Chapter I The Bronze Map

In the previous chapter Alvin had received a mysterious letter from someone named Chloe. Even though he was supposed to be grounded after the last story he went to meet her but this story actually begins on a deserted island where a chipmunk with a hook followed a chipmunk with red fur were treding through a dense jungle hacking and slashing there way through trees. Eventually they came to stop in a clearing in the middle of the clearing was a chest. The two chipmunks then approached the chest and the one with red fur used her claws to break the padlock. After the padlock was broken the chipmunk with hook for a hand took a map out of the chest.

"Are you kidding me Leon?" Asked the red furred chipmunk we came all the way here for a map"

"It's not just any map Valerie" replied Leon "this map is the key to immortality"


Leon and Valerie went back to their ship which was parked near to the island. Once they boarded their ship Leon told all the pirates to meet him in his cabim immediately.

Ever since Diablo was killed Leon took over as captain and his girlfriend Valerie took over as second in command she also helped him get off the island. Together they recruited some new pirates;

Erin James probably the only squirrel (apart from Andrew) on the ship She has Black fur and red eyes. her hair is in a ponytail and she wears a red shirt with black pants and red heels and has scar above her eye But she still maintains her beauty.

Zion Rossetti who Leon thinks only joined the crew because her friend Erin did. She has blonde hair with messy curls and silver eyes ears and wears a white tank top and black baggy pants with white sneakers. she had a necklace that says 'Forget Love' and a birthmark on her right shoulder.

Melvin Corvin, Ray Corvin's older brother and apparently a werewolf (A/N: or munkwolf because were means man). He wears black hoodie and black jeans with black gloves.

Ray Corvin and Andrew are probably the only two who stayed with Leon. Andrew is the uncle of on of enemy's and Ray corvin is an un-dead chipmunk.

Dexter, the late captain Daiblo's son he joined for one reason and one reason only revenge. Leon had told him that Alvin and his crew had killed Cole. Dexter wore a white vest and glasses that looked like they were taped together. His fur was untidy and light brown.

Leon looked at his crew who were now standing in his cabin and noticed that someone was missing.

"Where's Paris?" He asked as he looked at Valerie

"You mean Cinderella? She's in the lower deck doing some chores" Valerie replied

Paris wasn't exactly evil or a pirate, she's only on the ship because Valerie saved her life so now she has to do whatever Valerie tells her to do. Her fur is blonde and she wears a cream colored jacket and a golden necklace around her neck that said her name.

"Did you find it?" Asked Andrew

Leon then put the map on the desk which in front of them for all of the crew to see.

"Does that answer your question?" He replied

"Do you even know where this map actually leads?" Asked Erin

"Of course I do it leads to the fountain of youth and with it we'll be invincible" Leon replied


Meanwhile Alvin was aboard a ship and just met up with the chipmunk who sent him the letter Chloe. She had light blonde fur and wore a pink jacket and jeans, she also had a heart shaped locket around her neck.

"Alvin, I bet you're wondering why I have called you here" she said

"Beats staying in my room for a month" Alvin replied

"I have received information that Leon has retrieved the bronze map" said Chloe

"What's the bronze map?" Asked Alvin

"With the bronze map he can locate the fountain of youth and become immortal" replied Chloe "We can not let that happen, will you help?"

"I don't know last time I had a crew to help me" said Alvin

"Don't worry you won't be alone" Chloe replied

Just then several chipmunks entered onto the main deck via the stairs that lead to the lower deck. Alvin noticed most of the chipmunks: he noticed, Tom Zenned, Nicole Madar, Judy Bishop, Jason Dahl and Rock Hardy but he also noticed that were three new recruits.

"Alvin, this my little brother Scott" Said Nicole as she indicated to the chipmunk next to her.

Scott looked like Simon except he didn't wear glasses. he wore a black t-shirt as well as a red long-sleeve shirt underneath with a gold necklace and a gold tooth.

"This is my adopted sister Reilly Fulmer" said Rocky as indicated to the chipmunk next to him.

Reilly had brunette fur and dark brown eyes. She wore a pale orange shirt with a jean jacket over it and has a sky blue poka dotted shirt. her fur is the same as Brittany's except it's straight.

"And I am Zara Rosetti" said the third new recruit

Zaria had blonde hair with messy curls and silver eyes. She wore a black long sleeved belly shirt with a hood, baggy army pants and black sneakers. She has a necklace that says 'Forever Young' a birthmark of a moon on her lower stomach.

