and see that the Dauntless-Born watched me too, the were all wearing the same look as Four, complete disbelief. They were all staring at me, especially the guys, so I smiled and waved at them and they jumped out of their daze and went back to their training. Tris and Christina ran up to me in a very excited manner.
"Oh my god, Victoria! You totally showed Four up! Did you see the look on his face?! You beat his ass!" Christina squeals.
"How did you learn to throw like that? It's amazing!" Tris exclaims.
"Thanks guys," I laugh, "now lets go train."
We train for 4 hours and Eric still isn't satisfied with us. Next training Four says we will be fighting each other, and I am confident. I am good with hand to hand combat, but I am worried that I will lose against one of the bigger guys, like Peter or Edward. Peter is very brutal and cruel, he came from Candor, like me, he stabbed a guy at school in the eye with a butter knife. And Edward is just huge. Christina, Tris, and I walked back to our dorms discussing who is 'hot or not' out of the initiates. Zeke, Uriah, Four, Will, Jono and Sam were on the hot list and the rest on the not, although there were lots of Dauntless-Born initiates we didn't know the name of that were hot too. We got inside and went to bed straight away, tired from a long day of training.
TIMESKIP
"Get up! Get up!" I woke to the sound of Four yelling at the initiates. I sat up groggily and grabbed my clothes, I decided on a black off the shoulder crop top and black high waisted shorts that accent my curves. Four and Uriah are going to stare, I thought, smirking. I walk out with Tris and Christina and gather in the training room with the other initiates. Four was writing who we were pairs of names on the chalk board, these were the pairs.
Victoria Drew
Tris Peter
Christina Molly
Edward Maya
The Dauntless-Born initiates would be fighting themselves and then tomorrow we would be fighting each other.
"Victoria, Drew, you're up," Four says, staring at me. I walk up to the square and take my stance, lanky Drew walks up to, a little green and shaking. He knows I'm going to beat him.
"Three, two, one, GO!" Four yells. Drew ran up to me and tried to punch me but I swept his legs out from underneath him before he knew what got to him, he fell and hit his head on the floor. I kicked him in the stomach a few times and once in the head, he blacked out and Four announced me as the winner. Peter carried Drew out of the room, giving me a death glare on the way out which quickly turned into a glazed expression as he stared at me. I smirked and laughed in my head, no one can stay angry at me for very long. Christina and Molly go up to fight as Peter went away. I'm a little scared for Christina because Molly is basically twice her size.
"Three, two, one, GO!" Four yells. They circled each other for a bit until Molly feinted to one side before punching Christina in the other. Christina responds by pulling Molly's hair and slapping her across the face, then punching her in the stomach. Molly doubled over in pain before kicking Christina in the stomach repeatedly. Christina fell to the ground and I drew in a sharp breath as she gasped in pain. Molly kept kicking her.
"Molly STOP!" Christina screams, "STOP PLEASE!"
"Are you saying that you're giving up?" Eric asks, viciously.
"Y-yes," Christina replies, breathless and scared.
"Coward," Eric hisses, "in a actual fight you can't just give up." He is now growling in her face. "Stand over there you fucking coward," Eric says, pointing to the knife targets.
"What are you gonna do?" I ask him.
"Lets just say that Four is going to get some target practice," says Eric, while staring at me, "and no flinching or you're out!" Christina walks to the target, legs shaking, and Four throws the first knife at her. She doesn't finch, but tears are running down her face.
"Wait!" I burst out, "let me take her place." There is a guarded expression on Eric's face when he lets me go stand at the target, like he doesn't want me to get hurt, but I know that Four will not hurt me. He throws the first knife and hit its the spot right above my head. I don't flinch. He throws second knife and it hits even closer to my head, yet I still don't flinch. He throws the last knife and it skims the top of my head, I don't flinch, but I am angry. He did it on purpose, I know that. But I still glare at him when I walk away from the target. Most of the girls are looking at me with jealousy and the guys, they just stare at me. I leave the training area feeling proud and victorious.