OMG OMG OMG! AHHHH! 41 REVIEWS! YOU GUYS ARE THE MOST AWESOMEAMAZINGBESTGREATFABLOULOUS PEOPLE EVER! So... I have calmed down, lol.
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Jaysong: That's AWESOME! It's not bad at all! Annnnnnnnnnnnnnd! You rock!
Dawn: Seriously, I LOVE your replies!
Willowdream of ForestClan: Eh, It wasn't my best. I was so tired because my cat (Geez Cinderheart, get off htkjhwegrhjwg the keyboard!) was mewing the WHOLE TIME!
Robinwing: Lolz, loved the story! Patchfur and Duskpool where her friends, am I right? And sure, I can probably fit in Gingerclaw.
Luckystar9854: uh JJ, I asked for a mini story...
Also, yeah, I named my cat after my favorite warrior characters: The smallest gray she-cat is Cinderheart, The silver tabby tom is Jayfeather, A big golden tom is Lionblaze, and the ginger tabby with a white paw is Squirrelflight. Yeah, weird huh? They look exactly a like! Also, shoot out to West, Kyara (My sis) and Luckystar9854 for the help with some of the names in this chapter! I forgot to ask you guys... You can still do it though!
This is what happened with Sunpaw at her first Gathering: Sunpaw raced her siblings to the border of ShdowClan. She stood panting while Dustpaw bragged about his victory.
"Shut up, you only won by a whisker." Sunpaw hissed. Goldenpaw gave her a nudge and jutted his head to the opposite end of the forest.
She starred wide-eyed as her crush, Hailpaw, padded up to her. "Breath taking, isn't it?" He said. "Beautiful like the cat next to me."
"You think I'm beautiful?" Sunpaw asked.
"Does WindClan catch rabbits?"
Dustpaw padded up to them. "Oh, get a room!" Dustpaw said. "Now let's go! It's our first Gathering!"
Sunpaw's sister, Hopepaw, took place beside Hailpaw and her litter-mates and they took a few steps forward. Sunpaw gasped at the sight of so many cats. A tall willow tree stood tall and proud in the centre, below it where small trees grew oddly, intertwined with each other looked like a cobweb or twigs. Cats where mauling over them, and three cats on individual branches. The leaders where chatting nonchalantly, while their Clans shared tongues.
"Krestalstar, Birchstar, and Pebblestar." Hailpaw whispered.
Sunpaw stood. Amazed and astonished at the sight before her.
AND ONTO THE STORY! (BTW this is a shorter chapter because there's a mini story at the end.)
Cloudpaw looked at the she-cat. "Your Splahheart?"
"Mother?" Honeypaw gawked at the she-cat. "Splashheart, your our mother?"
"I… No, Cinnamon is your mother." Splashheart said. Cloudpaw thought she caught a brief look of guilt on the ShadowClan cat's face. Or was that sadness?
Cloudpaw felt relieved. Splahheart was nice, but she didn't know what she would do if her mother was a ShadowClan cat.
"Oh, I-I'm sorry. I didn't..." Honeypaw mewed, shuffling her paws.
"Forget it." Splahheart said. She waved her tail at a silver tom from ShadowClan, calling him over. "This is Moongleam, my old apprentice." Splahheart told them. "Moongleam, why don't you show these two our ShadowClan apprentices."
Moongleam nodded, and drew something in the dirt and Splahhheart nodded. "Moongleam says he should get his sister to help, because he's mute." Splasheart intercepted. After the had spoken, a gray she-cat padded up to them.
"I heard what you said." said the she-cat. She was almost black, like coal. "I'm Coalbreeze, Moongleam's sister."
Cloudpaw looked at the two cats. They where opposites! Coalbreeze was coal black, with blue eyes, and Moongleam was moon silver with green eyes. Coalbreeze talked, but Moongleam couldn't. Coalbreeze had a fluffy tail, that was silver like her brother, and Moongleam had a sleek dark gray tail, like his sister.
"Let's go, then!" Honeypaw mewed. Coalbreeze led the way with Moongleam on her tail. They approached four cats, two where tussling, one was rooting for the one called Chasingpaw, and one was licking her paws.
"Listen up! This is..." Coalbreeze drifted off, realizing she didn't know the RiverClan apprentices names'.
"I'm Cloudpaw, and this is my sister, Honeypaw." Cloudpaw offered.
"You heard them. Now be nice, or you'll clean the elders for ticks for a moon." Coalbreeze mewed. "Understood?"
"Understood." confirmed the apprentices as a choir.
Coalbreeze and Moongleam left, and the sandy yellow she-cat that was previously washing her paws, stepped up to them. "I'm Sandypaw." she introduced. "Nice to meet you."
A pine brown tabby tom pinned the smaller tom to the ground, and jumped in front of Cloudpaw, touching his nose to hers. "I'm Chasingpaw." he said, with a breath-taking grin. "Nice to meet you, Cloudpaw."
Cloudpaw felt herself get hot, and shank away from the tom, saying something really intelligent like; "Umm, yah.."
The tom who Chasingpaw had pinned got up, along with the black tom who was rooting. The black tom reached Honeypaw and did an awkward kneel. "I'm Stormpaw." he said. Son of the great leader, Fogstar!"
The other tom, who was a gray and sandy ginger tabby, shook the dirt off his pelt. "I'm Ripplepaw. Chasingpaw and Stormpaw are my brothers." he said. He was... odd, like Honeypaw. His head was gray, but it gradually faded to sandy ginger with gray splotches.
Sandypaw rolled her eyes. "Here comes my mother, and your mother..." She yawned.
Cloudpaw turned around, Honeypaw at her side. But she was surprised to feel Chasingpaw press up against her, an scowl. A Pure white she-cat and a gray and white she-cat approached. The white and gray one scowled at Chasingpaw, Ripplepaw, and Stormpaw."Your father is going to start the Gathering, Nutstar and the rest of those ThunderClan squirrel-chaser's just arrived."
"Gentlebreeze, they're your kits. Have more respect." said the white she-cat. "But you, Sandypaw. You should be with the more settle and respectful warriors."
"Whiterose, please let her stay. It's not fun without Sandypaw." Stormpaw mewed. Cloudpaw had a feeling that he might have a crush on Sandypaw.
"I most-"
"I, Fogstar of ShadowClan, give the call to start this Gathering!"
YAY! MORE CLIFFIES!
So as I was saying, the mini parody/story: (MOSTLY PARODY!) Cloudpaw starred at the twoleg object in her paws. Honeypaw, Blazepaw, and Dawnpaw where there too.
"What is it?" asked Honeypaw.
"It says: French, a book about cats..." Cloudpaw answered. Dawnpaw flicked through a few pages and stopped, looking at Blazepaw confusedly. He looked over the page.
"Something something someth-, What is THIS?" he said, holding the book up and pointing with his tail. "It says Miaou. What in StarClan is miaou?!" Blazepaw exclaimed. "It's meowed, not mi-a-ou! Those stupid, fish-brained two-legs!"
*And of mini parody.*
I got that idea when JJ was reading a French book in class and it said miaou, not meow. It made me laugh anyways.
Can you guys help me with Warrior names? I need a few for the Clans! Thanks, I know you guys will help!
QUESTION OF THE DAY: What would your reaction to Chasingpaw be? And what do you think of Ripplepaw?
Until next time!
xoxo
~Sundrop