"Do you have any idea where we are heading?" Asked Jason

"In a matter of fact I do" replied Chloe "I have received some information that the pirate's ship is in the middle of the pacific"

"Where do you get your information?" Asked Alvin

"That's not important" replied Chloe


Chloe then took the helm and then they all set sailed onto the open sea. Once they were far out at sea Alvin started to get re-acquaint with his old crew and acquaint himself with the new members. Eventually they saw a ship on the horizon barely visible through some fog so Chloe weighed the anchor and stop the ship.

"Why are we stopping?" Asked Judy

"That over is the pirate's ship" replied Chloe

"Great, what do we do now?" Asked Tom

"One of us needs to sneak aboard and steal the Bronze map" replied Chloe

"One of us?" Asked Zaria

"If we all go it would be too risky" replied Chloe "this is how we will decide"

Chloe then held up a bunch of straws for the the crew to pick.

"Couldn't one of us just volunteer?" Asked Rocky

"You could but I prefer this way" replied Chloe

The crew each picked a straw from the bunch; Alvin, Jason, Judy, Zaria, Rocky, Reilly, Tom and Scott all got long straws and Nicole got a short straw even Chloe picked a straw which was long.

"Well it looks like Nicole is going" said Chloe

"What!" Exclaimed Nicole

"Well if she's going then I'm going" said Tom

"Did you not hear me? It'll be two risky" said Chloe

"There will only be two of us" said Tom

"My point exactly, it's a very important mission not a date" said Chloe

"Don't worry Tom I'll be OK" said Nicole

Nicole then jumped off the ship and swam to the enemy's ship. She then started to climb up it and crawled into an open porthole, luckily for her it lead into the captain's cabin and on the desk in the middle of the cabin was the bronze map. Nicole then started examining the map and then picked it up.

"Well that was easy" said Nicole

She then heard footsteps from outside the door so she hid under the desk. Just then the door to the cabin swung open and Valerie entered who had noticed that the map was missing. She then used her claws to destroy the desk to reveal Nicole.

"Didn't you think no one would look down?" Said Valerie

"Who are you?" Nicole asked as she got up off the floor

"I'm Valerie the new first mate of this ship and the last face you'll ever see" replied Valerie as she got her claws out and pointed them at Nicole

"I doubt that" said Nicole as withdrew her sword

Nicole then lunged at Valerie but she grabbed the sword with her claws and disamerd Nicole. She then went to swipe at Nicole with her claws but narrowly missed.

"I paint my claws with snake venom just one scratch and you're dead" mocked Valerie

"Great, what kind of snake?" Asked Nicole

"It varies today rattlesnake" replied Valerie "Just give me back the map and I might not kill you"

"What if I don't believe you?" Asked Nicole

"Then I'll just have to take it!" Exclaimed Valerie

Valerie then grabbed the map that Nicole was still holding. They then staring having a tug of war with the map and eventually the map tore in half and both chipmunks fell backwards.

"Now look what you've done!" Exclaimed Valerie

"Doesn't matter to me I managed to memorize the map" Said Nicole


Valerie was about to grab Nicole but before she could get close Nicole jumped out the porthole where she jumped in and swam back to her ship. when she was back on board the she was greeted by the the crew.

"Well looks like her face wasn't the face I was going to see" said Nicole

"Her?" Asked Chloe

"yeah someone called Valerie" Replied Nicole

"You must listen to me, you must not cross paths with her she's too dangerous" said Chloe

Nicole had told everyone what had happened on the ship and that the map had torn in two and she told them not to worry because she had the map memorized.


Later Alvin had entered Chloe's cabin just as she had released a owl out of the porthole.

"What was that?" Asked Alvin

"What was what?" Replied Chloe

"That owl, you had an owl in your cabin!" Exclaimed Alvin

"It was just an owlet" Said Chloe

"They're still predators!" Exclaimed Alvin

"What do want Alvin" Chloe said with a sigh

"I was just wondering, why are you so eager to find the fountain of youth?" Asked Alvin

Chloe then opened draw to her desk and pulled out an urn Alvin looked inside the urn and saw that were some ashes inside.

"You remember my brother, Cole" said Chloe


A/N: I apologize if your OC(s) didn't any lines in this chapter (it is the first chapter after all)

Have any of you guys seen the sneak peak for the Alvin and the chipmunks TV show? It's called Alvinnn and the chipmunks if you haven't I think you should check it out...but until next time C ya.