Ahhh! Chapter four! I love you guys so much I couldn't help myself but write another chapter. =)
Also, shoutout to my buddy luckystar9854 who is my bestie since grade 1!
Robinwing: Aww, thank you!
Blackheart: Thanks so much! Whats the warrior name for her?
Spottedpaw: I'll try and include that without an Edward-Jacob thing going on...
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Cloudpaw looked amused. She and Blazepaw had stood up, and Bravepaw had started talking about his mentor, Robinwing, a she-cat with countless shades of ginger and brown eyes.
"She's actually really shy, but she's also quite mysterious. She has no idea what her past as a kit was like, and then ran away from ThunderClan and RiverClan took her in." Blazepaw had told her. "The only problem is, every time we'd go hunting and I'd get too close to the twoleg place, she'd haul me away." he had said, his eyes sparkling with mischief. "She-"
"Is standing right behind you and is reminding you to clean the elder's bedding."
Blazepaw jumped, then slowly turned around and faced the ginger she-cat. "Yes, Robinwing..."
"And.. uh... hi, Cloudpaw." Robinwing murmured in her direction.
"Hi!" Cloudpaw said, and Robinwing turned around but nodded in acknowledgement as she started walking away.
"Okayy, I'll do the elders' bedding after you catch a fish!" Blazepaw said, and then flicked her ear while starting to prance towards the exit of the camp.
"Hey, wait up!" Cloudpaw said, running to catch up with Blazepaw. "My legs are shorter then yours!"
Blazepaw ignored her. "We can go to the River-stones, the lake, or the Birds' Stream, where do you want to go?" Blazepaw offered.
"I don't know! I haven't been outside before... Woah." Cloudpaw looked around, just noticing how beautiful her surroundings where.
There was a long meadow with lush green grass, and a few different kinds of trees scattered around. To one side, there was a small pond with some shrubs and flowers along the edges, on the other side, there where a bunch of rock in the ground, with cracks all around each individual one. A little further off, she could hear the faint woosh of the lake.
"Going fishing?"
Cloudpaw slowly turned around and saw a lithe silver she-cat with white paws. Behind her was a big black tom with gray streaks and a smaller golden she-cat with deep orange eyes.
"I'm Silverleaf. This is Dawnpaw and Luridwind." said the silver she-cat. The black tom with gray streaks who must had been Luridwind, stepped forward and looked her over, murmuring things.
"Good structure... well-fed... sleek pelt... but short legs..." Then he spoke. "Nice to meet you Cloudpaw. This is my daughter, Dawnpaw. I also have two sons, Daypaw and Nightpaw. Who, I'm sure, you'll meet later tonight." "He had a strong, firm voice, but it was also kind.
"U-Umm, yes, sir." Stuttered Cloudpaw.
"Call me Luridwind."
"Yes, Luridwind." Cloudpaw corrected herself.
"I'm Dawnpaw." The golden she-cat with deep orange eyes stepped forward. "And I will be the best warrior in the whole Clan, so beware. Got it?"
"Got it." Cloudpaw confirmed.
"Now now, Dawnpaw. Why don't you get Daypaw and go hunt." Silverleaf meowed.
"Hmph." Dawnpaw stuck up her tail and left.
"You must forgive her, she wants to prove to Sunstrpie that she will be the best warrior." Silverleaf said.
Sunstripe? She had never heard that name before, when Cinnamon had told her everyone in RiverClan. "Whos Sunstripe?" Cloudpaw asked without thinking.
It was Luridwind who answered. "Sunstripe is Dawnpaw's mother. She… Uh… she died. She died giving birth to her and her brothers'."
Another cliff hanger! I'm introducing a few other of you guys' OCs in chapter five, dont worry! =D
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ill see you soon!
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~Sundrop
